Arshi ss: Tale of love by telephone

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Prologue -
Love never looses hope
He is a creative,innovative NID- Ahemdabad guy
She is a sensation. Her voice is like a nightingale
They fall in love without eye-contact
They talk,dy share everything
They forsee there love future
Destiny has something in dere love fate. Lets see what is dere in Love fate




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Prologue -Page 1
Part-1 below
Part-2 below
Part-3 page 2






Question come why my characters name is ABEER-KOYAL. well its a secret which will open after few update.







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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part-1
He was sitting in the corridor sound of anklets caught his attention he got curious n here SHE emerged through the lane of her classroom.

With black long open hairs,twinkling hazel brown eyes, her lips which was hving light pink lipgloss along with beautiful smile he dnt kn wt is more beautiful lips or smile.then his eyes goes towards earlier his attention seeker anklets he dnt understand whether anklets are beautiful or it is beautiful as it is on dt beauty beautiful legs.

In dis materialistic world he got Simple beauty

That day he was nt able to concentrate on his work.his roommate got confused wt happened to him suddenly as he was never like this before.bt he dnt say anything.

His thought keep revolving around dt simple beauty hazel brown eyes, her long black hairs ,her smile n his attention seeker beautiful anklets.he still did nt got his ans. Whether anklets were beautiful or it was beautiful because it was in her beautiful legs

Her anklets voice keep on ringing in his ears.After watching some change occur in him. Thinking abt her giving him pleasure

He set up his next days goal to find information abt dt simple beauty n goes to sleep bt it will nt be possible because of her


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Posted: 8 years ago
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The title of This ArShi fiction is intriguing and so is the prologue.
While the characterization is fairly new, it is exquisite as well.
I would certainly love to know how the story progresses and how ArShi find themselves entangled in an emotion called love.
Chapter 1, undoubtedly, was a good one and I'm eagerly awaiting the next one.

Regards
K
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part-2
Excuse me.. he said n she turned around to look who is calling her.

He just lost in those hazel eyes no words coming out frm his mouth.His mind was hving not any thought. For him time just stopped. He can easily spent his whole life in watching dos beautiful eyes. Dos eyes were hypnotising him.

Hi im
ABEER.. ABEER...
Tringgg...
Abeer u idiot ( throw his pillow on him) just stop ur dam Alarm clock i hate dis clock of ur Abeer u idiot get up . Abeer's frnd Anurag shouted . Anurag and Abeer were in same yr bt different department. As Abeer doing PG in Graphics n Anurag in Interior decoration. Dy live in Private boys hostel as dere clg do nt provide hostel for PG students.

Abeer saw towards the clock its 6 dnt u wnt to go clg abeer asked.

No i will come late my sleep is nt completed i slept late at night nw stop ur question n shooo... frm here n let me sleep he cover his head with his comforter

Abeer thought even i also slept late thinking all d time abt dt Anklet beauty. Bt wt to i cnt sleep like u buddy i hv imp goal today smile comes on Abeer lips n he goes to get ready for his clg.

After hving his breakfast abeer moves to go clg. Nid is just walking distance frm dere hostel. Just 15-20 mins it hardly takes.

Reaching d clg i-n place of searching here n dere in d whole clg let me go directly to dt place were yesterday i saw her. As clg is huge n max crowd is present so it will be easy to search her at dt place abeer thought n he directly moves towards his place his heartbeat increasing with d each passing second his excitement level was high today he will meet Anklet beauty or get some information abt her.

With a sweet smile on his lips he reached to dt place where he last saw her in bwt thinking wt is ur name Anklet beauty?
hw is your voice? Hopefully u will like me bt wt if u dnt like me dn he just stopped at d place sudden worry lines comes on his forehead n his confidence level little bit comes down bt taking long breath he motivate himself dnt worry abeer dnt worried she will like u n gathering all his courage he moved towards his destination were he could meet Anklet beauty.

Reaching his destination he sit on d corridor wall n take out his book to read
His eyes were moving frm classroom gate to his book bt his brain was totally present on d room gate. Keeping book in hands n acting dt he is reading it become little bit easy for him to sit dere . Otherwise any teacher can caught him in bwt if she comes out frm her class dn it will be huge mess.

