Rikara OS: Hum Tumhare Hai Sanam

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello Rikarians.. I am back with my new OS. It is based on current track. Please read & do like 7 comments..

Hum Tumhare Hai Sanam

Om was waiting for Gauri from 3 hours & there is no sign of his chiraiya. He was already so much frustrated because of her behavior . What is damn reason she is behaving like this. She is going out from last 3 days without telling him any details. Didn't even bother to talk with him simple 2 sentences. Oh god this girl is going to make me crazy Om thought. He saw her coming in hurry upstairs. He just go back and resume his work hoping she will come to talk with him. She came in room with lost in her thoughts. Blabbering with herself. What's wrong with her man. Why she is not showing any interest while talking with him. After brief 2 minutes he asked her

Om: "Aa gayi tum.. bahot late ho gaya na aaj.. He asked her as behaving as calm as possible.

Gauri: "Ha wo bas ek kaam me atk gaye the.. Hum abhi fresh hoke aate hai.. . "Niche functionki taiyari krne bhi to jana hai..

Om: "Kaha gayi thi tum. 3-4 dinse jar hi ho.. kam khatam nahi hua. Wo tum batake nahi gai to dadi pareshan ho gai thi..?? He asked her silently.

Gauri: "Hum bs paas mehi gaye the.. Hum dadi se keh denge ki humari chinta na kre..

Why this woman don't get his questions , om was getting more and more furious after her each answer.. She just walked away from him , without giving one single glance at him.

After freshening up she directly headed towards hall again busy with her self talks.. He tried to call her but she was again so fast. All were doing shadi preparations , she was helping Anika to design decoration of mandap & temple in house. He was staring at her, I have to talk with her, why she is in so ignorant mood. She didn't asked him if he had dinner or not. I need to talk to her as soon as possible.

At night in their room he asked her finally "Muzse door kyu bhag rhi ho Gauri... Ab muzse baat bhi nahi karna chahti.. Om asked silently.

Gauri: "Are ee aap ka keh rhe hai.. Omkaraji.. Hum to kr rhe hai aapse baat.. Hume bs thoda kam tha isliye..

Om: "Jabse murti lekar aaye hai, tumne 5 minute bhi muzse thikse baat nahi ki hai Gauri.. Gussa ho muzse to please muze batato.. He was asking her side of story now. Maybe he was thinking so much about these things.

Gauri: "Nahi .. hum thak gaye hai to sone ja rhe hai.. aap bhi so jaiye... She replied him coldely.

Om: "Meri baat khatm nahi hui Gauri. Tum muze batogi nahi to mai kaise samjhunga... He was slowly loosing control now.

Gauri: "Aapko agar hume samjhana hota to kabke smajh gaye hote omkaraji.. Sach baat to yeh hai ki sayad aap hume smjhana hi nahi chahte.. slowly tears started appearing in her beautiful eyes..

He walk towards her & brushed her tears off. Her tears are giving him pain. He has been aware that her pain affects him, but from these few days, her pain was literally killing him. He wanted to cure her every pain. But then he realize that He was the Reason of her pain, her tears. He stood there holding her hands in his.

Om: "Exhibition me jo hua, I am very very sorry Gauri.. Mai tumhe hurt nahi krna chahta tha.. wo mai bus... She cut him in between..

Gauri: "Humari wajah se aapki badnaami ho gai omkaraji.. Hum iskeliye apne aapko kbhi maaf nahi kar paayenge.. Hume maaf kr dijiye plj..

Om was again shocked. She was crying because she thought because of her he got defamed.

Om: "Aisa nahi hai Gauri.. Tum pagal ho gai ho kya.. Tum isliye itna ro rhi thi.. ..

Gauri: "Ab hum samjh gaye hai omkaraji.. Aapka aur humara koi mel hi nahi hai.. Aap intne padhe likhe insaan hai, itne bade kalakaar hai.. Aur hum.. Angreji me baat krna to dur hum to thikse angreji samajh bhi nahi pate.. Hume samaj aagya hai ki aapki aur humari guniya bahot alag hai.. Hum aapke aur aapki duniya ke layk hi nahi.. .. Then she took her blanket from bed & went to recliner for sleep.

Om was taken a back by her answer. How she can think like this. But her side was also true. He didn't give her time & space in his life that she can understand him. He has to clear her misunderstanding..

Om's POV: Gauri ko itna bura laga tha, aur tabhi wo bus mere bareme soch rhi thi, mai itna coward kaise ho skta hu jo apni issues ki wajah se ek ladki jo muze shayad apna sabkuch manti hai usko itni taklif de raha hu.. I have to talk with her now.. Jo bhi hai mere dilme muze use batana hoga. Kahi der ho gai to mai use hamesha keliye na khodu..

Om went towards recliner & place hand her shoulder.

Om: "Gauri please meri baat suno, humara baat krna jaroori hai..

Gauri woke up suddenly. She was surprised that he want to talk with her & that so desperately. She sat on recliner near him.

