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Posted: 7 years ago
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I take time to understand high hindi words but yet the beauty of this did was not lost on me. It fits perfectly with the undercurrents in this chakravyuh. Brilliantly written too.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arshi67

M, beautiful lines that bring out the essence of the show. You, my dear, are seriously talented <3

Iss chakravyu ki girah mein ulajhti ja rahi hoon befikri se

Hai pyaare dost yahan meri ungli pakad saath raah chalne

Iss chakrayu ki barikii aur nazukii sawaarte sajaate hai woh

Samajhte hai dard woh uss lahu ka bhi aur uss neer ka bhi



Thank you Ruchi! 🤗
This is such an adorable, heart warming and uplifting poem. I loved it to bits! ❤️

Kuch baat hui, phir dost baney
Fasaaney suney aur kahani kahi
Zindagi toh yoon bhi guzar rahi thi
Par aisi bhi thi kuch khaas nahi...




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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dreamer-89

A beautiful summary to the show that lives upto its name, every character involved and intertwined with each other. Some are playing to win at the cost of others, some are trying to win at their own merits but the aim for both is winning.
But little do they realise life is not only about winning, it's about standing up standing tall long after the battle is over. Each to his own strategy, may the best win. Even those who wants no part in the chakravyuh are forced to be part of it, some will find friends along the way some will find enemies who they thought to be their own.

Life is an unknown maze where we humans are on a journey, sometimes shedding tears sometimes shedding blood but we move forward conquering the battle with love and justice. May the best win in this chakravyuh 😳

M this is a fabulous Ode to RKC 👏


Thank you Benna!
What a wonderful summary you have written for the poem Benna!
You made me read my poem again with new meanings. 👏
Benna, every time you write something, you make me understand the characters and story a little more.

Chakravyuh ki kahani, suni Benna ki zubaani
Samajh aai kuch aur, ye zindagi ki kahaani

Rishton ka taana-baana, likhti hai lafzon mein
Padhney par lagta hai, jaise Kalam ho dil mein

Ye khoobsoorat dosti hai, tumhare dil ki alfaazon se
Apne lekhni ka jadoo yoon hi barkaraar rakhna...

❤️


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: NavyaKavya30

Wow Mimosa Great ! Marvellous ! Fantastic ! Awesome creativity . Each and every word beautifully suits the show.


Thanks a lot Navya! 😃
You never fail to encourage me with you kind words. Glad that you liked it.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Deeksha...

Awesome post👏👏

Reading your post I remembered Mahabharat's title song
Hein katha sagram ki
Vishwa ki kalyan ki

Something like that


Thank you so much Deeksha.😃

We can never forget that epic show, Mahahbharat...brings back the memories of my younger years...I still remember its fabulous title song.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ecrivain.

M 🤗



An expressive and articulate ode to the swinging dynamics that have been very vividly juxtaposed in the show, discernibly emphasising on the battle lines that have been drawn, conscripting the warriors, both for and against the virtuous and exemplary.

And what is astounding, is how the law-abiding debonair's form the bigoted group that upholds prejudices, while the unfazed avenger, stands righteous and undeterred.

A fantastic piece, M, very eloquent and powerful.


Thank you so much dear! 🤗

Ecrivain, I am in awe of your writing.
It feels so good to receive such wonderfully written comments. Thanks for your appreciation and encouragement. It inspires me to write more.

Shukriya hausla afzaai ka
Meri nazm aur teri daad ka
Ye toh kuch lafz thay, jo kaagaz par utar gaye
Koi paarkhi tha inn lakeeron ka...

❤️


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Bhavi

👏 M

This is fantabulous.

Andhi mein simte hain rishton ke kai bharam
Samajne ke liye kiya har rishten ne tashan

Lakshya hain bas itna dikhaye kya rishtan apna ye rang
Chakravyuh mein fasa jab har rishta yaha hardam


Bhavi! Thank you so much! 😳

This is so beautiful!

Chakravyuh ki paheli hai, ajeebo-gareeb
Laa raha hai ye, na jaaney kitno ko kareeb

Doston ki toli, chal padi hai suljhaaney
Kab samajh mein aayega, ye toh Rab hi jaaney...

❤️




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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruthiravi

I loved the line Samay will show everyone their place. It is very true. In this world everyone has their place which is decided by their actions and actions alone. If you the places are not right, time will ensure it brings the right person at the right place.


Thanks a lot Shruthi. Means a lot! 😊

You are right, Samay is most powerful of all. No one who has gone against time, has ever won in this battle of life.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikki.171


I take time to understand high hindi words but yet the beauty of this did was not lost on me. It fits perfectly with the undercurrents in this chakravyuh. Brilliantly written too.


Thank you so much for your appreciation Nikki. It means a lot. 😃

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