AMBEER OS : I NEED YOU || MAY 23rd

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Posted: 8 years ago
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~I NEED YOU~

Abeer are you OK? Asked a sleepy Amala she was sleeping soundly and peacefully with him after all the trials and tribulations of their life, now she was no more afraid. She was contended, secured and happy with Abeer beside her. He truly loved her he was the one who gave her strength to fight for her rights for justice along with karuna aunty.

Amala opened her eyes only to find Abeer missing she didn't have to find any proof where he could be. He was disturbed she knew that Abeer was certainly not fine. She came down only to see him in the kitchen. She could see the traces of tears in his eyes, no matter how much he tries he is always caught. She didn't know how and when she had started reading his face, his emotions, his tired expressions, his insecurities that he always tries to hide.

Abeer what happened ? Asked Amala, she had known that after today's incident he will be again lost in the past that was difficult for them to endure , they can never forget the time neither they can move forward. It always takes a lot for them to take a step forward and the next moment they find themselves standing two steps backward. Difficulties were always there, life was full of changes and challenges and both of them had started living with the same.

Abeer had sensed her in the kitchen, he had been lost the day when he saw the accusing eyes of the girl who knew that the truth behind their relationship. No matter how much he will try he was the culprit, her culprit. Her life would have been different if that day hadn't come but sadly he knew that, it was that moment which joined them together to make them begin a new journey. He knew that if that day had been prevented somehow then he would not have his love supporting him now amidst all his faults and follies. But he was ready to give her a new hope. He knew that his love was not that shallow or demanding.

Abeer tried to look away still he couldn't he knew that she will question him but he was not in a position to say anything now he was one of her culprits and he was bestowed with her unconditional love instead of the punishment that he deserved .

Nothing, Abeer replied hiding his tears but she knew that he was crying, his unsaid tears says it all. No matter how many times she had assured him of her feelings but she knew that he was scared that he will lose her at the end. Frankly Amala knew that it was not his fault, the situations and the events that followed made them so fragile and scared. Amala looked into his dark chocolate eyes which were lost in the pain and despair. Trying to alleviate his pain and longing she asked again.

Abeer what happened? Amala asked again in order to make him feel good but the next moment he broke down in her arms, his tears fell on her shoulder and he confessed.

I don't deserve you Amala. Today that girl Sneha she was looking at me like I will hurt you. I was the one who is the reason of your pain Amala.

Abeer we are over this, you know I love you right? nothing matters to us , that was our past Amala asked him looking into his eyes

I loved you from the moment I saw you Amala. But I was the one who write tears in your eyes. Abeer confessed for the first time. He had fell for her when he saw her at Suveer's engagement for the first time but never said anything.

Amala was astonished she had always thought that he felt sorry for her , he was one of her culprits but he didn't do anything yet he was a part of the crime and now her life always

You loved me Abeer? She asked

I have always loved you Amala, I needed you for the rest of my life but I unknowingly become the reason of your pain.

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that was just a one shot.

waiting for reviews 😳😳😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
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That was short yet so sweet! 😳😳
Beautifully written.⭐️
Loved the way you expressed Abeer's pain
Keep writing more😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..MysticAura..

That was short yet so sweet!😳😳

Beautifully written.⭐️
Loved the way you expressed Abeer's pain
Keep writing more😃

thank you
will try to write more 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very sweet OS suhana❤️😳
wow I was away for few days and you guys filled this forum with beautiful stories
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice... 😊 it was very simple and too sweet... Love ambeer...
Beautifully written...
Keep writing... 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was a great one shot! ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice OS... 👏
keep writing...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is a wonderful piece of work👏👏
Loved it
Keep writing
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaana

thank you
will try to write more 😳



Very nice ... 😳 waiting for next part pls

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