Sameer Naina FF: Ek naya rishta; Last Part on Pg 13 - Page 7

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Posted: 7 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

"Anger doesn't solve anything,builds nothing and destroys everything'

Happy that he could realise how his anger has already done a great damage.A few days of repentance is only the way to redemption.😊
Nice one dearie.Could feel the depth of emotions through the choice of words,dialogue and lines.👏Its needless to say how good you are at writing.
Thanks for the pm and waiting for the next update.😳


Thanks a lot for appreciating my writing...I am not very good at writing though...But I'm glad I could bring across the emotions to the readers...I will soon update the next part for sure😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: bawaswift

What a nice update...⭐️👏

Though Sameer was angry... he is not a bad guy... he has attitude.. but can hurt anyone,,,😳

Yeah,,, he got hurt,,, got punished.. but today he has got the most precious gift from Naina,,,, loved to see him realizing n feeling sorry for her,,

Felt so bad for poor Naina,,, she is not well... she wants to make things better.. but not getting any response from the arrogant...

Will be looking forward to see him apologising,,, n things get changed to some extent,,,!!

As i always say sis.,,, you are so good at writing the updates n shud get a chance to write a script... i do wish... 😳

Lovely narrative part.. good Naina's letter... n an Awesome piece of work,,, just keep the flow going...⭐️⭐️


God bless... !!!


Actually Sameer according to me is a nice person at heart...he is a spoilt brat...because of his mothers ignorance...but as a person himself...he is not a bad person...so he repents for doing all the damages with his anger...but he needs to make up for all that now and hopefully he would succeed in that... but Naina is going through a lot presently and hopefully she gets her share of happiness soon😃

Ohh you want me to write a script...really😲
No Bhaiya I can't do that😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: babita..

he enjoyed the party but inside his heart he was desperately waiting for the next day so that he could say sorry to her.

Here is what everyone wishes to see him, thinking of her !
Very beautiful and emotional update Manisha di 👏👏
I loved the part where Naina is shattered to see him not even looking at her gift ! Though it was a sad moment, it was too deep to see her stopping herself not to reach him and tell him, but forcing herself to wait. Such a lovely scene, i read it twice with almost moist eyes.

Thanks a lot for the beautiful description and your loving words...totally got what I was expecting from you...understanding the scenes in deep😃

Swati went to search for her and found her crying in isolation.

Heart wrenching, i wish one day Sameer comes to know this, and comes to a point what he feels for her and comes to know her feeling !
In love with your story Manisha di ❤️ I get a pure feeling of Naina and Sameer together in heart, though things are yet to be known to both of them !

Thanks for this wondermagical part di, i enjoyed, imagined and i lived a life of Naina and Sameer, with your write up. Can't thank you enough for your awesome effort 🤗
Will eagerly wait for the next, and Sameer saying sorry ?? 😳 Looks so terrible on his part 😉
I wish she gets cured and face him with her heart pouring love and he realises that too
Lovees to my Shoni di ❤️ Muaah 🤗


Thanks once again for the lovely review my dear...They both are meant for each other and they will be ending up together...Sameer saying sorry...you need to watch out for that😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Vampire2468

Awesomeee update ❤️especially the gift waiting for Sameer to say sorry to Naina


You'll love to read the next part😛
Thanks for liking it😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Really Manisha, you've excelled in this field of writing, that made me watching an episode through your update! Sacredly written with the point of views of Sameer and Naina! Lovely inner turmoil shown with them both thinking and observing each other, and one is now eager to meet her, where else, the other is determined to take a break from meeting him!

Phenomenal and justified, I must say👏

I liked how you have portrayed the usual day to day life language, within the bounds of home and school. The friends how they talk, the parents how they advise and feel fear. Awesomely brought in the cuteness leading to decisions, and love somewhere shown in the hearts of both!

