RiKara~Drabble: Kara Series #5- Troubled-Kara [#6 Updated] - Page 3

Originally posted by: magss24

Awesome poor rudy😭. But I feel bad for my omkie.. Poor baby had to suffer so much..

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

Thanks for commenting

RiKara also shrenal adorable

Tej is elder oberoi

Om and rudra are his sons also prinku is his daughter

Shakti younger

Shivaay is his son

Shivaay is eldest he takes care of business

Om middle son, not interested in business ... He is artist... TEJ WANTS om to take over business and become official heir instead of Shivay ... He also tries to create riff between brother's... He had affairs ... Because of all this Om hates his father

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

terrific update! well written! loved Ruddy and Gauri's bond! Gauri goes 2 Om's room! update soon

Originally posted by: ms.ObseSSeD

why did this one feel extra short?

never mind that, poor Om and i guess Gauri is finally understanding and learning a bit about Om.

I love how you make it seem very naturally flowing! how slowly Gauri is leaning towards Omkara.

Amazing update!

Dying and cant wait for Thursday to get here.

👏

Originally posted by: The_Inner_Voice

Lizzie

Thanks for raining in the Kara series... 😃

There was so little of Omkara in every writeup... I see the eyes buldging... wait I can explain... There was little of Om there...yet he was entirely there in every word every emotion, despite there were so many active characters.

With many active characters one can often miss out on the passive characters... Rudy and Gauri are the sailors, yet the ship they sail with to journeys unknown- is Omkara.

In the mere mention of his name by her, in the care of his little brother, in the concern of his elder bro... we live Omkara. That's what made this writing special for me.

Tera Na Hona jane,

kyun Hona Hi hai...

How do you guys do it?... write and make us feel the characters- in few chosen words that do complete justice to the thoughts behind the writeup. Just Puuurrrfect.

No wonder I ship Rikara, OmRu, RiRu and all of them individually.

Excuse my blabber I just got flipped into the sea by Maui ... He ain't letting me get onboard!!

Keep drabbling... Keep sailing... Towards new horizons... towards new words and worlds... And take us all Rikarians along 😆.. Bet your thinking Maui did the right thing up there 😆

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

Thank you

I don't really notice length, it is only about content... I see if matter is conveyed properly that's it...

Gauri will surely understand him completely

Originally posted by: ms.ObseSSeD

oh dont worry when i say its short, thats my brain telling me i was way inti it which is why is seemed short. you are right, its the content that matter more and i really appreciate it!