FS-||Saath Hain, Toh Baat Hai|| Shot 2 up on pg 8.(banner up pg 1) - Page 6

Created

Last reply

Replies

63

Views

8.6k

Users

22

Likes

250

Frequent Posters

Khidki thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: bworm

Lovely story. Always the one with unique hatke ideas.


😛😆

Thanks⭐️
Khidki thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago
#52



Shot 2 - Scars of the Past

"Bhaiya! came down a running Prinku. She looked at each one of the three and couldn't be happier. They had all made it, together..!

She hugged Shivaay who hugged her back smiling. She looked like a wonderful woman, much more gorgeous in her ways. Gone was that nervous timid girl and a strong confident woman. None but the ACP could make her what she was today. He loved her, pampered her, cared for her, no doubt, but he was different in his ways. While the brothers always stood as her protectors, and fought all her battles, her man, taught her the art of fighting it all, all by herself, while being her shield and her partner in it all.

The brothers looked at her proudly. She quickly hugged Rudra and then Omkara.

"Tu theek hain naa? Omkara asked, and she nodded smiling reassuring him.

"I m ver happy, ki aap sab yahan hai...Iss baar ki Diwali Dhoom Dhaam se manayenge! She spoke excitedly greeting her brothers' wives.

"Aww..Bhaiya ye ek dum aapke jaise dikhta hai! she said taking the little boy carefully in her arms.

Ansh slapped her face playfully, his eyes shining with mischief. "Ek dum Baagad Bille pe gaya hai! exclaimed Anika holding the boy's arms looking towards her husband with darting eyes. He folded his hands looking away pretending to have not heard the bit as a roar of laughter filled the room.

Shivaay secretly glared at his wife, letting her know that he would surely get back at her for it.

"I m going to sue you " came a voice from the east door, all turned to look at the door. A healthy young Sardaar was running behind a man who entered the Oberoi Mansion, followed by Khanna's security team.

"What the hell is happening? shouted Shivaay frustrated. "Khanna! Khanna! rang his shrill voice. No response.

"You chor!screamed the sardaar. Rudra twitched up an eyebrow and held on to daadi, the person being chased could be a possible dangerous man.

"Chor! echoed Gauri and Anika's voice and at once they followed the trail at once. Leaving their husbands face-palming their faces.

"Khanna! screamed Shivaay.

In jogged Khanna, "Yes.Sir. he saluted, standing before Shivaay.

"Jao...! Catch them, they ran up!

Khanna looked up "Kaun Sir?

Shivaay irritated-"Michael Jackson!

"Wo toh kab ke upar chale gaye sir! "

"Khanna...that Sardaar man and the chor. You know what let it be. Tumhe baad mein dekhunga...security ka mazaak bana rakha hai! He hurriedly ran towards the stairs when he saw the Obahus dragging the thief down followed by the Sardaar.

"Wah BhabhiS cheered Rudra only to get glares from his annoyed brothers.

"Not bad Sardaarji! spoke Rudra hitting the Sardaar's back.

"Ye humaare garh se chori karke jaa raha thaa! gauri looked at him angrily.

Daadi looked shocked and turned to the pleading thief. Khanna at once held him and removed the cloth covering his face.It turned out to be one of the servants. Shivaay scolded Khanna and asked him to immediately check all the security footages and do a thorough background check on the servants.

"Thank You Sardaarji spoke Daadi expressing her relief as the antique items were saved from robbery.

"Arey Daadi its me Saumya!

"Saumya! the others exclaimed in surprise.

"Sumo! exclaimed a dumbfounded Rudra.

"yes.Mr. Dumbell Oberoi!

Rudra - "Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Daadi -"Maine bulaya thaa isse! Diwali hai.Lekin puttar tu aise.? She questioned Saumya.

Saumya's mother had passed away two years back and now her only family was the Oberois. She stayed in the same apartment as Rudra, in fact they stayed next door. They still maintained the friendship, which had only got stronger when she had returned from Australia, and learnt about the Oberois. She frequently met the family members. Also, Shivaay and Omkara individually. She would speak about them to Rudra and vice versa just like Anika and Gauri in hope that one day they would forget the past and get back to being what they once were.

The Oberois laughed heartily listening to the banter of Rudra and Saumya, as Saumya narrated why she was in the disguise, something about a certain mission she was on.

Suddenly the cheerful atmosphere died down and tension was back in the atmosphere as the senior Oberois entered. Their faces lit up the moment they saw the young crowd in the house.

