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Bond_7

@Bond_7

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Wow dear, glad to see you in the form of a writer! Congrats!🤗

Loved the start and pls continue it soon!😃

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Saumya

@Akdha_Saumya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Amazing
Pls do continue
And pls pm me

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dellaakdha

@dellaakdha

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Continue ur story ya...It's interesting...

Congrats for ur new story and pls Continue...

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Mavaddat

@Mavi_16_2

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Manali... so sweet one shot yet bit emotional. .. so jo is memorising someone's especial birthday n she is celebrating as well sInce years... very beautifully written... Who is the person staring at jo lovingly. .. is it that person only whom jo is missing n love him unconditionally... ok then let's see what will be her reaction when she will see him... waiting for next update

Jaldi jaldi do updates... n u write so well I wasn't aware of that fact...

Do pm me please n update soon please please please please please

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Appy@Ayman

@zynahsiddiqi956

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+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

congrats manu for new story.👏👏

i lyk it ..plz do cont soon..😉

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Neetu

@NSKay

Rocker

+ 11

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

An amazing start Manu di😃
Waiting for more from your side😉

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Manali

@manu_ak

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: pandrangijyothi

Wow...Manu... It's very interesting...⭐️ Please continue dear. And give daily update...😉

Thank you ... daily ka i don't knw but i'll update as and when i write ...

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Manali

@manu_ak

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: zynahsiddiqi956
tnx for PM

U got PM ?? Who sent ??

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Manali

@manu_ak

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Chapter 2

There he was , as handsome as ever , standing besides the big old banyan tree near the school gate gazing around when his gaze settled on the one person his eyes had starved to see ...

His eyes were getting a glimpse of HIS Jo after almost 7 years ... and like parched soul finally getting a few drops of water after suffering in the hot desert .. he kept drinking her sight ...

Forgetting where he was and the purpose of him being here ...

"She still looks the same innocent beautiful doll " he thought before quickly hiding himself from her ...

And then she turned around making his breath to stop at once ...

The fear of him getting noticed making him all nervous about her reactions when she finally sees him ... he hid himself more behind the thick trunk of the tree ..

No he wasn't a coward ... he was just concerned and scared of her reactions ...

On the other hand she was busy searching him , he was 100 percent sure about this and still awed it till date ... her ability to sense his presence around her within moments ...

There was a spark in her eyes , a certain desperateness when she travelled her gaze through the whole school standing at the entrance but her face fell when her eyes couldn't see what they wanted to see ...

Yet the heart signalled her to just try once more .. may be just may be she had skipped seeing him here ..

Its become a ritual for both of them .. to be there on this day ... to be so near yet so far away ...

Like every year thats gone by she's here to keep her promise and like every year he isn't here to cut the cake ... or so she thought yet not letting his absence hamper her spirit she lit the candle on the cake ...

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