RS : NK drabble : I'M SORRY (16-09-2017)

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Sanvee_R

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Sanvee_R

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Posted: 8 years ago

Suddenly mujeh usspe daya aagayi😆

Toh Batao...Kaisa laga?😳

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pabzavneil

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Posted: 8 years ago

No expectations from that evil Amol..BTW nice story..felt good reading it..It was soo sweet.I imagined the Avneil part and was grinning like an idiot

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__VIHU

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Posted: 8 years ago

SANJU.. How emotional..

So heartfelt..

But when Avni required he wasn't with her instead was planning against her. The day he'll crave for his sister she won't be against him but not with him too.

All deeds good or bad comes back when you're in best condition to learn a lesson of life... That's exactly what will happen with Amol.

Your writing is something that introduces us to every dimension of NK story..

Love you Ms RS QUEEN❤️

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pabzavneil
No expectations from that evil Amol..BTW nice story..felt good reading it..It was soo sweet.I imagined the Avneil part and was grinning like an idiot

Mujeh bhi koi umeed nhi hai usse...bas khayal aaya toh likhdiya 😳

Thank-you 😊

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Sanvee_R

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vu1998
SANJU.. How emotional..
So heartfelt..
But when Avni required he wasn't with her instead was planning against her. The day he'll crave for his sister she won't be against him but not with him too.
All deeds good or bad comes back when you're in best condition to learn a lesson of life... That's exactly what will happen with Amol.

Your writing is something that introduces us to every dimension of NK story..
Love you Ms RS QUEEN❤️

Vihu...🤗

@bold...that's exactly what I thought ...😊

This is the first title I get vihu...RS QUEEN ... and I love it...

Thank-you ❤️

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

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Posted: 8 years ago

I was confused whom you were talking of . Amol should be 15 or 16 . I dunno what is his age in the show . He attends college . Tume Daya kaise ayi uspe . That little demon should rot for his deeds . And a doubt juvenile se ek sal mei riha kar denge ? For all he did one year is like one day . You have to credit Daya here . She never involved her in any misdeeds . Everything was did only by Amol and the plans too were his . Daya is simply scot free . Puri tarah FASA ke rakhi hai mere pote keh keh ke . Master plan of Daya .

He will,never get Avni by his side when is gonna plead . She won't hate him but she will not easily forgive .

Your writing is marvelous as it is . Enjoyed it .

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Sanvee_R

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
I was confused whom you were talking of . Amol should be 15 or 16 . I dunno what is his age in the show . He attends college . Tume Daya kaise ayi uspe . That little demon should rot for his deeds . And a doubt juvenile se ek sal mei riha kar denge ? For all he did one year is like one day . You have to credit Daya here . She never involved her in any misdeeds . Everything was did only by Amol and the plans too were his . Daya is simply scot free . Puri tarah FASA ke rakhi hai mere pote keh keh ke . Master plan of Daya .
He will,never get Avni by his side when is gonna plead . She won't hate him but she will not easily forgive .

Your writing is marvelous as it is . Enjoyed it .

I actually wanted to maintain suspense , issliye i didn't mention jail and stuff in the beginning...iso..Toda confusion hosakta hai...I agree..

Juvenile ko maximum 2 saal se zyaada term nahi hota

So...for this story I considered it as one yr...I know , he is beyond redemption...but this is just a thought...😳

Thank-you dear😊

Edited by ...san... - 8 years ago