What strike me, is Naina's gift to Sameer! She gifted him her precious possession, her mother's gift to her. This means everything here. In short, she has gifted him her only treasure, that one gives to those whom they find most important. Just Sameer has realised this and now will be finding a way to apologise. Surely he will do say sorry, but the big thing is when he is going to meet her next?

Her being ill, and taking leave, and he being waiting for her to come. This will lead to a beautiful closeness that Sameer will feel. This will lead him missing her, and... And I will be waiting for your take next Manisha 😳

Very well knitted the plot, and well defined the hatred coming out to be a fondness, with her only gesture.

Thanks sweetie, for the stupendous episode, will surely be waiting for the next.

Luv ya ❤️ 🤗


You both want me to become a script writer...really😆...thats not possible 😛
Bhabhi I'm glad you liked the idea of the gift and felt bad for Naina because of his behaviour...now he has to wait for her and to make her realise that he is actually sorry...I hope I can keep up to the expectations and I succeed in the next part as well😃

Loved to read you Bhabhi as always😃👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: misha.as

Just read it...

Part 1

Very very Nice Manisha Di... loved it... You change the whole plot itself... It's really very nice and lovely...
I loved this plot It's really very nice to imagine the whole OS, I feel it's refreshing... sweet and Smiple plot...


Yeah I tried to change the plot and I'm glad to know that you liked the changed plot...I always to keep it simple and hopefully it connects to the readers😃👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: misha.as


Part 2


In this OS I am little sad of Naina... Sammer me usse maff nhi kiya... And birthday is coming now... I just hope wo Sameer ko mana le in next part... Going to read last one.. but I feel nice being late here... sorry... mujhe jayda wait nhi karna paregega... that's why I am little happy...😆
Will read next part soon...


I hope that you like the next part also...Sameer ka birthday is going to change the equations between them😆
waiting for your comment on the next aprt as well😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Very nice part..

Feeling bad for naina.


But if she gave such a precious gift then she should have taken it back when it was left unattended in the canteen..


Thanks dear...but how could she take it back...just imagine what she must have gone through on seeing that gift left there...her emotional outburst could not allow her to do that and thats what i tried to present here😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Gaby09

lovely yaar...plz update soon


Thanks dear...surely will be updating soon😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#70
Part 4

All through the night Sameer kept on recollecting their interactions and those instances when he had been punished because of her...but the way she helped Nanu in times of need...he couldn't ignore that. He felt so sorry for misbehaving with her and now the gift...Naina's thoughts made him restless and he passed his night in turning around in the bed only. The next morning he woke up early and got ready to go to his school. Nanu was surprised to see him up so early and understood that today why he wanted to go to school this early. Sameer was dropped to school by Munshiji as his bike needed repair and he was desperately waiting for Naina to come today.

The students entered the class one by one but Naina was nowhere to be seen. Everyone kept asking him about his injuries but he avoided answering any of them as his entire attention was towards the entrance to the class. As usual Munna and Pandit entered late and when they saw him staring towards the door, they asked him the reason for doing so while they were already in the class. He told them about the gift and the note she gave him in her card and that he wanted to say sorry to her. both of them laughed out on hearing this and wondered why that Behenji Naina became so important for him suddenly. He asked them not to call her Behenji as she was not one...she is just a bit introvert type of girl and they better not tease him anymore. She had helped his Nanu and she had the courage to gift him her most precious possession belonging to her mother...she is a good girl by heart and he was very sure about it. Both of them were sorry for their behaviour but were surprised that why today that Padaku Naina...oh sorry...that sanskari Naina hasn't turned up yet as daily she was so early to scool?

