RS:one shot: (26-08-17): Juhi track - Page 2

Originally posted by: SweetgirlSami1

Brilliant. Wonderful. Hats off to u sanju

Originally posted by: sushfiza

Very nice

Originally posted by: castrafa

wow beautifully written. 👏 lovely

i hope this happens but i don't want Neil to even hug Juhi lol😆 Neil is 4 Avni only 😉

Originally posted by: shikhsk

Very beautifully depicted

Originally posted by: anumiklove

aap toh avni se bhi jada possessive hai 😉

Originally posted by: vu1998

Sanju... Haath kahan hai tumhare. I wanna kiss them for this wonderful piece of writing..

It was soo my types.. Loved it..

Hum hi kyun? This was really nice..

Hope the show handles juhi track as sensibly as you did..

Beautiful.. 👏

Originally posted by: nina282

Loved it

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Beautiful OS :)

Loved it :)

Originally posted by: preya_radev

sanju is back whoop whoop whoop
baby u dont know how much i loved this it was just awesome... i actually loved it... the way neil was sittinf on the arm chair waiting for avni to wake up then how he went closer to her told her he loves her how avni too confessed then neil getting under the comforter and his "oh hoo shots madam"... to how juhi told neil to confess he love to avni... and how neil told avni to sleep as even he didnt sleep the whole night while cuddling closer to her and told her to wear shorts every night... u did a mind blowing job sanju baby... now my usual thing please update your other rs soon missing them badly

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

O man ! this was so wonderful .

And your dialogues were so good . Mei bar bar padnewali hon 😃

Mere sath hi kyu ?_💔 That was the best dialogues .

And my favorite giraftar dialogue ☺️ It's such hot .

At last hamari buddhu Avni ko samajh aa gayi ki she loves him .

I really wanted something beautiful like this in show too . I want Neil himself to explain to Avni rather than Swetha narrating half-baked storied to her .

I was carried away to a Tamil film while reading your OS . What you wrote was the climax of the film

Originally posted by: Deepti_98

Hi Sanju, I loved this so damn much!
This one was amazing!
The dialogues, intensity, confession every thing was perfect...
This was beautifully penned
Hope to see something similar in the serial too...

Originally posted by: pri12

Sanju it was so amazing...So many emotions in one part...

You are amazing yaar

Originally posted by: Ravinanaik

Nice one

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Fantastic update
Juhi understood that she has no place for her in Neil's life

Originally posted by: Kshailja

I am grinning hard ...

I just hope ki show mein bhi kuchh aisa hi ho...

And Avni humesha khud sab kuchh decide kr k sacrifice Kyu krne lag jati h.. pagli h... Ek baar Neil ka bhi sun le..

And bas Juhi k aate hi Neil Avni ko na bhool jaye, I mean usko ignore na Kar de...

And I hope this too ki Juhi itni hi achhi ho...

Bas hope hope hope... Hope pe hi duniya kaayam h..

And you write so well and good good...

Sab kuchh achha achha hua...

I just loved it...

Plus I loved that part where Neil got into the comforter and said that ohho Shorts.. Totally imagined it...

I am so so so Happy after reading your one shot...

Love you for writing this OS...

Keep writing.

Originally posted by: preya_radev

sanju is back whoop whoop whoop
baby u dont know how much i loved this it was just awesome... i actually loved it... the way neil was sittinf on the arm chair waiting for avni to wake up then how he went closer to her told her he loves her how avni too confessed then neil getting under the comforter and his "oh hoo shots madam"... to how juhi told neil to confess he love to avni... and how neil told avni to sleep as even he didnt sleep the whole night while cuddling closer to her and told her to wear shorts every night... u did a mind blowing job sanju baby... now my usual thing please update your other rs soon missing them badly

thankyou sonaa😃😃yaar..kya karu...sab idea beech mein atak jaate hai...i have about a half dozen stories which i started and left in middle...us mein se aliya ka shaadi track bhi hai ek..rs wala..i will update...par abhi nahi...waqt lagega...meanwhile i can write such os ..so agar tumhe koi scene chahiye toh..tell me..i'll try to write one os on that situation...😳