~The Unfathomable Love. ~ part12 updated !(07/01/2018) pg 58 - Page 30

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

Idea...You can type while waiting for Hala di 😉


ur ryt..i was waiting for hala..but i guess till she unres her chappies i can complete mine..🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: zynahsiddiqi956



ur ryt..i was waiting for hala..but i guess till she unres her chappies i can complete mine..🤣

keep it up...
I think you will update before Hala Di 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
INTERESTING Story...1st Sorry for Very Late...Read all the chapters...Thank u for writing in English and small Recap in english for previous Chappies...It really needed for me...I can understand hindi chapter but not fully...Thank u for english translation...
JALAL lost his jo and on search of her... While this is diffrent background as india a ruling country with malaysia under it...Jalal have very good friends...Priya has good and caring family...Above all they have a cute little Ahan..
Fate chooses the way for jalal to his love... That riding part was funny...Now shehensha and his friends are enjoying the tour...All thanks to ahmed...I like the jalal and his gang...abdul and his foods ha ha...
Ahan meets his angel as told by her momma..Wah What a cute pair... Ja realise that ahan smile resembles someone special and his features resembles himself...
I was curious for the meeting of jo and ja...but never expected they would meet in college... Unexpected move...So there are 3 gangs... Innocent gang is saved from evil gang by the good gang...That part was nice..
But priya forget her past? She didn't recognize jalal...Did not she know that she is Jodha?If so what aboit her family?They knows priya 's past..Or the family itself dnt know her past...Lot of suspense ro be unfolded...Waiting for them...Love the way of ur story moving to next part...Thanks for pms😊...Sorry for late...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Waja jo na ki toh jafa bhi na kijiye sitam janeman iss tarah bhi na kijiye ke update lene ki tamana meri kahin bhi na jaye
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~ THE UNFATHOMABLE LOVE ~

PART 11

Those longings ,waitings seems to be very difficult but when you get to see
someone you wished and they disappear in just a bink feels like old wounds
got refreshed.
same here is the condition of jalal when he saw his jo after years and
she disappeared like always but the fact is that it is truth that she is alive and not only
him but even abdul and abrar saw her.
jalal couldnot hold himself and started searching for jo ...wait HIS jo.
and after searching for about an hour he felt on his knees again devasted and
defeated in his aim to get her back.
only he himself knows how defeated he is feeling right now.
knowing his condition both abdul and abrar assured him that this time they will get her
back.
jalal: No No No Not again..she cannot leave me again.i wont let her go this time.
she is mine and only mine and she should come ,come for me !
Abdul: jalal control yourself she is here that means we can find her soon.
abrar: yes jalal abdul is right.we saw her here in college that means she is student .
abdul: yes and if she is student then she will coe here tomorrow also that means we can
meet her tomorow.
jalal: if she doesnt come??
abdul: she will come..have faith.
abrar:come lets go home..
after so much of hesitation jalal left for home hoping to meet her as soon as possible.
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Pardesi pardesi jaana nahin
Pardesi pardesi jaana nahin
Mujhe chhod ke.. mujhe chhod ke (Repeat once) (Female)

Pardesi mere yaara.. vaada nibhana
Mujhe yaad rakhna kahin bhool .. na jaana (Female)

Pardesi pardesi jaana nahin
Pardesi pardesi jaana nahin
Mujhe chhod ke.. mujhe chhod ke
Pardesi mere yaara.. vaada nibhana
Tum yaad rakhna kahin bhool .. na jaana (Male)

Pardesi pardesi jaana nahin
Pardesi pardesi jaana nahin
Mujhe chhod ke.. mujhe chhod ke (Female)

Maine tum ko chaaha tumse pyaar kiya
Sub kuch tum pe yaar apna vaar diya (Repeat once) (Female)


Ban gayi jogan main ne preet ka jog liya
Na socha na samjha dil ka rog liya (Female)

Pardesi mere yaara.. laut ke aana
Tum yaad rakhna.. kahin bhool .. na jaana (Male)

Pardesi pardesi jaana nahin (Tu jaana nahin)
Pardesi pardesi jaana nahin (Re jaana nahin)
Mujhe chhod ke.. mujhe chhod ke
Mujhe chhod ke.. mujhe chhod ke (Female)

Bhul.. naa.. jaana..a..
Bhul.. naa.. jaana..a.. (Female)
Bhul naa jaana..o..ho.. (Male)

Har phal meri yaad tumhe tadpayegi
Main jaagoonga neend tumhe na aayegi (Repeat once) (Male)

Chhod ke aise haal mein jo tum jaaoge (Tum jaaoge)
Sach kehta hoon jaan bahut pachhtaaoge (Male)

Pardesi mere yaara.. mujhe na rulaana
Tum yaad rakhna kahin bhool .. na jaana (Female)

Pardesi pardesi jaana nahin
Pardesi pardesi jaana nahin
Mujhe chhod ke.. mujhe chhod ke
Pardesi mere yaara.. vaada nibhana
Mujhe yaad rakhna.. kahin bhool .. na jaana (Male)

