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Heart Entwined

City Hospital ..

A girl in her 20's was busy examining a report when there was a knock on her cabin door...
the nurse on the other side peeped inside when she heard a faint "Come in" ...
" Dr .Jodha your friend's here to meet you ... shall i send her in if you're free ?" Asked the nurse .. on receiving a nod she was about to leave but then stopped on the call of the Dr.

" Nurse can you plz shift all my appointments for tomorrow to the day after plz .. i am not available tomorrow and also ask Dr. Abhishek to come to my cabin once he gets free ... "

"Sure Dr. i'll inform Abhi sir about it " said the nurse and left ...

"Jodhaaa!!!!" Cried a girl in a damn frustrated tone ...

"Shush !!! "
Keeping a finger on her mouth she indicated her best friend to lower her voice
" You know its a hospital even then you are shouting on top of your voice " reprimanded the Dr albiet lovingly ...
"Sorry " getting a sheepish apology from her dearest friend she continued questioning in concern ...

"ok now tell me itna kya pahad tut pada jo tu itna gussa ho rahi hai meri jhansi ki rani ??"

"Arre yaar that stupid idiot nurse of yours.. is she always like this ?? i mean she is soo rude !!"

"Chod na yaar .. vese ye bata koi kaam tha jo aise achanak bina call kiye you're here ??"

"Yup !!! Chal na kal ghumne chalte ... letz go to imagica .. and don't you deny i already got the passes plz plz plz chal "

" Panchi you know I am not gonna come then why do you have to ask such questions .. you know what day it is tomorrow ... I have to go to school n then to the orphanage plz I can't come sry "

Panchi(a bit frustrated) " Its almost 7 yrs why are you doing this to yourself yaar ... come out of it .. its high time you forget about him and move on ... vese bhi jis bande ke liye tu itna sab kar rahi hai use to malum bhi nahi ki tu usse pyaar karti hai "

"Look Panchi if you don't wanna join me don't but plz aise mat bol ... you of all the ppl are asking me to move on when you know me better then any one else ... I love him yaar .. i can't just forget him or fall out of love with him ... kal ka ek hi to din hai jo me uske yaadon me jiti hu ... " said an equally irritated Jo...

" ok fine i'll come with you ... aur plz atleast is baar pineapple cake mat lana " Panchi muttered in order to lighten the tensed air

"No !! Pineapple cake hi ayega ... uska favourite hai & its not your b'day its his so everything will b according to his choice "

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Nxt day..

No sooner did the girls took their first step in the schl premises Jodha was engulfed by the blissful memories ...

Memories of the first day of the school .. memories of making friends ... memories of having fun .. troubling the teachers .. playing pranks ... pairing classmates ...

The soft breeze that welcomed them brought along with it a very familiar scent and a feeling of ecstasy ... a feeling which was lost seven years ago ...

Baffled she started looking here and there as if searching for someone rather searching for him... but her eyes couldn't see him ...

"Jodha ?!! Chalo ... y r u waiting there ?? Is some one coming ???

"Haan .. nahi nahi no one coming ... chalo "

confused in the way her thoughts were proceeding she shook off the weird feeling and started moving ...

Little did she know the person that her eyes were longingly searching for was gazing at her with equal love and longing ...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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How's that ?? Should i continue ???

Ps. Thanks Neetu for help
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: manu_ak

How's that ?? Should i continue ???

Ps. Thanks Neetu for help

Wow...Manu... It's very interesting...⭐️ Please continue dear. And give daily update...😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Its lovely. Pls update regularly.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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nicee start...😃
plz continue it .
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congrats for new story...😊
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Manu it's mavi...
U should continue it dear...
I will read afterwards but I must say that u would be a perfect writer... congrats for ur story continue soon...will comment later
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Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

congrats for new story...😊

nice dear please continue with ur story waiting for it eagerly... 😉👏
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congrats Manali for new story.😃 its superb
update soon.
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Wonderful.. Plz continue it.. So eager for next update... And congratulations and thank you for the beautiful story...update soon. ..

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