My First story :Love by chance Part 10 pg 128 Oct 8

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Harshita Srivastava

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Posted: 7 years ago

#521

Originally posted by: Muskan193
Congrates for 100 pages dear...
Update was really very nice
Ishra nok joke was just too much
I loved that part
Raman bhi na he almost broked his bhais secret
I lovedd the idea of mihir being elder than raman
Oh teri ishu ne suspense thod di
Appa amma were shocked
Update soon dear
Thanks for pm akku

Thx Anju..
I m glad u liked my concept..

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Harshita Srivastava

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Posted: 7 years ago

#522

Hlw frnds here m to thank all of for your love & appreciation bcoz of which this story completed 100 pages ..so thank you everyone...

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Harshita Srivastava

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Posted: 7 years ago

#523

Here is the next part enjoy..

Part -9

Appa - wo to h BT phr bhi mai apni betiyon ki marzi ke Bina unki shadi nhi krunga bolo mihku tum kya chahti ho.

Mihika was totally silent while ishita was saying her - akka isse achha mauka nhi milega bta do appa ko jiju or apke baare mein.. BT mihika was scared of amma ..seeing no other way ishita said - appa akka loves someone listening this her parents was totally shocked.. while mihika saw her shockingly..

Amma - whattt?? ye tum kya bol rhe ho ishu..kya ye sach h..ishita nodded

Amma - ye mai kya sun rhi hu mihku tum yahi SB krne college jati thi..bolo bol kyun nhi rhi..bolo she said loudly make mihika cry..seeing her crying ishu took her in side hug & said

Ishita - plz amma akka ko aise mt daanto jiju is very nice person

Amma - shut up ishu don't teach me ..or by the way u r equally involved in it..from now tum dono kahi nhi jaoge smjhi jao apne room mein appa was listening everything bt now he couldn't stop himself & said

Appa - stop madhu plz keep silent for sometime

Amma - pr vishwa

Appa - Maine kaha naa chup rho itni der se tum bol rhe thi tb mai saant tha naa so now can I speak? Amma nodded

Appa - uska naam kya h mihku..

Ishita - Mihir naam h jiju ka appa she was saying while appa glared him & she became silent

Appa - SB tu hi bta Degi to WO kya bolege use bhi bolne de
Ishita nodded looking down

Appa - kaisa ldka h or tum dono KB se jante ho ek dusre ko or tmne kuch aisa to nhi kiya naa jisse tmhre appa kya sir jhuke

Mihika (immediately)- nhi appa hmne aisa kuch nhi kiya ki apko sharminda hona pde...

Appa - Thk h phr kl us ldke ko bula lo mujhe usse milna h..listening this both sisters hugs each other in happiness bt amma became angry

Amma - what are you saying vishwa ? unhe dantne ke bajaye tum unhe encourage kr rhe ho..

Appa - nhi madhu mai bs unhe ek mauka de rha apni baat rakhne ka na ki abhi mai unse agree hu..

Amma - bt

Appa - no bt I think mujhe Jo bolna tha wo bol diya ..

Amma - karo Jo krna h meri sunta hi kon h saying she went inside her room meanwhile appa also starts going out when ishmi called him - appa listening them he turned

IshMi - are you agree with us BT plz appa don't be hmne kuch glt nhi kiya believe us

Appa - I m not angry with you kanna bcoz I know mere betiyan kbhi koi aisa kaam kr hi nhi skti jisse mera sir kisi ke same jhuke bt ha aj tm dono ne mujhe bhut hurt kiya h maine kbhi tum dono ko kisi bhi kaam ke liye main nhi kiya always encourage you even whenever ur amma try to scolds you I m always there to protect you or take side maine hmesha bola ki mujhe tum dono apna appa nhi frnd smjho or u can share everything with me bt shayad tum dono ne mujhe ish layak nhi smjha sayad mere hi pyar mein kuch kami hogi

Ishita - no appa don't say like that u r worlds best father

Mihika - yes appa hm apko btane hi wale the plz ish baar hme maaf kr dijiye next time se aisa kbhi nhi hoga saying both hods their ears & starts crying appa open his arms for them & both hugged him tightly ..

Appa - OK kya ab mujhe ek cup coffee mil skti h..

Ishita - of course ap dono baitho mai abhi ishita special world's best coffee bna ke Lati hu saying she went & mihika or appa sat there..

In evening
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Mihika called mihir..

Mihir - ha mihku bol kaise h tu ..

Mihika - mihir ek bhut important baat krni h ..

Mihir - what happened mihiku? U r sounding so tense any prblm then mihika narrates him everything

Mihir - omg mihiku ab kya hoga?

Mihika - kya hoga mtlb buddhu tumhe kl mere amma appa se Milne aana hoga..

Mihir - okk mihku pr wo maan jayenge naa

Mihika - mujhe bhi darr lg rha h pr tum tension mt lo I know appa will like you..

Mihir - or tumhari amma

Mihika - shayad wo nhi tum ab jyada socho mt bs kl time pe subah 10 bje pahuch Jana

Mihir - okk waise ek baat to h mere SIL tumse jyada brave h ..

