AarYa OS: Faith in Love

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sharlene1410
Beautiful ⭐️

thaaankuuu Didi of mine 😊

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VICKY126

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Wow! such an interesting os.Aarti Lost her baby while trying to help others.she had to go emotional and physical pain because Yash did'nt understand her.he finally understood her pain when he was about losing her,and reconciled with her.loved how they first met and how Yash changed her from an insecure girl to a confident woman.such a lovely os.Thanks for the pm

Edited by VICKY126 - 8 years ago

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Yay, it's my 29,700th posts and I dedicate it you 🤗

I wish I could analyze the way you do after you read a story, any story. (One more Reason to Envy you 😳).

No seriously Tess, I feel that whatever I write won't do justice to what you show in your stories. That is why I am always late in giving my feedback as it takes me time to analyze your stories. In the process I end up forgetting what I have read and then I've to read them all over again (which is like Bonus for me 😳).

Coming to this OS...

I noticed one thing, Aarti didn't went alone, she had Ram Dulare with her when she saved that girl and in the process lost her own child right? Then why didn't Yash blame RD and lashed out at him? Why did he blame only Aarti? Why did he ended up hurting Aarti so much so that she had to leave him?

Well (in my personal opinion) a person gets hurt the most by the person whom he loves the most. In this case he was hurt that Aarti didn't listen to him and went out and in the process lost their unborn child. That is why he didn't blame RD but only Aarti.

He hurt Aarti because he was hurting. Once again (in my personal opinion) when are hurting in the most possible way, we (unintentionally) end up hurting the one whom we love the most. That is why he didn't lash out at RD, but only at Aarti.

They were a team, they were one. They shared everything together. They had a understanding and trust. When Aarti didn't listen to him and went out, he was not with her. He was not there to save that girl. Had he been in Aarti's place and saved that girl, their baby would have be alive and with them.

I think, by blaming Aarti he was blaming himself for he was not there at that moment.

Maybe I'm wrong in analyzing this, but this is what I felt after reading this OS.

I loved the fact that Aarti didn't forgive him that easily. I also loved the fact that this time he didn't give up and picked her up and staked his claim on her. His actions is what made Aarti to finally vent out all the suppressed anger, guilt and all pent up emotions.

Finally they were able to connect at a very deep and emotional level. Which strengthened their bond and relationship forever.

Loved every bit of this OS. ⭐️

And it was a pleasure to read it again before finally commenting.

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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: VICKY126
Wow! such an interesting os.Aarti Lost her baby while trying to help others.she had to go emotional and physical pain because Yash did'nt understand her.he finally understood her pain when he was about losing her,and reconciled with her.loved how they first met and how Yash changed her from an insecure girl to a confident woman.such a lovely os.Thanks for the pm

Thank you Vicky, loved your comment 😃. I have not thought about it until I read your response but the fact that Aarti could actually stand up to is testimony to how confident she became that she could lash back for being wronged.

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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki
Yay, it's my 29,700th posts and I dedicate it you🤗
I wish I could analyze the way you do after you read a story, any story. (One more Reason to Envy you😳).

No seriously Tess, I feel that whatever I write won't do justice to what you show in your stories. That is why I am always late in giving my feedback as it takes me time to analyze your stories. In the process I end up forgetting what I have read and then I've to read them all over again (which is like Bonus for me😳).

Coming to this OS...

I noticed one thing, Aarti didn't went alone, she had Ram Dulare with her when she saved that girl and in the process lost her own child right? Then why didn't Yash blame RD and lashed out at him? Why did he blame only Aarti? Why did he ended up hurting Aarti so much so that she had to leave him?

Well (in my personal opinion) a person gets hurt the most by the person whom he loves the most. In this case he was hurt that Aarti didn't listen to him and went out and in the process lost their unborn child. That is why he didn't blame RD but only Aarti.

He hurt Aarti because he was hurting. Once again (in my personal opinion) when are hurting in the most possible way, we (unintentionally) end up hurting the one whom we love the most. That is why he didn't lash out at RD, but only at Aarti.

They were a team, they were one. They shared everything together. They had a understanding and trust. When Aarti didn't listen to him and went out, he was not with her. He was not there to save that girl. Had he been in Aarti's place and saved that girl, their baby would have be alive and with them.

I think, by blaming Aarti he was blaming himself for he was not there at that moment.

Maybe I'm wrong in analyzing this, but this is what I felt after reading this OS.

I loved the fact that Aarti didn't forgive him that easily. I also loved the fact that this time he didn't give up and picked her up and staked his claim on her. His actions is what made Aarti to finally vent out all the suppressed anger, guilt and all pent up emotions.

Finally they were able to connect at a very deep and emotional level. Which strengthened their bond and relationship forever.

Loved every bit of this OS.⭐️
And it was a pleasure to read it again before finally commenting.

awww thaaankuuu for the dedication my sweet Alien Didu🤗. as for analysis, I already told you that there is no right or wrong way, as long as you can substantiate your views. You do that so wonderfully! Please stop doubting yourself!😡

Yes, I agree with you as to why Yash did not blame Ramdulare for the incident. We only lash out at those we consider as our own, and yes he displaces his own guilt onto Aarti hurting her unintentionally. But once he realizes his error, he can't take it back as he looks down into the angry stream carrying her away from him. So he has to earn back Aarti's faith when he gets a second chance. Also, it was because he made her realize her own strength that she is able to make him fight to have her back.

Edited by Tessaloni - 8 years ago