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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: amortentia15

Hiii

Nick to my Judy. ...❤️
Ok let me start by telling you the way you think about your readers...5 updates on a single day and you didn't even take much time to write down these absolutely spellbinding chapters...so thank you for the same...
the pangs of separation that traumatised Chandni was so well depicted and with so much precision I could very well feel what she was going through..

Advay...well your Advay was what we were hoping for in the show...pensive yet considerate...introspective sympathetic and someone so deep ...yes he is broken...bound by the shackles of his gory past but willing to reason even after the terrifying ordeal that he had to endure for no fault of his own

The clarity in your writing, the consistency of all the characters is magnificet
Advay's desperate urgency, Chandni's longing and torment at being separated from him have been described with perfect rigour...

You are an inspiration. ...
lots of love and lots and lots of love
muah
juhi🤗


UFF finally found your review , after carefully combing tru every page 😆

will be writing my review in a bit
Edited by ChitraGS - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago



THE STORY IS NOW AVAILABLE ON MY WATTPAD ACCOUNT, ON THE LINK BELOW


https://my.w.tt/UiNb/jJ0GHOJujK

Edited by ChitraGS - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago



THE STORY IS NOW AVAILABLE ON MY WATTPAD ACCOUNT, ON THE LINK BELOW


https://my.w.tt/UiNb/jJ0GHOJujK

Edited by ChitraGS - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG another update
yippee I am so excited
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update loved it so much.
Advni moments were fabulous.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh Chitra I am so happy u r liking my reviews
I love to write reviews for your posts be it your Haye Takes or FF
I read your updates at least 10 times each part
So I normally tend not to miss any details
I just love this story a lot and made it my life line now
Aww a big hug from me to u too 🤗
Hmm since she had actually lied she too may be punished
Though she may be let off easily as she was just a child then
I agree Indrani may try to harm her if she knows that
Thank God Yash is not involved in your story
I could not accept him being involved in the show
Hmm I feel she will see the mark on his hand some day
And I hope she will remember it from her past
So he was drinking as he has an emotional over load in himself
He was sad depressed guilty shaken shocked and hurt
Hmm so it turned to purposeful drinking later
Oh so wine does not cause any hang over ?
How I wish some day Chandni is drunk and she blabbers some more
Something more of her kidnapper and the related trauma
Edited by 2filmy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Oh Chitra I am so happy u r liking my reviews
I love to write reviews for your posts be it your Haye Takes or FF
I read your updates at least 1 times each part
So I normally tend not to miss any details
I just love this story a lot and made it my life line now
Aww a big hug from me to u too 🤗
Hmm since she had actually lied she too may be punished
Though she may be let off easily as she was just a child then
I agree Indrani may try to harm her if she knows that
Thank God Yash is not involved in your story
I could not accept him being involved in the show
Hmm I feel she will see the mark on his hand some day
And I hope she will remember it from her past
So he was drinking as he has an emotional over load in himself
He was sad depressed guilty shaken shocked and hurt
Hmm so it turned to purposeful drinking later
Oh so wine does not cause any hang over ?
How I wish some day Chandni is drunk and she blabbers some more
Something more of her kidnapper and the related trauma


AWIIIEEE i am so over the moon that my FF is your life line, 😳😳😳

BIG WALA HUGWA MERI PARI !!! 🤗🤗

Yes, He thinks she lied on purpose and so she cud get into trouble. But even then she might be taken into custody during interrogation etc, and might not want to co operate with the police, as her mother cud get into trouble and they cud torture her nah, to get out the truth.
Hence he doesnt want to go down that route. He is ok with not getting justice, but he cannot bear to put her in harm's way. Hence why

Wine ?? TBH wine is good alcohol. Well all alcohol is bad, but between bad and worse, Wine is a better option.
Especially if you were to compare it with Whisky or Vodka for eg.
Wine has abt 10 to 14 % alcohol, while Whisky or Vodka has 40 to 45 % alcohol, So its tht percentage of alcohol that determines how good or bad it is .
Also wine is natural made from grapes, where as Whisky is made from molasses in some cases, but there are many other ways of distilling it, which are not healthy.
Hence why wine is always looked upon as a drink that you can consume with food. Infact in the west, there is a wine for every meal. A wine that will bring out the flavour or a meat dish, or a wine that will go with desserts. So wine is always considered classy, and easy.
BUT I HATE IT !!! CANT STAND IT !! YUKK !!! i am a Gin and Tonic girl, which is another classy drink, but i am okay with it, as i dont get DRUNK EVEN IF I DRANK A BARREL FULL STOP !!! HAHA !!! and my husband is flat on the ground after just two glasses of wine, IRONY I TELL U 🤣
But having said that we drink very rarely, maybe at a christmas party, thats all.

How will the kidnapper story come out, I just thought of it this afternoon. i will come out, in an interesting way too. 😳 Trust me 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
I meant to say I read your updates for at least 10 times
The 0 did not get pressed in my initial reply so edited it
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Posted: 8 years ago
But Chitra just for confirmation
Now he knows she did not lie right ?
She has told him almost everything that had happened then
But of course police may not trust her so easily
and trouble her to get out the truth

I never have had any alcohol neither do I ever wish to
But thank u for the knowledge this is intersting
Haha u hardly get drunk and your husband gets drunk in 2 glasses
Haha that is hilarious and ironical

Wow I am sure the kidnapper story will come out in a special and unique way
Errm but what is there to know here ?
Who had kidnapped and why ?
as apart from that he already knows quite a lot from her
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sudha u r promoted to golden Goldie
Congrats for the color change

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