new shivika story :) CH02 updated 29.07 - Page 12

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Posted: 8 years ago
This is so so good. Absolutely loved it. ❤️ This story is khidkitod. 😃
Update soon. And thanks for the PM. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely chapter
Update soon amd thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome story
Read 2 ch in one go
Poor shivika
Pinky's omm so excited
Beautifully written
Pls update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Read both chapters in one go.
Wow... awesome concept.
Hope you ladies get a chance to uodate soon. I am very eager to know Anika's back story. As well as pinkys omm.
SSO brain seems to be back from vacation too.


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Posted: 8 years ago

Hello Lovies!🤗
Okay first of all I'm really sorry for being late!Like really, and I hope you two will forgive this poor soul.😆 I know I'm being dramatic and a bit dramaqueen but what can I do? this is the only thing I know😛
Now coming to the update, it was full of Pinky's Om my Mata, Shivaay's care for annika, some revelation which shows that annika wanted to give a surprise to avantika and is hadn't give any news of her self to anyone yet, well Now I'm kinda excited to for them to meet, engagement kab hogi yaar, I know it's of chudail and shivaay baby*Michmichi feelng*, but still I'm eagerly wating for it😆😆 So update soon.

One thing I forgotted to tell is that,I'm just freaking lovign this Jhanvi! Oh gosh her cold icy words just struck the right cords in my heart and the time when Rudra said pinky that "who better then her know the trick of flowing crocodilr tears" Ahhh! I was grinning like a foola nd wanted to tap on rudra's shoulder telling him that he going good.😆

I always adorn Obros moments where rudra is being childish and om being the one who tries to make shivaay understand his mistakes,these scene are love for me and you can get which is the best scene in this chapter for me, the obros talk near the pool side, I don't know but you two are constantly givign me one of the betest scenes near the pool nd I'm elated for that.

But the most sensitive part was the flashback, The fight betweent he ehart and the brain,Ahh! I too get confuse while writting them but you two have beautifully potrayed them! Both of them had accepted the challenge, and I hope the heart wins! But here the heart belongs to the Shivaay Singh Oberoi who doesn't listen to his heart but his mind,it's going to be one of a hella ride and I'm waiting for it with bated breath.

Do update it soonish!

Love,
-Anya😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello, hope all good? When are we getting an update, I have been checking almost everyday really waiting to read the next parts.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chhaya dear, thank you so much for the pm.
Enas and Chhaya, this was a great take on the separation track! Good that Annika has a mother who has the same ideologies like her. I have a doubt tho, in this story, do we still have have Chutki?
So, Shivaay is thinking, and this is kinda working! I'm so glad Pinky was OMMed by Avantika. I would love to see Pinky Ponky's face when Avanti and Anni meet
Please do continue soon, and PM me Chhaya😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ok girls when is the next update can't wait update the next part soon hope everything is ok.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Girls update the next part soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
When u will update next part???

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