OS: X-Rated Honeymoon (06/09) - Page 6

Originally posted by: katheriene

Awesome, Sukor romance freaking hot, you increased the temperature🤪

Loved the flirty suraj & shy chakor😉

It was not vulgar

Waiting for more writeups from you

Originally posted by: -K.Kapoor-

Pheww ... I need air after that 1😉!!! Super hot OS , definitely worth the wait. U are an amazing writer👏. Thank u 4 the PM.

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Originally posted by: A.Theepa

Loved loved loved
Awsome super Hot os 👏

Originally posted by: amrutha131

This is not fair Maithu😛 I live in Chennai and reading this, imagine how much I am sweating😛
Enjoyed reading it😳
Waiting for ur upcoming stories !!

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Amazing 👏

Super hot ! loved it.

Enjoyed their cute fights and how Suraj tried to make Chakor feel more relaxed.

Loved flirty Suraj, Chakor was very cute.

Originally posted by: sumsukor

Maithu

it was just amazing!!

not to compare, but I am so much into your writings... while WWW was a short melody this was a beautiful complete song with all the necessary rhythms. just imagined them danching with your song...

Just loved Suraj, proving he is the most and best romantic person ever, coming up with hot, sensual environment to make it special for his most special lady.

just loved his care and he was holding his world in his hands with utmost care not to bring any pain at any cost even in the fullest pleasure... What to say! you floored us Suraj.

Chakor, i felt she was dam cute rightly said by Suraj in the show zero in romance hahah only her jungli billi traits works but when the sun is in full power what can the bird do but just get engrossed in its power.

The otherwise brilliant girl was melting like wax and being molded like a clay in his hands... was feeling a sense of happiness that the girl who has never lived her life and was always worried about others is in the most safest hands, living her life and being loved by the best person in the world.

It was ofcourse yes hot, the lust was too beautifully explained but definitely not vulgar at all as I had a laugh all through and did not squirm reading through!!!!

A good one and a well needed one at the current stage of the show.

Keep it up Maithu

sorry for a long post!

Originally posted by: taahir004

A Beautiful and Sizzling OS

Both learning the art of love and the fact that Suraj just made everything so

comfortable for his Biwi was awesome

Originally posted by: Parud7

Omg maithu I'm blushing so hard 😆

Its very hot update but nothing seems to be vulger

She is very soft n cute...he should be careful 😆

I'm thinking what will be the next ??

Thanks for the pm dear 😊

Update soon

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj

Hi sis..

It was a very hot update sis..

Omg..its sweating here..what did u do with us sis..😛

It s not at all a vulgar one..

Here chakor was so shy..and suraj was impossible..

The way suraj flirt with chakor was fabulous..especially a car scenes..

Loved it a lot..

Eagerly waiting for ur new story sis..

Luv u..tc