Where are u Anklet beauty why ur nt coming out ? im waiting for u Anklet beauty. Wese Anklet beauty sound good abeer thought. He still dnt get his ans. Whether anklets were beautiful or it was beautiful because its on her legs. Thinking all time passes n 1st lecture completed

Abeer got excited nw she will come out for anywork n looking keenly at the gate crowd was passing frm dere which irritates abeer very much wt if Anklet beauty comes in bwt n goes frm dere were as he will nt be able to watch her then. He wnted to shouted on all so dt dy do nt disturb him bt it is nt possible he was just checking all dis dn teacher entered in d classroom. Abeer got little depressed.

His eyes were on gate dn abeer realises dt dere is someone who is watching him he moves towards dt direction n saw his classmate Karan standing dere.with crossing hands close to his chest n trying to watch to d book.

Abeer asked karan wt are u doing here n y ru seeing my book
Karan said answer for ur 1st ques. I was just passing here to get stationary bt wt ru doing here abeer?n raised his eyebrows.

Abeer thought y he is asking all dis is it necessary for him..

Ok ok dnt give me dt angry look of urs actually i just come to kn abt my frnds hidden talent. Karan said

Abeer asked wt sought of talent ru curious to kn u kn im very much talented n hv many hidden talent so abt wt ur asking.? N gives lopsided smile

Ya u hv many talents n ur new talent which just i came to kn dt u kn read book frm both up n down side of book. Karan asked

Abeer eyes goes towards d book he just closed d book giving angry look towards karan before karan started asking anymore question.

He moves towards his classroom after dt whole day he was nt able to see his Anklet beauty

After his clg get over he moves towards his hostel today his mood was off even his frnds Anu,Karan n Sumit all said. Bt what can he tell dm why he is sad today dy will surely laugh at him.

Reaching hostel he goes to take little nape as at nyt he was nt able to sleep fully because of Anklet beauty thought.

After dinner time he got up n goes to take it. After dinner abeer decided to study n cover dt subject whos lecture he was nt able to attend. So keeping all Anklet beauty thought aside he started studying as d exams were coming n scoring good in exams very much needed.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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i started reading thinking its arshi story...but ur hero's name is abeer ?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjs

i started reading thinking its arshi story...but ur hero's name is abeer ?




Well its a secret n u will get ur ans. after few updates so chill n enjoy story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part-3
Next day abeer was sitting with his frnd Anurag in d canteen. Anurag goes to take snacks n drink for dm in bwt he meet someone

Anu- hello madam hru? With a excited tone

Girl- oh hi im gud n wt abt u? With a smile. Someone frm distance watching her smile n twinkling eyes he dnt kn wt dy were talking abt bt he is worried with dere frndly behaviour towards each other n jealous too

Anu- where were u i hv nt seen u long u was outside of station kya? With a confusion n curiosity both

Girl- no no its nt like dt i was absent only yesterday otherwise im coming clg daily its u who hv nt notice me

Anu- Oops my fault

Girl- yea n she giggled ok anu i hv to my frnds r waiting for me she pointed towards grp of girls in some corner

Anu- ya ya go even my frnd is also waiting n he pointed towards abeer girl also take a look at a pointed side n saw tensed abeer.

At d otherside abeer thought hw anu kns anklet beauty is she is his gf no no anu never told me anything abt dis he never hides anything frm me might be she is his new crush his crush changes with a time to time oh just shut up abeer dnt jump on conclusion let ask anu abt dis thing oh god pls help me. Pls save my love story

When abeer was in thought mean while anu comes to dere table. Seeing abeer lost n worried look anu asked- wt happen dude why all of the sudden so much worried wt is d prob.

Abeer in his thought- its u idiot who is my prob who might become villan in my sweet love story

Composing himself abeer asked leave me u never told me u hv gf ? ( with a fingers cross pls say no anu pls no god i promise i will give u one apple let anu say no.)

Anu- oh dt no no she is nt my gf ( abeer become relax)

Abeer- then with a confused tone
n curious to kn

Anu- she is just a frnd nw hv snacks i hv to leave for my class

Abeer thought thank god dy r just frnd nw ur apple is final. Smile comes on his lips.

Abeer was getting impatient to talk anklet beauty without wasting time he sended her frnd req. With a hope dt she will soon accept his req n dy will start talking.

But fate has something else written in dere love journey

Its been 20 days anklet beauty nt accepted his req.

Nt getting disheartened he send her msgs without any break till she accepted his req.

