Maithu
it was just amazing!!
not to compare, but I am so much into your writings... while WWW was a short melody this was a beautiful complete song with all the necessary rhythms. just imagined them danching with your song...
Just loved Suraj, proving he is the most and best romantic person ever, coming up with hot, sensual environment to make it special for his most special lady.
just loved his care and he was holding his world in his hands with utmost care not to bring any pain at any cost even in the fullest pleasure... What to say! you floored us Suraj.
Chakor, i felt she was dam cute rightly said by Suraj in the show zero in romance hahah only her jungli billi traits works but when the sun is in full power what can the bird do but just get engrossed in its power.
The otherwise brilliant girl was melting like wax and being molded like a clay in his hands... was feeling a sense of happiness that the girl who has never lived her life and was always worried about others is in the most safest hands, living her life and being loved by the best person in the world.
It was ofcourse yes hot, the lust was too beautifully explained but definitely not vulgar at all as I had a laugh all through and did not squirm reading through!!!!
A good one and a well needed one at the current stage of the show.
Keep it up Maithu
sorry for a long post!