MG- Tujhey Dhoondon Kahan Part 12 pg 54 - Page 20

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Hope the man in the forest is Maan
Geet must also take care of herself
update was Fantastic

thank you
forest????
no in village
yeah she must be
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 9
Geet put her hand on that guy's shoulder and he stopped and slowly turn around geet's vision got blurred due to her tears she quickly wiped her tears and looked him with a hope man asked her politely

Ji kahyee ap ne mjh kyun roka hy??

But words got strucked in her throat again tears flowing from her eyes he asked again

Ma ap sy keh raha hoon kuch kaam tha apko mjh sy??

In a mean while raju reached them and with a heavy breath he first looks arjun then geet and said

Arey yeh wohi hy geet ji jis kay lye hum aye thy yeh arjun hi hy!!

But he gets no reply

Geet ji!!

Geet ji!!

Hunh!!

She replied

Ma keh raha tha yeh wohi hy jo humey humarey village ma mila tha

With a shattered and heavy voice she said

Yeh who nhi hy...

Arey nhi geet ji yeh arjun hi hy!

Nhi nhi hy...

She take back step

Nhi hy!!

yeh marey maan nhi hy...

Nhi hy marey maan!!!

And turn around and sit on a bench beside a tree raju talked with arjun for a while and come towards geet and said

Sorry geet ji mjh bht afsos hy kay ye hap kay pati nhi hain pr kya kr sktey ma apki help yahin tak kr skta tha ab ma chalta hoon kabhi koi kaam ho to mjh yaad kyjye ga aur ma pray krn ga ka yap kay husband ap ki jaldi mil jyen apna khayal rakhye ga

Geet only nod raju leave from there geet stand and walk aimlessly on road tears flowing from her eyes


All flashes of maan came in her eyes she didn't know her destination and then she got hit with an old lady

Arey sambhal kay beta kahan chali jaa rhi ho?

Geet saw her with teary eyes

Pata nhi!!

Kuch pareshan ho kya??

Shyd!!

Acha! Aisa karo beti who samney dargah hy na wahan jaa kr kuch dair beith jao tumhein sukoon miley ga jao

Geet saw her and walk towards dargah she sits there and crying she shatterd and asked god

Kyun kyun kia hy ap ne aisa??

Kya ghalti thi meri?

Kyun ap ne mjh sy marey maan ko alag kia?

Aur ab jab kay ma unko dhondney ayi thi aur sirf ek umeed bachi thi marey pass wo bhi ap ne mjh sy cheen li!!!

Kya karon gi ma ab, kaisey jeyoon ?

Kahan dhondon gi apney maan ko?

Koi umeed koi roshni nhi hy marey pas?

Hy koi jawab ap kay pass?

Kyun nhi mila dety mjh sy marey maan ko?

Plz mjh marey maan wapis dey dyjye!!

Bus mjh marey maan chahye aur mjh kuch nhi chahye!!

Maaan!!!

Maan wapis ajyee maan!!

Wapis ajayee!!

She is crying so furiously she have no clue what to do and suddenly someone patted her head she saw a Baba standing there and said

Mat ro beti!!

To ma kya karon baba koi rasta koi roshni nhi hy...

Beti jab saarey raastey band ho jatey hain na to phr upar wala khud raasta bana deta hy bus us upar waly py vishwas rakho wo tumhari madad khud karey ga aur jo koi bhi yahan mannat mangta hy na uski mannat zaror puri hoti hy tum bhi jo maang rhi ho wo tumhein zaror mily ga bus thora intezaar karo wo upar wala tumharey lye raasta zaror banaye ga shabash uth jao

After he leave geet wiped her tears washed her face and pray


After that she reached near her car and sat at tea stall a bus stand is there with heavy crowd geet sip her tea and looked passengers there then there came a bus which is already filled people climbed in bus and within a minutes bus leave geet saw an old man run behind a bus but didn't catch it and he stumbled and fall geet hurriedly goes towards him and help him to stand and ask worriedly

Kaka kahin lagi to nhi apko?

Oldman saw her and said

Nhi beta par meri bus!!!

Koi baat nhi kaka doosri lay lyjye ga

Arey nhi beta doosri to agley month aye gi

What!! Agely month!

Haan betaji aur us may to meri cycle bhi thi ab ma kaisey ghar jaon ga

Acha ek minute kaka ap idhar aye marey sath

She dragged him towards her table and make him sit and offers a glass of water

Yeh lyjye phele ap apni pee lyjye..

He drank water then geet asked

Ab bataye kya hoa ab ghar kyun nhi ja sktey

Beti asal ma yeh bus ab next month aye gi aur us ma meri cycle bhi chali gyi

Pr next month kyun kaka?

Kyun kay humarey village koi bus nhi jaati yeh hi ek bus hy jo humarey village kay raastey kay qareeb hy phele hum iss bus ko latey hain yeh humein humarey village kay near road py utar deti hy phr wahan sy 6 hours lag jatey hain cycle py jaaney ma

Itna time! pr wahan koi bus kyun nhi jaati?

Beti asal ma humara village koi bht badha nhi hy bus yeh hi koi 10 sy 12 ghar hain aur bht door bhi hy

Aj kal kay time ma bhi aisi jagah hy jahan saari fascilties nhi hain yeh to bht ghalat baa thy

Ab kya kar sktey hain beti?

Ab tum hi batao ma ghar kaisey jaon ga

Hmmm

She thinks for a while and said

Ma apko ap kay ghar chor deti hoon ap pareshan mat hoyee

Arey nhi beti ap itni door sirf mjh chorney kahan jao gi apko takleef hogi

Arey kaka beti bhi keh rhy hain aur mana bhi kr rhy hain to bus decide hoa ma apko ap kay ghar chor deti hoon

Nhi beti ap itni takleef nhi karo ap to mjh jaanti bhi nhi ho

Arey nhi kaka jab koi apna ghar nhi phonchta na to us kay ghar walon ko bht takleef hoti hy aur yeh mjh sy behtar koi nhi jaanta

Beta sab theek to hy na?

Arey kuch nhi kaka ap ayee marey sath aur baatein to hoti hi rhein gi itna lamba safar jo hy

She smiled And they sit in the car and goes for new destination geet thought

Jis tarah yeh kaka apney ghar ki taraf jaa rhy hain maan ap bhi ajyee na hum ap ka wait kr rhy hain...



sorry for the spellings and mistakes


Edited by nehaa9 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update.
Loved it.
Thanks for d pm:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update..
Thank you for pm..
Waiting for next update..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update dear
Liked it!!
The men whom Geet was chasing turned out to be someone else . Geet was shattered that she couldn't find her Maan. After offering her prayers in Dargha Geet got a ray of hope to find her Maan. Geet was all set to help the oldman. Hope she meets her Maan in the oldman's village.
Thanks for the pm !
:))
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Posted: 7 years ago

Amazing n emotional update
Edited by priyasree - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
nice update
helpless geet reach dargah where baba give her hope
geet is helping old maan to reach his home thinking like him maan also trying to reach home
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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks 4 da pm! emotional update! well written! Geet shattered not finding Maan! she goes 2 the dargah! she gets a ray of hope from the baba! update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update buddy
Geet is shattered and losing hope
She prays at a Dargah
She now find an old man nd helping him
hope she finds maan soon
cont soon buddy
thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
i hope maaneet mil jaaye

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