Pardesi pardesi jaana.. nahin (Female)
Mujhe chhod ke.. mujhe chhod ke (Male)
(song from movie Raja Hindustani staring Amair khan and karishma kapoor)
link for video:- https://youtu.be/dkTReezvODM
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who was HE?? why HIS insult was bothering me??
why HIS helplessness was making me emotional?
why HIS tears were burning my heart?
why HIS every feeling was felt by me?
His condition was clearly felt and sensed by her but why?
why she feels so connected towards him?
why his tears and defeated eyes were flashing infront of him since she left that place.
why her heart longed to see him again ?why it wants to assure about his condition??
These questions will remain questions untill she meet him again.
priya's chain of thoughts were broken with her friends push.
muskan: priya what happen dear?
priya: ahh,nothing yaar.
rahul: really pri?? because as far as i know you, you dont get so easily disturb except
for ahan. but now it seems like you are worried for something. so now tell me
and dont dare to hide a thing from me.
priya: actually am worried for that guy we saved from rohit and his gang.
kaira: do you know him?
priya: no kayu but still i want to know if he is ok .
atul: what ? this doesnot make any sense because you said you dont know him but
want to assure if he is safe or not.
ajay: well well this happens only in few cases like
no 1.love at first sight.
no 2. crush.
no 3. may be you know him but dont remember.
rahul: my dear bro i know my bestie very well and i dont think its love at first sight or
crush .
muskan: then only one option is left..
kaira: and that is you know him but dont remember .
priya: may be ..hmm..now leave it we can here to buy our textbooks so lets make it fast
or else the shopkeeper will throw us out from just rooming .
And they get busy with their work
atul to ajay : Do these books eat pizza,burger,fries??
ajay: what?
ajay: look at these book bro they look so fat.how will i store this huge amount of
information when my memory is only 1Gb and these books may be of 1zb.
ajay: dont worry as usual priya and rahul are there to help us in test(winks)
ahem ahemm..
kaira: i wont let you people take advantage of priya's kindness.you better study or
get ready for Vrial sir's punishment.
ajay: we will see.
rahul: guys we have purchased books so lets leave
priya: yea its already late and i didnt meet ahan and i am dieing to meet my lifeline
so lets go fast..
muskan: even me ..i will also meet ahan.
all others except rahul: we too
rahul: no guys..we have test so all of you go and study for tomorrow and
let priya spend her time with ahan ,we will meet him tomorrow after college.
muskan:ok.
ajay: if that sadoo's(pet name kept by them for vrial sir) test was not there i would
met ahan,but ok we will meet him tomorrow.
kaira: ok then lets leave..
and all the friends left for their respective homes.

on the way priya was so excited to meet ahan ,listen his voice,see his cute face
kiss him and hug him ..
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jalal and his friends reached malhotra mansion and jalal went directly to his room
not knowing what to do .
pacing from right to left and left to right abdul and abrar thinking about how to find jo
in such a big college.
they too like jalal have doubt whether she will come their again or not but to make
jalal feel ok they said it but now even they are tensed that it should not be a lie
and a false hope..
abrar:i think we should see jalal if he is ok.
abdul: what do you think?
abrar: we know that..
..
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jalal while walking in his room slips off due to some creamy substance on the floor
and noticed that it is a piece of choclate cake.
and then he hears a silent chewing voice behind his bed and follows the voice.
and sees the most loving and heart melting view infront of his eyes..


