Sameer Naina FF: Ek naya rishta; Last Part on Pg 13 - Page 6

The turmoil of Sameer and Naina, is well portrayed Manisha 👏

Awesomeee update ❤️especially the gift waiting for Sameer to say sorry to Naina

First I want to say Sorry Di... I missed this all...
Will read all parts soon... I need some time to read all...

Really Manisha, you've excelled in this field of writing, that made me watching an episode through your update! Sacredly written with the point of views of Sameer and Naina! Lovely inner turmoil shown with them both thinking and observing each other, and one is now eager to meet her, where else, the other is determined to take a break from meeting him!

Phenomenal and justified, I must say👏

I liked how you have portrayed the usual day to day life language, within the bounds of home and school. The friends how they talk, the parents how they advise and feel fear. Awesomely brought in the cuteness leading to decisions, and love somewhere shown in the hearts of both!

What strike me, is Naina's gift to Sameer! She gifted him her precious possession, her mother's gift to her. This means everything here. In short, she has gifted him her only treasure, that one gives to those whom they find most important. Just Sameer has realised this and now will be finding a way to apologise. Surely he will do say sorry, but the big thing is when he is going to meet her next?

Her being ill, and taking leave, and he being waiting for her to come. This will lead to a beautiful closeness that Sameer will feel. This will lead him missing her, and... And I will be waiting for your take next Manisha 😳

Very well knitted the plot, and well defined the hatred coming out to be a fondness, with her only gesture.

Thanks sweetie, for the stupendous episode, will surely be waiting for the next.

Luv ya ❤️ 🤗

Just read it...

Part 1

Very very Nice Manisha Di... loved it... You change the whole plot itself... It's really very nice and lovely...
I loved this plot It's really very nice to imagine the whole OS, I feel it's refreshing... sweet and Smiple plot...

Part 2


In this OS I am little sad of Naina... Sammer me usse maff nhi kiya... And birthday is coming now... I just hope wo Sameer ko mana le in next part... Going to read last one.. but I feel nice being late here... sorry... mujhe jayda wait nhi karna paregega... that's why I am little happy...😆
Will read next part soon...

Very nice part..

Originally posted by: queenfaerie25

love your story! please continue writing it :D you are doing amazing

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Even I felt bad reading Naina's feelings

But I'm again excited bcz Sameer will now say sorry to Naina

Yayyy

Originally posted by: NIDA.ISHRAFAN

Nice attempt...

Specially da gift..