Rishton Ka Chakravyuh....

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Rishton Ka Chakravyuh...



Rishton ka Chakravyuh hai ye, bhedna hai agamya

Iss rishton ke bhanwar mein, sab dhoondhtey hain apna lakshya


Apne hue paraye, aur paraye hue apne

Samajhne mein lag jayega na jaane kitna samay


Ek aandhi chalegi, aur ek toofan aayega

Samay sabko apna apna sthaan dikhayega


Apne karma ki sabko chukani padegi paai paai

Apni karni ki sabko karni padegi bharpaai


Saarthi hai koi, toh hai koi ranveer

Bahega lahoo, aur bahega kahin neer


Jeevan ka sangharsh hai ye, Mahabharath hai

Issey prithvi ka har praani avagat hai


Dharma aur karma karne waalon ki hi jaijaikaar hai

Vijayee hga woh jo satya ke saath hai...


Bhedna= To penetrate

Agamya= impassable/impenetrable

Bhanwar=whirlpool

Lakshya= Aim/Target

Paraye=others

Aandhi=storm

Toofan=typhoon

Sthaan=place

Chukani=to pay

paai-paai=each penny

Karni=deeds

Bharpaai=to pay/replace

Saarthi=Charioteer/one who drives Chariot (Shri Krishna in Mahabhrat)

Ranveer=battle hero

Lahoo= blood

Neer=water (tears)

Sangharsh=struggle

Prithvi=Earth

Praani=human being

Avagat=aware


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Posted: 7 years ago
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M, beautiful lines that bring out the essence of the show. You, my dear, are seriously talented <3

Iss chakravyu ki girah mein ulajhti ja rahi hoon befikri se

Hai pyaare dost yahan meri ungli pakad saath raah chalne

Iss chakrayu ki barikii aur nazukii sawaarte sajaate hai woh

Samajhte hai dard woh uss lahu ka bhi aur uss neer ka bhi


Edited by Arshi67 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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A beautiful summary to the show that lives upto its name, every character involved and intertwined with each other. Some are playing to win at the cost of others, some are trying to win at their own merits but the aim for both is winning.
But little do they realise life is not only about winning, it's about standing up standing tall long after the battle is over. Each to his own strategy, may the best win. Even those who wants no part in the chakravyuh are forced to be part of it, some will find friends along the way some will find enemies who they thought to be their own.

Life is an unknown maze where we humans are on a journey, sometimes shedding tears sometimes shedding blood but we move forward conquering the battle with love and justice. May the best win in this chakravyuh 😳

M this is a fabulous Ode to RKC šŸ‘
Edited by Dreamer-89 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow Mimosa Great ! Marvellous ! Fantastic ! Awesome creativity . Each and every word beautifully suits the show.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome postšŸ‘šŸ‘
Reading your post I remembered Mahabharat's title song
Hein katha sagram ki
Vishwa ki kalyan ki

Something like that
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Posted: 7 years ago
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M šŸ¤—


An expressive and articulate ode to the swinging dynamics that have been very vividly juxtaposed in the show, discernibly emphasising on the battle lines that have been drawn, conscripting the warriors, both for and against the virtuous and exemplary.

And what is astounding, is how the law-abiding debonair's form the bigoted group that upholds prejudices, while the unfazed avenger, stands righteous and undeterred.

A fantastic piece, M, very eloquent and powerful.
Edited by Ecrivain. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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šŸ‘ M
This is fantabulous.

Andhi mein simte hain rishton ke kai bharam
Samajne ke liye kiya har rishten ne tashan

Lakshya hain bas itna dikhaye kya rishtan apna ye rang
Chakravyuh mein fasa jab har rishta yaha hardam
Edited by -Bhavi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I loved the line Samay will show everyone their place. It is very true. In this world everyone has their place which is decided by their actions and actions alone. If you the places are not right, time will ensure it brings the right person at the right place.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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M, Ruchi, Bhavi ā¤ļø you guys are too good at this!! May the show keep up what it's doing so there'll be more of these beauties.

Ecri you too 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Apologies to all my lovely friends here, for late replies. šŸ¤—
I see so many beautiful posts here. ā¤ļø

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