ahan's mouth covered with choclate and hands holding piece of cake ..
for a moment he forget his tears ,tension and everything .not able to hold himself
jalal picked ahan in his arms.
ahan who was busy eating cake felt like lifted and saw his angel.
Ahan: angel you back..i miss you..you miss me??
jalal: yes i missed you cutie pie.(and kiss ahan's cheeks)
even jalal's face got covered with choclates when ahan touched his cheeks with his
cutie little choclate filled hands.
keeping ahan near him,his hug makes jalal feel like his wounds are getting heal.
this different kind of feeling can only be felt not said.
jalal and ahan's moments were disturbed by tap on his shoulder..
abdul: can i take ahan?
jalal: yea.. (and gives it to abdul)
abdul: how are you champ?
ahan: good.
abrar: seems like both of you took choclate bath.hahaha..
hearing this both jalal and ahan look themself and smile sheeplessly..
abrar in mind: how lovely these two look together.
abdul in mind: after jodha's departure ahan is only one who was able to get a real
smile on jalal's face.hope this smile never leaves.Ameen.
. ahan ahan...where are you?
ahan: nillu maa i here.
neelam: what is this ahan ,now i should change your dress again.
jalal:dont worry aunty,i will change his clothes.
neelam: ok..ahan did you pray today?
ahan: ohh..i forgot,i no pray means mumma no talk.
jalal: dont worry we will pray together and your mumma will not get angry.
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jalal went to priya's room ,got ahan's dress but unfortunately didnt see the photo
frame of priya and ahan on the side table near their bed.
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the duo enjoyed their company splashing water ,jalal running behind ahan to get
hold of him and finally after sometime he finally managed to get ahan dressed.
jalal: so lets go to pray.
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jalal and his friends offered his prayer and ahan too.jalal notice that ahan prayer was
like them.
jalal to neelam: aunty he was praying like muslim i mean you people are hindu's na?
neelam: dear son there is no hindu muslim.we all are one. came from same god and
will go to same god.we have same rules ,restrictions , human nature and same blood
but our way of worship is different thats it.
and ahan like to do it so he prays like you .
abdul: really? ahan likes it.
neelum: yes and he do even visit masjid ,and you know we even go to dargah ,
church,gurudwara all such places .
abrar: thats great..( neelam leaves as she need to prepare for dinner)
ahan who just now completed his prayer greeted everyone.
jalal: so my dear little one what did you ask from god?
ahan: two wishes.
abrar: and what are those two wishes?
abdul: let me guess umm choclates and cakes??
abrar: shutup up fatto.he doesnt always think about food like you..
jalal: guys quiet. so ahan what did you pray?
ahan( counting on his little fingers): number 1. mumma come fast to ahan.
number 2. angel meet his friend fast.
jalal confused with ahan's words ask him
jalal: ahan who is my friend?
ahan: jooaaa.
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jalal shocked with his answer ask ahan and came to know that his two devil
friends already said ahan that he misses his friend jodha urf jooaaa as
ahan couldnt spell name correctly .
jalal in his heart prayed to god if not his but alteast listen to ahan's prayer.

Not to make jalal remember morning
incident abrar and abdul diverted the topic asking silly questions to ahan and
that is when they hear sound of car and hearing it ahan shouted.
Ahan: mumma came mumma came..
and ran to hall ,jalal,abdul,abrar followed ahan to hall.
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hearing sound of car all the members of family gathered in hall to meet their laadli
priya.
priya who entered the mansion was taken into a quick hug by her bro sanjay who was
at entrance and then meet sunny both share a sister brother hug,and then she ran
towards raj and neelam who missed her alot . and atlast she called ahan
priya:Ahan baby where are you?look mumma is back.
ahan came running into his mothers arms and both shared a long hug,
priya kissed ahan all over his face and even ahan kissed his mom.
priya:how are baby?
ahan: good.
priya: i hope you were a good boy and didnt trouble anyone.
ahan: no. i good boy. mumma you know i got angel.
priya: is it?(ahan nods in yes)
priya: where is your angel?can mumma meet angel?
ahan nodding in yes and points his finger towards jalal...
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jalal who couldnt see priya's face as her back was facing him .
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priya turns to jalal...and they came face to face after a long time..
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silenced previled between them...
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one was happy to she her again and the other was happy to see him safe.
one was lost in her and the other was confused with her same questions of why,what
how etc.
realisation hit both..jalal realised that ahan is his son,his blood.
priya realised that he is ahan's angel.
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breaking the silence ahan introduce his mumma to jalal and his angel to
his mumma.
ahan: mumma (pointing to jalal) angel.
ahan: angel (pointing to priya) mumma.
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priya: you are the same person i have met in college right?
raj:do you know them?
priya narrates him the morning incident.raj who decided to not expand the topic
asked her about her journey.and priya explained him how she managed meeting
and reached back.
priya left to get fresh so that she can have dinner with her family..

note:
i hope you people dont mind my religious views.
and if i bothered any one please skip that part.
and i am sorry for late update..

~APPY 😉

Edited by zynahsiddiqi956 - 7 years ago
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Res
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Me First
So Jo<priya> Is Restless After Meeting Jalal
And Jalal Is Sad That She Went Away
Jo Friends Are Funny
Awww Ahan Is A Cute Boy
He Stained Jallu (angel) With Chocolates Lollz
Priya Is Back
So He Now Know That Ahan Is His Son
Waiting Wen Jo Will Have Her Memories Back
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Edited by Roulan15 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
wonderful I love there son very much his lovely way to make Jalal happy the way you write there part I always love that buddy I am waiting for next now that what will Jalal do after meeting Jodha now next update soon buddy.
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Posted: 7 years ago
hey nice update 👏😛
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Posted: 7 years ago


Wonderful update zayan 😊
JA was again shattered nt gtting Jo again... By the way y priya was restless n feeling fr JA n thinking abut him want his safety?? Is she really priya aur Jo??
Aww... I love ahaan he us so cuteee 🤗
Love Ahaan prt with everyone with Ja... Tht cake full mouth 😆 n then Ja bathing n running fr dressing him n Abdul abrar questions all...
Finally Ja n priya met 😃
N Ahaan both two wishes fulfill... 😃 his mumma come to him n Ja met his Joooaa 😃 😆
Waiting for nxt 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago


Thank you for pm 😊

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