AvNeil One shot: Fanfiction. The Day My Life Went to Hell. - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is amazing
I was able to imagine everything you wrote/described everything sooo well
Thanks for a great read
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such a beautifully written story this is 👏⭐️
Essence of Avni and neil's relationship is the trust for each other and how they are there for the other ..you captured it so well 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was beautiful. I don't know what more to say. I really wish they would have showed an episode with Neil sleeping in Avni's lap. It would have been a beautiful scene. I wish something like this had happened in the serial as well. Keep writing.

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