The teacher entered the class and they couldn't continue with their conversation. But Sameer decided to ask swati after the class regarding her whereabouts. As soon as the class got over, he ran upto Swati and sat on the seat next to her. Swati blushed on seeing him sit so close to her but somehow controlled her emotions. He asked her about Naina's absence from the school and she told that she had no idea whatsoever but might be she isn't keeping well as she had fever the previous day. The news of her bad health made him further guilty as he realised that he had been so unreasonable with her. She wasn't well but still she made it a point to bring a present for his birthday and what he did with her? he became so upset with himself and couldn't concentrate on his class today. he didn't have his lunch also properly in canteen and his friends were shocked to see him so restless and that too for Naina...whom he hated initially...Munna had a passing thought in his mind that somewhere in his heart Sameer has started to develop a soft corner for Naina. They advised him that if he really wants to help her out, he should take good notes in the class and give them to her while she is absent from school. This way he will be able to divert his mind and also the notes will be helpful both for him and Naina. Although he found this a tough task but decided to do that...maybe because of this only she forgives him for his behaviour towards her. He took down the notes in the remaining classes properly and felt a sense of satisfaction after doing this. He just prayed that she gets well soon and he can soon say sorry to her.

At home Naina was quietly lying in the bed and her memories of Sameer's birthday and his behaviour brought tears to her eyes. Chachiji came to give her medicine and found her eyes swollen. She asked the reason for doing so but Naina didn't say anything...she just hugged her and started crying even more. Bela chachi became worried to see her crying like this...she kept on asking but Naina continued to cry. Preeti also came there and she too tried to calm her down but all their attempts failed. Chachi asked Preeti to call Chachaji and she went and called him. All of them knew that no-one understood her more than him and that she shared most of her feelings with him. He came and sat close to her and asked her what had happened?

After many repeated attempts Naina opened up and told him that she was missing her Mom badly today...she was feeling as if she is absolutely alone in this entire world...and she continued to cry. Chachi felt very upset to know that and told her that she is just like her mother...what if her own mother isn't there with her...everyone is there for her...her Chacha Chachi...Preeti...everyone... Chachaji told Bela that its because of her illness that she is feeling like this and this happens when a child is ill...so she need not worry. He tried to calm her down with his words and asked her whether she'll like to have jalebi today? He knew that Jalebi is her favorite and she won't refuse this proposal. He also said that he knew her Chachi would have given her many tasteless things to eat considering that she is unwell but after eating her favourite jalebi her mood and her taste...all will be absolutely fine. As expected Naina had a smile on her face on hearing about jalebi and she agreed to have it. Chachaji gave some money to Preeti and asked her to get Jalebi from the market.

Preeti went to the market to bring jalebi where Sameer was roaming around with his friends. They saw Preeti buying jalebi and Sameer decided to talk to her and enquire about Naina's health.

Sameer: Preeti tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Preeti: Madhuri Dixit ke baal kaat rahi hu...tum bhi na...dekh nahi sakte jalebi khareed rahi hu...

Munna and pandit burst out smiling on hearing this but when Sameer gave them a stare...they stopped laughing.

Sameer: wo main poochna chahta tha ki Naina ki tabiyat kaisi hai?

Preeti: uski tabiyat kharab hai...bukhaar hai aaj bhi...main uske liye hi to yeh jalebi lekar ja rahi hu...

Sameer: kya...jalebi uske liye...uski tabiyat kharab hai aur tum use jalebi khilaogi? Isse to uski tabiyat aur kharab ho jayegi...

Preeti: tum use kitne time se jaante ho...main use bachpan se jaanti hu...yeh jalebi uske liye dawai ka kaam karegi... uski tabiyat aur uska mood ekdum theek ho jayega...

Sameer: uska mood kharab hai kya?

Preeti: haan uska mood na bahut kharab hai...apni Mummy ko bahut miss kar rahi hai...bahut ro rahi thi...khair chhodo...mujhe jaana hai der ho rahi hai...tumhari wajah se kitna time waste ho gaya...

Preeti left from there and Sameer became anxious to know that Naina cried a lot and she was missing her Mom a lot...he felt so guilty for putting her in such a situation...he left from there along with his friends and despite their repeated attempts to normalise his mood...he didn't feel like taking part in their pranks today. he decided that he would go and meet her at her home at night. He will definitely say sorry to her and would make sure that she is no more depressed and she gets well soon.


Hope you all like it...😊

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