Special Collaboration - NavRasas - The Powerful Nine-SHOT4 p7 & 5- - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
Loved it Harshada and very intrigued actually! Would love to read more of it! Him following her secretly just to watch her, hayeee. When she said know, my heart broke too... Fear! The most dangerous nemesis of joy, love almost everything. beautifully written!
Love,
Kripa
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Res😆
Unres 😃

I loved your take on fear 😆. For me, it was different from the convention. 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
awesome update harshu...
awww he is so sweet yar...
Ya fear is the major reason which stop us from taking risks...only those who will overcome it can win...
I will love to read if you continue this...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
Harshada as beautiful as ever.
Everything so beautifully penned down.
I loved it.
why Can't they be friends?



P.S.- I think you know Harshu aka @Mystery1234 was shocked to know about the hilarious update written by you. Harshu is my psycho best friend.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Dear Daisy,
Thank you.

You know Harshita personally? Gosh it has been so long to have seen her. I was worried. She just kinda vanished.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

Dear Daisy,

Thank you.

You know Harshita personally? Gosh it has been so long to have seen her. I was worried. She just kinda vanished.


Yup I'm in touch with her Harshita. She is busy with her studies these days and can't come online much. I know her through Wattpad and let me tell you Harshu is a khitkitod writer and she had started her own FF. Its on hold as she left Wattpad too.
She is on Insta nowadays.
We chat there on daily basis.



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome shot..
Loved it.
Shivaay is soo sweet..
He had fallen for her at first sight itself but anika was scared n not even ready for his friendship..
She wasn't able to accept him because of her fear..
Plz continue this n I would love to read its sequel where anika trust his love..
Very beautifully written..

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: CrzyPulviophile


Yup I'm in touch with her Harshita. She is busy with her studies these days and can't come online much. I know her through Wattpad and let me tell you Harshu is a khitkitod writer and she had started her own FF. Its on hold as she left Wattpad too.
She is on Insta nowadays.
We chat there on daily basis.




Ah I knew she must be stuck with her studies. I did not know Harshita writes as well. What's her wattpad ID?

Instagram is kinda everyone's favorite thing now.

Anyways, do let her know that she is being missed and that I have asked her to drop by whenever time permits.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveToWrite


Ah I knew she must be stuck with her studies. I did not know Harshita writes as well. What's her wattpad ID?

Instagram is kinda everyone's favorite thing now.

Anyways, do let her know that she is being missed and that I have asked her to drop by whenever time permits.

We kinda threatened her to write an FF at least.
OMG it was so beautiful.
Her Wattpad ID is @Aspirations1234
I'll tell her about it.
Insta is surely much more preferable social media sites now than Facebook and Twitter
I prefer Insta only nowadays. I'm just a weekly visitor of Twitter.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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PEACE


"The way of peace is the way of love. Love is the greatest power on earth. It conquers all things."

Gauri looked at her husband staring out of the window at the moonless sky. Every night she found him standing there with a forlorn expression searching for something in the sky. She never dared to ask him the reason behind it. However, the pain in his coal black eyes was unmistakable and they called out to her in strange way. She wanted nothing more than to take him in her arms and sooth him away from whatever misery he was under. Her protectiveness for her callous husband only grew with time.

Gauri shut her eyes immediately when she found small movements in her posture. His actions that would follow have been etched in her mind. He would gulp down the whole glass of water placed on the night stand. Then, with careful effort to not disturb her sleep, slip beside her in the bed. And what follows was one thing that caught Gauri off guard initially and it took every inch of her self control to not let her rapid heartbeats give her away. Her husband quietly reaches for her hand over her petit waist and entwines his fingers with hers. The first time it happened, Gauri wanted to pull away from him, but she something in her stopped her and she let him caress her knuckles with his thumb and inhale the scent of her hair. If this is the way Omkaraji wanted to establish any intimacy with her, then so it be.

That day, Gauri was particularly daring and so turned her body slowly to face her husband. She was surprised to find her husband's meticulous eyes staring at her. An invariant gasp left her mouth and she was about to turn back when he held her strong under his arms subsiding her attempt.

"Omkaraji "she mumbled almost inaudibly

"Thought you will never turn to look at my face " Omkara said concentrating on his wife's face trying to by heart her reactions

"You knew I was awake... "

"All the while " he completed her sentence

"Why ? " Gauri asked looking straight into his eyes

"Why what, Gauri? "

"Why do you never sleep at nights? Why do you keep staring at the sky? Why didn't you once tell me that you knew I was awake? " If Gauri had more Why questions, she chose to not reveal them

Omkara left his wife and turned around to sleep on his back staring at the ceiling. Gauri took a minute to stare at her husband's profile before following the same and stared at the ceiling.

"When I was young, Daadi told me that God lived in sky. Every day I used to look at the sky and ask him for peace. Peace in my family, in my parent's marriage, in my life, in myself. God didn't give me that. So, I began searching them myself. My art, Gauri, is my way of attaining peace even if it is brief. I know I have to come back to this life, but those few hours Artist Omkara finds peace. Omkara looked at her for a minute and confessed, " I have to tell you that I have done certain things to attain peace that I am not proud of, but that is story for another day.

"Did you find peace then? " Gauri asked

"I didn't Gauri. " He said turning his gaze back to the ceiling

Gauri kept looking at her husband forming words in her head to console him.

"I didn't find peace when I searched, Gauri. It came to me naturally. "

Omkara without altering his gaze or posture gently took his wife's hand in his.

"I was searching for peace when my peace was called Gauri. "

He placed her hand near his heart letting her feel his heartbeat. Nothing more was spoken, the two lovers let their love spun a web around them and they suitably got lost in the magical emotion.

***


Hope it makes sense 😳 Wrote in just twenty minutes

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Edited by Ms.Lizzie - 7 years ago

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