ishra new story ( mature)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi friends, this is the first time I am writing something on IF.


I read so much stories on IF, but never wrote anything but today I am writing a story. I don't know if it wil SS or FF but it will be little mature, hope u all love it



Index

Prologue - below
Character sketch - page 2
Part 1 - Page 3
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Of course we will love to be read
Continue soon dear
Waiting for an update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Prologue


An orphan girl Ishita who lives in orphanage till 18 year from her birth she is beautiful and full of life girl every one loves her but as per a orphanage rule she need to do job and this orphanage and she get job of baby sitting 6month old girl who is India no 1 billioner Mr Raman Kumar Bhalla daughter who is married to an model Shagun Arora.

She came in Bhalla mansion to baby sits Ruhi Bhalla daughter of Shagun and Raman but become Raman's care taker

she gave him everything which he asked
and some time he ask her herself which she gave him without any questions

Now question is what was that relation to be called, extra material affair, teenage attraction or pure lust,
as love means what she doesn't know yet
Edited by dakshumhatre - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Character sketch:-

Raman kumar Bhalla-
He is our main lead 30 year old Indians most famous business man. he is awesome in his look as well as intelligence. he is married to a model shagun arora due to some personal problem and now they have daughter Ruhi who is 6 month old and apple of her papa eye

Ishita -
she is our main lead. she is just 17 years old. when she was 1 month old some one kept her on the door of orphanage from that she lives there . she is totally jolly person and has secret crush on mr. raman kumar bhalla, she always see dreams to be with RKB from the day she has seen his pic in newspaper 1 year ago
she is already love with him and ready to do some not so good things to be with him

Shagun Arora - villain
She is model by profession before marriage when her career is going down using some Chip trick she got married to Raman with help of her boyfriend for her luxurious and now she is having extra material affair with his long term boyfriend (Ashok Khanna)

Shubhramyam Iyer
He is not so good person. Has bad eyes on girls. He is lusting on Ishu from the day he has seen her but not getting any chance.

Ashok Khanna
Rival of RKB. with Shagun to humiliate Raman, makes many plan to defect Raman and losses terriblely

Mihir Arora
Raman's manager and best friend in relationship with his special

Mihika
she is Ishu true friend. loves to do adventure.

rest will be introduced as per story progress 😉
Edited by dakshumhatre - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome story dear waiting eagerly for next part please please please update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting prologue
update soon
please do pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Waiting pm me when u update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats on ur new story..
Interesting concept
Will love to read
Do continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi,
My this story is form of diary written by Ishita
as in orphanage she doesn't have close friend with whom she can share her personal life

Part 1

Dairy


hi, Dear Dairy today I have super news to share with you.
what that was your question is right, I will tell you
I got job yes you heard correct I got job, and that to my favourite. I need to take care of small baby who around 6 months old. I know what are thinking that how come I got this job and how will I leave this orphanage before 18 year completed to me
so for your kind information I will become 18 after 3 months
so I need to go after that and mam also gave me permission regarding this and about this job well actually this job is offer to vandu akka but as per job policy person need to take care of baby 24 hours and vandu can't take care of this baby 24 hours as Bala jiju and her marriage is fixed so I willingly told that I will do this job and I got it
tomorrow I will go there and leave this orphanage.
I was facing mixed emotions sad for living this orphanage and super excited to work on my first job.
Dairy do u know who are they where I will work I have search in Google using shubbu phone that they are so big personality. Mr Raman Kumar Bhalla India's top most business man he is way too handsome when I saw his pic I felt my heart beat has fasten and Shagun Arora Bhalla India's no one model she was also beautiful well more like sexy, Her most of pics are too bold to see,
they got married 2 year back and now had daughter name Ruhi Bhalla.
You know diary I have seen Ruhi's photo she looks awesome same like her pappa and her pappa is omg so hot. seeing his I start feeling hot what will happen if I will see him in real( knock on doors)

I think shubbu has come to take his fee as I used his phone.

he come first time his behavior is different means I know him from childhood, he is very protective and possessive about me, he always fought for me but today he was crying and saying don't go how I will leave without me, but why we were friends right nothing more then why he behave with me like that and he didn't took his fees for using his phone that was strange bcoz he never gives his phone to anyone without compensation
we have rule for that who will use his phone will give him whatever he asked
one day he asked kavya to kiss him, which she does. I never use his phone, as whenever I need to find anything I always told miku to ask. first time I use his phone but he not asked me anything strange. well u r thinking who is shubbhu. As in our orphanage no one stay after 18 then how come he is here. Actually he is not an orphan. 5 years ago his dad come with him on his 16th bday to show how we live our life and after that he comes here as we become friends.
After seeing his today behavior i felt he is thinking about me much more than friend.
but what to do shubbhu if your so called attraction I found out before seeing Raman Kumar Bhalla then I can think about it but now it can never as I wanted to be his

I don't care about his material status only i want is Mr. RKB
bcoz i like him so much
and for him the caretaker job also nothing to me
I am so excited to meet my dream man, will he talk with me ?or will he just ignore me ?
omg omg i can't sleep today diary becos i can't stop thinking about him but I need to if I don't sleep and I will sleep in morning and his drive goes back without taking me then?
no no no i need to sleep
by dear diary will meet now in bhalla mansion
byyy

...


Omg omg diary this house is awesome unable to define.
I am not able to make words I was actually short of word to describe it's beauty
It just too good
well talking about it was great day in morning after completing my daily chores I was waiting for car from bhalla mansion to pick me. It comes around 10 am clock. Waw the car was also awesome while talking with driver come to know this car is specially for Ruhi bhalla.I was so shock for 6 month old baby they have separate car that means this car I can use whenever I will go out with Ruhi just imagine how much they are spending .
I meet that baby she so uber cute yaar. Copy of RKB. and I instantly fall in love with her. They have 15 helps to do there house work and 2 chief. Omg this much people are stay in my orphanage including me.
But I am sad as I am unable to meet RKB as he has gone to London for sone business trip will come after 10 days.

Shagun mam also gone for her modeling photo shot will come tomorrow. that means I can enjoy my day with little rooh. well u were thinking now who is rooh then let me tel u i called Ruhi as rooh. I am telling u if u see her u also felt connected with her the way I felt for her.
I was little shock that both her parents are not here. Are they not bothered with whom they are keeping their baby, means they need to see or ask me some questions but they are way to busy with their business.
One help comes to me her name is Bolu she says in Ruhi baby room sir has kept letter for you plz read
I thought
Oh to RKB has kept letter for me.
Now I am so much tired will read it after freshen up.

Till then,
By Diary
Edited by dakshumhatre - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good start
But plz I request u to give quick update
U are taking much time for it
Sorry no intentions to hurt u but need update soon
Waiting for next update
Edited by Dolly_1410 - 8 years ago

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