"Omkara, Rudra! exclaimed Jaanvi in happiness. Only to see her sons looking away from her, in different directions. Tej gently put his arm around her as she saw him in tears.

"Shivaay! called out Pinky. "Anika!

Anika smiled while Shivaay turned his face away. The elder men smiled as their daughter in laws bent down to take their blessings whole their sons looked away anger evidently rising in their eyes.

Saumya also greeted the elders, while Rudra frowned.

A sudden silence filled the Mansion.

"Anika smiled Pinky hugging her, "Shivaay...aaj bhi baat nahi karega? she spoke painfully. Shivaay simply walked ahead and took blessings from the others.

Little Ansh ran to his father in small steps and bent with him. As the others smiled at the sight.

He stood aside not looking in Pinky's direction. Pinky had tears in eyes as Anika stood by her. Anika had a big heart she had taken time but had slowly forgiven Pinky after her continuous genuine apologies. Whenever Anika came to the Oberoi mansion with Shivaay, Pinky would make it a point to express her guilt and regret and apologise to her. Anika could not see it longer than a few months after Ansh's birth and she forgave the woman who gave birth to her husband. Initially it had cause a rift between Anika and Shivaay. Shivaay dint like Anika speaking to her and asking him to forget her as well. The topic still caused arguments between them, just like last night!

Ansh tilted his head looking up at his father, Papa, Daadi he said pointing to her. Shivaay looked down to him, releasing the hand which held the little boy's shoulder, wondering what he was trying to say. The little boy trotted to Pinky and touched her feet,Paapa Daadi his voice pitched, reminding shivaay that he had forgotten to take Daadi's blessings.

Shivaay sighed looking shocked. Pinky broke down and kneeled to the boy's height taking him in a delicate hug. She sobbed bitterly. Everyone's eyes moistened at the vulnerable sight.

Omkara and Rudra stole glances at their mother, who was crying silently. Their hearts pained.

"Excuse me. Shivaay walked out, followed by Anika.

******

"Shivaay she called out to him, as she saw him sit by the pool, the room left dark.

"Maaf kar dijiye naa she said slipping beside him.

"Anika please. Not again. He said freeing his arm, she had just held.

"Toh kya aap aise humesha rahenge. Kyun de rahe hain itna dard apne aap ko aur apno ko? Sab iss sab se khush nahi hai, lekin koi apni tadi chodne ko tayaar hi nahi hai, iss tadi ka koi matlab nahi hai. Aapne Rudra aur Omkara ko dehka...unki aakhein..


"Maine roka thaa unhe he spoke his gaze fixed at the distant wall.

"Aur Mrs.Pinky Singh Oberoi ko main chaah kar bhi maaf nahi kar sakta, yahan chot di hain unhe mujhe he said pointing to his heart.



"Marham lagaane ka mauka toh dijiye!

His anger rised. He turned to face her, "So that she repeats what she does.

"She won't whispered Anika.

"How can you Anika, unne tumhe itna dard diya ...humaare rishtey ko...

"She gave me you! Anika said feebly looking at him.Wo aapki Maa hai, galti sabse hoti hain unse bhi hui! Kal agar main Ansh ke saath wahi karti hoon tph aap ansh ko mujh se dhoor kardenge? she spoke looking at him in the eye.

"Anika! he screamed.

"Tum Ansh ki khushi kabhi nahi cheen sakti ho,... yaar tum doosro ke liye apni khushi kurbaan kar sakti ho magar kisi ki khushi cheen nahi sakti ho! he spoke cupping her face.

She held his hand,Agar maine aisa kiya toh?

"I don't get it Anika! Tum unki side le rahi ho, unke liye apne aap ko bura...You know what its pointless talking to you...I mean...tum sapne mein bhi aisa nahi kar sakti ho,,,tum ma-Maa ho uski! he spoke angrily, frustrated.


"Shivaay, she said holding both his hands, "agar main kal koi ...mujhse galti ho gayi...toh aap mujhe maafi kaa mauka bhi nahi denge?


He got up to leave when Anika held his hand.


"Bataiye naa Shivaay?


"Anika tum unke liye aaj humaare rishtey ko... He spoke painfully.


"Theek hai, phir unke naa hone hone se aapko koi faraq nahi padta...kal wo mar..


"Anika! he shouted raising his hand in air.


She smiled. Holding his hand between hers she spoke with tears in her eyes, Don't make it too late, Shivaay, kal kisi ne nahi dehka, aapka jawaab aapke paas hai, aur mat dard dijiye, apne aapko aur unko!she gently kissed his hands. She walked away wiping her tears. For once she wasn't angry or sad. She knew he could never hurt her in anyway.

