ArShi story || Mangalsutra ||Teaser for Part-6(17/6/2016), pg-61

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angeldream14

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+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#311

Intriguing

ASR is married but to whom

N what is this game

Kaalandi is a mystery

Is Payal what she pretends to be

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kartikaJA

@kartikaJA

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Posted: 8 years ago

#312

lovely story
please update next part soon
please

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@infinity_flame

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Posted: 8 years ago

#313

Lovely story but scary teaser. Update soon. Pm me

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Zeehana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#314

very excited to read the next part

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corie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#315

Interesting story please update soon

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sadhnasoumya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#316

Nice story

Read in one go

Arnav loved payal and married her

Then how come khushi came in all this

This is so confusing

Is arnav two timing ?

And then arnav's mother is alive

Too much mystery

Update soon

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Simrandeep Kaur

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Posted: 8 years ago

#317

Hey are u going to update. ...its been an year.

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Pooja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#318

Very interesting plot. Suspenseful. But it was last updated last year!😭 Will this ever be continued?

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manutdno1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#319

A very interesting read!

I usually find it difficult to read stories which change from the original plot but I liked the way you've written it, a bit of mystery. Although I have to admit payal and arnav was a bit hard to digest as was arnav two timing.

As I read all 5 chapters in one go, I'm looking forward to reading more.

I'm still hoping that Khushi will still be 'the love of Arnav's life' tho. Anything else would be a tragedy!

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 8 years ago

#320

Interesting story though I am not sure I think too highly of Arnav lying to either Khushi or Payal.

I don't know what his reasons are and why the Gupta's tricked him into marrying Payal but Arnav is effective two thing both the women - and I am not sure I like that too much :-)

But barring that, it sounds interesting.

Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 8 years ago