Mean while he decided to gather some information abt her who will be d best dn his frnd cum roommate. 1stly anu become suspicious why abeer is asking abt her nt getting any ans. Abeer has to tell him abt his liking dn he told him all abt her to abeer frm dere abeer comes to kn dt she lives in private hostel where shreya one of abeer frnd also lived dis is the another sort positive information frm her he can take out wt anklet beauty think abt him . Anklet beauty was anu mother's frnds daughter n dy kn eachother since childhood

nw another tension comes ok for anu take her as a frnd wt abt her dos she also think abt him same or she likes him no no abeer dnt think like dt be positive bt dy kn each other since childhood soo...u and amit both also kn eachother since childhood do u hv any feelings shut up shut up im nt a gay he says dis line little loudly which is heared by anu

Anu- wt ur gay ( shocked tone) abeer just shoo shoo away frm me( goes 10 steps behind frm abeer) lisen im nt a dt kind of boy so dnt even think abt it oh god i hv to change dis room n even alert all boys dt abeer is a gay he was abt to reach gate abeer stopped him n pushed towards bed anu- wt ru doing abeer? i told u na im nt dt type of boy leave me

Abeer- anu just shut up ! shut up ! im nt gay idiot he got angry n goes out frm dere room.

In d corridor dis idiot anu yucck hw could he think abt me like this idiot.

At nyt abeer check out his fb whether anklet beauty hv taken his req he was praying oh god pls she has excepted i will give u one apple( again Riswat to god n also get agree by taking dt riswat of one apple ) she accepted his req. Abeer become very happy n started jumping like a child coming back frm his excitement he sended

Abeer-hi n started waiting for her hi after few min

Anklet beauty- hi

Abeer- remb or forgot

Anklet beauty-ya i remb u i hv seen many times u with Anurag n i think ur his frnd
Abeer- thank god u remb me n yes im his frnd n roommate of Anurag too.

Anklet beauty- acha abeer got to go my phone is ringing talk u later

Abeer become sad n thought so soon anklet beauty

With disheartened he wrote

Abeer-ok bye

Anklet beauty- bye n gud nyt

Abeer- gud nyt. N goes to sleep sadly dnt kn tomorrow one good news coming in his fate.

At clg shreya his frnd n hostel mate of anklet beauty.

Shreya to abeer- abeer u should thanks me
Abeer- for wt
Shreya- because of me she got agree to talk

Abeer- wt n how( excitedly asked)
Then shreya told everything dt she asked wt sort of guy abeer is n many more

Abeer in thought oh dis was d reason y anklet beauty taken so much time.

He was happy dt atleast she is satisfied n she trust him. This is positive news for his first sight love dt anklet beauty trust him.

At few days of chatting abeer one day pacing in his last 2 day he wanted to call her bt nt able to call due to nervousness n confusion finally after gaining lot courage motivating himself drinking 2 glass of water he dialed her number.
She picked up his call

Abeer heartbeat increasing with each passing sec.

She- hello

N abeer sense almost stopped

Again she-hello

Abeer- aaahhh... its abeer here

She- abeer oh hi

Abeer- hi do u remb me? With a smile on his face.

She- offcourse i remb u we r talking on fb ur Anurag frnd cum roommate ur also frnd of shreya who is my roommate cum frnd ur doing graphics n in final sem even we r in same clg NID rt she giggled

Abeer- big smile comes on his yes ur rt. N he sit down on his bed taking pillow for his n Anklet beauty 1st time long talk.on Telephone.

Abeer- i wnt to share u something

She- wt do u wnt to share tell im ready

Abeer- my 1st book is publishing soon

She- wt really omg its so great news congrats abeer. Im so proud of u

Abeer- thanks he got very happy by her way of response on his sharing news

She- i wnt ur book n treat both ok

Abeer- my first book will be for you n abt treat soon

She- wese i dnt kn u can write also hmnn... many hidden talent u hv i must say nw i hv to spy u n find out hw many more talents u hv she giggled

Abeer- also laugh n say ya anytime u cn spy me

Her voice is no less dn nightingale his heart say- if u dnt mind can i request u something

She- yea why nt

Abeer- can i call you 'KOYAL'

Koyal- why?

Abeer- actually ur voice is very sweet n ear soothing too.

Koyal- why you hv lisen koyal ? She giggled again n say just kidding offcourse u cn call afterall we our friends rt she again giggled.

Smile comes on abeer face- say thanks n offcourse we our also thought soon couples.

Both talked till late nyt one kns while other one dnt kns dt it is the starting of

" Tale of Love by Telephone"

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Posted: 7 years ago
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OK abeer and koyal
Are they hiding their real names ??
Update soon

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