******

"Omkara Ji, ye lijiye thanda thanda paani spoke his wife cheerfully putting the jug on the table as he caressed his old canvas stand.

He turned to her smiling. Missed me?

She grinned,Bilkul nahi she played along. He wrapped his arms around her waist. Really?

She giggled and nodded in a yes. He pecked her cheeks. are you sure? he dragged the last word to sound like her.

She nodded in a yes once again, hiding her smile. He pulled her even closer.

"Om!

He smiled, as she called him with that name.

"Miss nahi kiya? he spoke making a puppy face.

She made a cute sympathy face, "Thoda saa

He knotted his brow measuring the distance between his thumb and finger.Thoda Saa?

She nodded. He jerked her closer, and leaned down and rubbed his stubble against her soft cheeks. "Jhoothi!

She smiled shyly, hugging him. I missed you ...alot!

A sweet smile curved up on his face and he hugged her back.

She broke the hug, "Aap ne?

"kya? he pretended to be confused.

"Miss kiya?

"nahi he stepped away casually.

She squeezed her eyes at him.jhooth bole kaua kaate! She went on her toes circling her arms around his neck.

He chuckled. "I love you! He softly kissed her forehead. "And...I missed you too. Seven days!

She smiled. He leaned closer, his lips inching towards her. Her cheeks flushed as she met his intense gaze.

Their eyes suddenly flew wide open as they heard cries. "Ansh! both exclaimed in unison turning towards the window, to see a panicked Prinku trying to pacify the boy. Om moved slightly away as Prinku entered.Bhai, bhaabhi, yeh chup hi nahi ho raha hai.

Gauri took Ansh in her arms and within a few minutes the boy was silent.

"kitnna ziddi hai yeh, anyways aap please iss ke saath rahiye, I will see the dinner arrangements.

"Apne mom-dad pe gaya hai! sighed Om aside.

Gauri and Prinku turned to him suspiciously, "aap ne kuch kaha

"no. Om shrugged his shoulders.

"Pata nahi Bhaiya aur Bhaujai ek doosre se baat kyun nahi kar rahe she said thoughtfully, looking worried. She glanced at Omkara through the corner of her eyes. He looked slightly worried as well. She rolled her eyes, why couldn't the brothers simply admit that no matter what deep down they still very much cared.

Gauri quickly handed the boy to Omkara asking him to take care, so that she could help Prinku. Omkara blinked looking at the boy, "Maine kaise?

"Ansh aap naa chote papa saath masti karo okay? spoke Gauri, to look at Omkara bewildered.

"What Okay? Not okay , maine kaise, mujhe nahi aata his voice trailed as the women simply left.

-------------------------------------------------------

P.S

Hope you all liked it.
Would love to read your feedback.

sosweetsumi thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#53
aww last part
poor om
haha little ansh is so cute
loved shivika talk
all of them together
please everything alright
BoonAndBane thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: annikaa


Thank You Poorvi😳
Arey nahi I slept for that 1 hr so I could write this in next 2-3 hrs😆 I'm terribly slow🥱
The flip is very much me😆 Maybe that's y i love that about Ishqbaaaz😆


Hahaha. You slept.😆😆
You are still faster than me.😳😳

Edited by Rainzz - 8 years ago
BoonAndBane thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
#55
Res 😆
Unres😊

I just loved it.⭐️⭐️
Finally, the ice between Pinky and Shivaay is going to break. 😊😊
Beautifully penned down.😳😳
Edited by Rainzz - 8 years ago
AparnaChinnu thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#56
awesome update yar...
Ansh is tooo cute yar...
shivika's conversation was too emotional
Blink_Cat thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#57
a really amazing update.
so shivaaz still angry with pinky, n ani ask him to forgive..
totally love when ansh say.. papa dadi... such a cute he is...
om has to pass his time with ansh... how... going to b amazing...
plz update soon...
Gurveen thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#58
Superb update
Om and Rudra are angry with their mother too
Anika is trying to make Shivay understand the importance of mother
Om Gauri ka romance is cute
Let's see how om will handle his nephew
Update soon please
farinaks thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
#59
Awesome nice update
I'm overwhelmed to see shivaay's trust on annika
Continue soon
Edited by farinaks - 8 years ago
bworm thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#60
This was awesome.
Sumo is back...🤗
Loved shivika and RiKara conversation.
Let's see what's next.

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".