Gauri: "Kahiye ka kehna chahte hai aap... She was looking down. Not wanting to feel emotional fool in front of him. She has to be strong. She has tackle many emotional situations & she will pass this one too.

Om: "Muze gussa iss baat pe aya tha ki mai waha tumhari insult honese nahi rok paya.. Mai tumhe us nakli duniya ka hissa nahi banana chahta tha.. mai janta tha ki jo log kisike kpde aur language dekhkar use judge krte hai wo meri innocent Gauri ko nahi samaj payenge.. I am really very sorry Gauri. Mai tumhe hurt nahi dekh sakta & phir jb tum chali gai wahase I was so lost, mai tumhe console krna chahta tha but meri himmat hi nai hui.. i m sorry..

Gauri had tears in her eyes. "Aap sach keh rahe hai?? Aapko koi problem nahi ki hume angreji nahi aati, hum unn baki ladkiyo jaise kapde nahi pehnte??

Gauri's pov: Aap hume samajh me kyo nahi aate omkaraji.. ek pal keliye aap humari itni fikr krte hai, humari jaan bachne keliye khud apni jaan khatreme daal dete hai, aur kbhi humare rishteko ek naam denese katrate hai..

Om: "Haa gauri.. tumhe to pata hai na ki mai zoot nahi bolta.. He replied her smilingly.. "Ab to baat krogi na muzse.. ya narajagi hai koi?? He asked her directly. In 3 days he was clear that, it was more easy to handle her antics, but her indifference will definitely going to kill him.

Gauri: "To aap humari saadi kyu nahi maante omkaraji?? She asked him directly.. She was tired of this hide & seek game now.

Omkaraji: "Wo gauri.. mai wo.. He again started to fumble.. He stopped again.. But Gauri was getting anxious now. Today she will ask him all answers. & he has to reply her.

Gauri: "Kahiye omkaraji, jo bhi baat hai.. hum aap par ye rista jabrdasti nahi thopna chahte. Kya aap kisi aurse shaadi krna chahte the, kisi aurse pyar krte hai, aapko hum sunder nahi lagte , aapki patni bananeke kabil nahi lagte?? Ka baat hai hume samajhana hai..

Om was again startle by her questions. But he knows he has to answer her now. She was adamant for answers.

Om: "Aisa kuch nahi gauri.. par muze nahi pata tum muze samaj paaogi ya nahi.. I don't know how to explain you all this.. .

Gauri: "Aap keh rhe the na ki aapko humse baat krni hai, to ab aap bhi humaare saare sawalokna jawaab denge.. Nahi to sankarji ki kasam hum sachme aap se baat nahi karenge..

Om: "Nahi Gauri.. plese muze samjhne ki koshish kro ..

Gauri: "Humse nahi to apne chulbul se kahiye.. Wo to aapko bahot achchese janta tha na.. Hume apna dost samajhkar bata dijiye.. Hum wada krte hai ki hum iske baad kbhi aapko aise pareshan nahi hone denge.. plj omkaraji.. Hamari khatir..

Om was looking at her adoringly. Yes he can trust her, She is his Chulbul, his best buddy, his companion.. He told her about all he had faced in his childhood, his parent's issues, his father's betrayal, his mother's suicide attempt, riddima's betrayal, his drug issues,& his suicide attempt. Gauri was so stunned after hearing this from him. Her eyes were continuously flowing with tears. Her omkaraji has suffer a lot. She was crying with him. His every pain was breaking her. Even though she never seen any of these incident but she could imagine what he would have been felt. His broken voice was tearing heart apart. She decided at that moment she will take away all his pain. He deserve to be happy, & she will make every moment of his life cheerful, She will make his life blissful. Even if he didn't consider her his wife she will be there for him as his friend, his soulmate.

Om: "Tumhe pata hai jb jb maa ko rota hua dekha hai na, tb tb mere dilme husband & wife , shaadi in sab chijokeliye bs nafrat badhi hai. Mera yakin ispe bdhta chala gaya ki saccha pyar hakikat me milta hi nahi hai.. . He looked at her. She was sobbing, she was feeling his pain. He so wanted to fall in love with her, to give her all happiness she deserved. & he decided he will give their relation a chance.

Gauri: "Hum samaj gaye omkaraji, ab aap fikr mat kijiye, hum kbhi aapko apne sawalose nahi satayenge.. Aur aapke dost banker aapke sath rahenge.. na koi shikwa kerenge na koi shikawat.. Hum bs aapko khus dekhna chahte hai.. agar aap khus rahenge to hum bhi khus rahenge..

She is so pure. He always had an attraction towards her, but today he was falling for her, In his heart he was aware that she is the one who can win him, she has already won his heart. She was adoring her, he so wanted to make her his, his wife.

Om: "Par jabse tum aayi ho na, tumne sab badal diya hai... Tumne muze firse wo Om bana diya jo hr baat ko dilse sochna chahta tha, tumne mere dilko phirse dhadkana sikhaya hai gauri.. Bus thodasa waqt dedo muze mai sb kuch thik kr dunga.. I will solve my commitment issues. Mai bas tumhe kehna chahta hu ki tum muzse door mat jao, mai bardasht nahi kar paunga.. please firse chodke jane wali baat mat krna.. He asked her desperately.