Mihika - ha wo to h bt yrr us time to mujhe aise laga jaise kisi ne mera oxygen mask nikal diya mai to totally shocked thi ..

Mihir - yrr mihku pr agr ishu nhi bolti to tum nhi mana krti us alliance ko

Mihika - nhi mihir aisa nhi h bs mai thodi dar gyi thi bt now everything is smooth bs ab kl SB Thk ho

Mihir - hmm I hope so achha mai kl time pe subah pahuch jaunga okk

Mihika - hmm OK bye

Mihir - bye saying both hung their call
After disconnecting the call mihir narrates everything to Raman who was coming to call him bt seeing him on call he stopped there & starts wait for ending his call

Raman - omg bhai jhalli to bhut daring h

Mihir - hmm yr h to pr one second you again called her jhalli kyu uska naam bigaadh rha h tu yrr

Raman - aap bde possessive h uske liye or waise bhi its between us so you plz interfere mt kro saying he went from there

Mihir - ohho mai inke beech interfere na kru kahi daal mein kuch kala to nhi pta lagana pdega pr abhi nhi phle apni setting kr lu phr kuch or..

Next day in iyer house
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Ishita - akka abhi tk jiju aaye nhi

Mihika - wahi to mai bhi soch rhi hu yrr..they are still talking when their doorbell rings

Ishita - lagta h aa gye mai dekhti hu saying she went to open the door & saw mihir was standing there seeing each other both smiles

Ishita- welcome jiju from now ur going to my official jiju

Mihir - thx yrr I hope aisa hi ho..

Ishita - aisa hi hoga u know I m so happy to see you here she was saying when she heard Raman

Raman - or mujhe dekhkr jhalli..

Ishita - tum LRLL tm yahan kya kr rhe ho..

Raman - ldke wala hu jara respect se baat kro

Ishita - respect my foot

Mihir - guys plz don't start now or ishu ishe mai laya hu I hope u understand

Ishita - OK jiju for u I can tolerate him

Mihir - thanks ishu ab chale andar ya yahi khadhe rakhna h..

Ishita - sorry jiju aaye mai amma appa ko bulati hu saying she went to called her parents

Raman - bhai ap hmesha usi ko support krte ho dekhna after ur marriage mai mihika Bhabhi ko apni side pe krunga..

Mihir - kr Lena bhai phle use Teri Bhabhi to banne de ander chl saying both entered in her house & settled on sofa..after sometimes appa & amma came seeing them both brothers stand up & greet them then appa told them to settle..

Appa - madhu kuch naste pani ka arrangement kro

Mihir - nhi uncle uski koi jrur nhi when Raman cuts him

Raman - kya jrurt nhi h bhai ek to khud kuch khaya nhi tension mein or mujhe bhi nhi khane diya ab uncle jb puch rhe h to ap mana kr rhe h..mihir glared him while ishmi laughs

Ishita - akka ye to pura bhookad h

Mihika - don't say like that yrr bechara bhooka h chl hm kuch bnate

Mihir - uncle uski baat mt suniye ye aise hi bol rha h

Appa (smiles)- arey koi nhi beta hm waise bhi hmare yahan aye guest ko kuch khaye Bina nhi Jane dete..

Raman - yahi baat mujhe Indians ki bhut achhi lgti h uncle

Appa - Indians ki mtlb tum bhi to Indian ho naa

Ishita - nhi appa he is LRLL

Appa - Ye LRLl kya h?while mihika & Raman glared her

Mihika - kuch nhi appa wo Raman abhi kuch time phle hi London se pdhai complete krke aaya h

Appa - ohh that's great

Mihika - hmm ap log baitho hm kuch nasta late h saying both went from there..

That's all for now frnds.. I hope u all liked it bcoz do comments &hit like button..

PS - frnds I want to ask you something that are you not liking this story so tell me I will end this story asap bcoz in comparison of my other stories this one was not getting that much appreciation ..so plz tell me I will do as ur wish.. 😛

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aymin

@aymin

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Posted: 7 years ago

#524

Awesome fantastic shot

Too good

Please cont yaar

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Sunshine_DivAn

@Sunshine_DivAn

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Posted: 7 years ago

#525

Congratsss harshii for completing 100 pages 👏

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Sunshine_DivAn

@Sunshine_DivAn

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Posted: 7 years ago

#526

Awesome update harshii
Loved it..
Ishra are so cute..
Appa is so understanding yrr..
Loved ishra nok jhok..
Mihir thinks "daal mein kuch kala h" 😉
Raman is so cute yrr..
Bechara bhooka tha bcoz of his bhai..
Loved when ishita again say LRLL infront of appa..
Yrr please please continue this story..
One if my fav story of urs..simple sweet & light heartened..
Continue soon
Thx for pm

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Sarthi Sharda

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Posted: 7 years ago

#527

Awesome lovely superb update dear

Plz continue soon plz

Thanks for the pm

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sanjana_nanda

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Posted: 7 years ago

#528

Very nice update...

thanks for the pm

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Rithika

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Posted: 7 years ago

#529

Awesome update dii
Loved it
Don't end this story dii
Ishu is so daring
She just blurted it out
Ishra bickering are so cute
Waiting for next part dii
Update soon
Thnx for the pm