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ChitraGS

@ChitraGS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#481

Originally posted by: mahin123
dear Chitra whatever you're planning to write will be mind blowing, i am sure of that. you are a very talented writer and will do the full justice to the story. waiting patiently and eagerly. take care a d plz update when you're ready

Oh Mahin thank u so much meri jaan

I am really flattered that you consider me a talented writer, Yes i am hoping to do full justice to both the stories, will PM u when i update, this one which shud b shortly.

As of the other one, i will be releasing the entire story in one go, that shud take a lil while IMO

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ChitraGS

@ChitraGS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#482

THE STORY IS NOW AVAILABLE ON MY WATTPAD ACCOUNT, ON THE LINK BELOW

https://my.w.tt/UiNb/jJ0GHOJujK

Edited by ChitraGS - 7 years ago

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ChitraGS

@ChitraGS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#483

THE STORY IS NOW AVAILABLE ON MY WATTPAD ACCOUNT, ON THE LINK BELOW

https://my.w.tt/UiNb/jJ0GHOJujK

Edited by ChitraGS - 7 years ago

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ChitraGS

@ChitraGS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#484

THE STORY IS NOW AVAILABLE ON MY WATTPAD ACCOUNT, ON THE LINK BELOW

https://my.w.tt/UiNb/jJ0GHOJujK

Hello everyone, I hope you liked this update. please do leave a comment. TBH there are a few bits i am not happy with, but i guess i like to over analyse everything i write HAHA

Well most of the update is for Priya, who had made a request a few days ago, regarding Advay caring for Chadnini. So Pri my princess i hope you liked it.

WRT to the discussion abt children, well i really didnt want to bring it up. But my dear friend Mahim couldnt stop wishing for her wish to come true. So i had to address this matter so Mahim knows she will have to wait for her wish to come true HAHA 😆

So thats it from me, tho the next update is ready, i will be posting it in a couple of days wont take as long as this one has,

this update is more like a casual convo between a couple but yet a lot of discussion has happened. I hope you like my style of casual story telling, i just feel it shuld flow in a natural way instead of feeling forced. Although this chapter was a challenge as i was trying to join too many events that happen over a couple of days.

So do leave a comment and let me know what y think of it. and thanks a lot again to all of you who have read my FF so far and said such kind words.

Edited by ChitraGS - 7 years ago

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2filmy

@2filmy

Trailblazer

Posted: 8 years ago

#485

wow an update will come soon
I am so happy now

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Lubana

@ASRkiMoonlight

Inactive

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Posted: 8 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: ChitraGS

Hi ASR KI MOONLIGHT

yeh i will be updating shortly will PM u for sure,

That'll be great

Thanks

Call me lubs please😆

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2filmy

@2filmy

Trailblazer

Posted: 8 years ago

#487

this thread will be super active soon

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sudhalata1

@sudhalata1

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#488

Was waiting for the update Chitra. Thanks for the beautiful update

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saxena_hgt

@saxena_hgt

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#489

1st all worth d wait wala update tha.. don't worry about flow of story, to me it seems perfectly in sync..i loved these casual talks, coz these r the things which make a couple more in sync with each other.. oh how i wish that v got to see these types of panicked chandani & caring wala advay scenes, but koi nai writers like u r doing much more than wat can b shown... Carry on like this.. cheers.. & i must say your advay is making many blunders or say giving many subtle signs to chandani that he his her dev.. but i alwayz thought that since chandani can't ever think in her worst nightmare that dev can hate him so much, so thatswhy she can never think on d lines of advay is dev..& thatswhy she ignore so many similarities..whats your take on that??

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Lubana

@ASRkiMoonlight

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#490

Unres

Phew..That was long

Absoflippinlutely amazing and heavenly!

Starting on a lighter note, you brought in much needed intensity by taking us all to an altogether different high of an emotional rollercoaster ride and ending it on a sensuous heady feeling kinda note

Words fail when I even begin to describe the mastery with which it was written

You captured the moments as it came not once letting go of the essence of the scenes which make it so flawlessly natural

The small details in those convos never make you realize you are reading a story but instead makes u feel like you are actually living it

This may not be the first time but I would always tell you that you are a terrific writer!

I couldn't help myself but blush, shed a tear here and there, stand or bawl my eyes out during that short period from start to end

One of the best write ups I've read in ages

Waiting for such killer updates in future👏

Edited by ASRkiMoonlight - 8 years ago