She looked at his eyes, & hugged him tightly. "Hum aapko kbhi chodkar nahi jayenge omkaraji.. kabhi nahi... He smiled through his tears. He was indeed so lucky to have her. After some time they realize their position. She shyly broke the hug & stand away from him.. He smiled her. He liked her little more when she become shy because of him. Her chicks become red like apple & her smile made his heart flattered. He went towards her & hold her one hand behind her & grab her waist. She was trapped in between wall & him..Gauri fell in surprise by his sudden move.

Gauri: "omkaraji, kaa kar rahe hai?? Chodiye hume plz..

Om: "Yhi baat meri aankhome dekho aur kaho... mai chod dunga .. he whisper in her ears. Making her gasp.

Gauri: "Koi aa jayega.. please. She was trying to convince her Jatadhari..

Om: "Raatke 4 baj rahe , abhi humare bedroom me hume disturb krne koi nahi aayega.., He told her.

Their proximity made Gauri feel nervous and desperate for an excuse to escape from him and his cutting stare..He could feel the rapid rise and fall of her chest against his own, it was weakening his control. She found it difficult to look at him as his hot breath fell on her face making her want to submit. Om blew the lock of hair that rested on her neck and asked

Om: "Muzse sachme door jana chahti ho.. His intense eyes were demanding answers, & she was so lost in him. He rubbed his thumb gently over her trembling lower lip.

Gauri: "Hume nahi pata.. She replied silently.

Om: "Itna sab kuch kha hai tumse, tumhe kuch nahi kehna muzse.. He asked her huskily , he was so lost in her fragrance, no one has any idea how he always control himself when he is around her.

Gauri: "Hone wale to khud hi apne ho jate hai omkaraji, har baat keh kar batana jaroori to nahi...

Om: " Aur tum meri ho, hai na..??..

Gauri: "Hum to..

That was all she managed to reply in a hoarse voice as he dug his face into the curve of her neck and lightly kissed it. He planted soft kisses across her neckline down to the bare entrance of her breasts. Gauri gasped in pleasure as he pinched the flesh with wet lips. He then teased his way back up her smooth skin, smiling between kisses as he reached her neck again. His lips made their way along her shoulder and stopped when they met the thin strap of her dress. He ran his tongue around the slight bit of material, enjoying the taste of her warm flesh. Gauri shuddered and whispered his name "Omkaraji...

He could feel her hands wanting to move his face back up to hers. A sudden urgency made him crush his mouth on to hers, groaning in pleasure as the sweet taste of her mouth enhanced his yearning. He was kissing her like there was no tomorrow.

"Gauri .. Gauri.. uth gayi kya.. They heard Anika knocking door twice .. She again called her.. Gauri pushed Omkara away. Her face was totally flushed, She was amazed how she can ger carried away like this. He asked her furiously "Ye anika bhabhi subah ke 4:30 baje tumhe bulane kyu aayi hai He was sounding totally frustrated.

Anika: "Gauri darwaja khol, hume aaj haldi aur chude ki rasmki saari taiyari krni hai, aur baki guest bhi aa jayenge aaj.. Daadi ne abhi niche bulaya hai.. ..

Gauri: "aaye bhojai.. She hurriedly make her way to door after setting her dupatta correct. She was so nervous to look at him. She open the door..

Anika: "Are Gauri kitni der lagadi.. Dadine kaha tha na kal hume jaldi niche jana hai.. Are Om tum kyu itni jaldi uth gaye..

Om: "Wo bhabhi.. wo me...

Gauri: "Bhojai wo aane abhi aawaj din a to aawaj sunke uth gaye... She saved him from embarrassment. "Hum bas aa hi rahe the.. chalye chalte hai..

She turned back to look at him. He was looking so cute with his I am fed up of this world expression. She smiled at him. "Thodi der baad mere liye chai le aana gauri please.. He looked hopefully at her that she will get his actual message behind Tea.

Gauri: "Hum le aayenge thodi der me.. She replied him shyly. & he was waiting for her to come..😳

This is it.. No proof reads, please ignore grammatical mistakes. Read this piece & do like & comment.. Thankoo in advance..😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its awesome..Kaash aisa serial main bhi mil jata..
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Once again... Great job! Love the way you rework what's happening in the show. Keep writing lovely stories😊
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thanks for an amazing os 😉 loved it😉
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loved loved it so much.IT was just outstanding.I know I m going to read it again and again.Thanks to you.
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Loved this one.. ❤️ write more.. will love to read all those.
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It was awesome as always...glad that you didn't make Om confess his feelings instantly..beautiful...the chai wali part was ahm ahm...
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This was so amazing.You have taken the hesitance and indifference on both of their part and weaved this tale.This conversation was gold,also because Omkara confided in Gauri which is hardly a chance wouldve shown in show.Keep writing and do update your TS soon

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