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@_Sairat_

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#31

chalo ek story ki start mai kar deti hun

lekin aage ki story tum hi likh dena

dangal in bathroom

ek din subah aru nahane ke liye barthroom me jaati hai

use achanak yaad aata hai ke vo towel lena bhool gayi hai

vo mukhiji ko bulati hai ' mukhiji please mera towel dijiye mai towel lena bhool gayi vahi bed par rakha hai

mukhiji kehte hai ' haa deta hun tujhe towel

mukhiji bathroom ke darwaje par knock karte hai

aru darwaja kholti hai aur bolti hai dijiye

jaise hi vo towel lene ke liye haath aage karti hai mukhiji uska haath pakad lete hai aur bathroom me entry karte hai

aur jab vo Aru ko dekhate hai bas apne hosh kho dete hai

bathroom ka darwaja band aur ArMu dangal start

doc maine start kar diya hai aage ka tumhe likhana hai😳

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: dushturain
My god im dead...seriously Ayeshu i want to give you a hug and kiss you...
It is outstanding...and awesome...i loved loved loved...seriously its level is somewhere else...it was as if i was reading the books...there was a smooth flow of everything..and i was panting to know whats gonna happen next...its soo beautiful...last time i told you my critical eye can't find any mistakes...this one is even better than that...you are sooo much growing as a writer and i am sooo proud of you baby...so this much my gushing as the critic

Now to the story...oh my god! Hubba hubba hubba...i wish i was logged in through laptop... i soo wanna post some orgasmic gifs... I will read it again and again...it was cute and hot and sizzling and sooo sweet...i wanna say what HR says all the time pls pls pls...coz its really Epic, awesome, fantabulous, mindblowing, historic, fantastic, outstanding...amazing alll...

Yayyy finally you read it!!! I was dying to know your comments,buddy... 😃 And I am soo glad you liked it... Thank you sooo much for taking out time to read this more than 3000 words OS... 😆

You know naa that I am always a little apprehensive of your critical review. I am soo happy to get a good one again! YAYY!

Anyone who reads this comment, please know that its because of this one person, Brishty, that I started to dare to write in the first place. Her suggestions, advises and constructive criticism have always helped me a lot.. not only writing about this stuff, but in my writing job also she helped me a lot. She herself is an amazing writer but shes an excellent critic. No filters...she tells on my face whats right and whats not right...and I owe you big time Brishty for all your support and love.. ❤️

Damn! my speech really feels as if I am getting a Pulitzer Award for sure! 😆😆 But i love you buht sara and I am waiting for the next update of your SS... 😊

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nish_vir

@nish_vir

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

😳 wooohhh
Super hot...

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: nish_vir
😳 wooohhh
Super hot...

😊 thank you nish_vir... 😳

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-RadhaRani-

@-RadhaRani-

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Mihrimah

Doc ki writing dekhke mujhe aur yakeen hogaya hai bike pe dangal only she can write☺️ Mukhiji ki stamina dekhkar lagta hai he can pull off dangal even on a running bike🤣
ab hoga dangal... bike pe☺️🤣

☺️ 🤣 🤣

running bike what a idea☺️ Aru sit in front of running bike and mukhi ji riding bike and riding other thing too 😛🤣🤣

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-RadhaRani-

@-RadhaRani-

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Doc.love

You know what... Tum loag ideas de dete ho aur phir mere ander likhne ka keera kaatnay lagta hai! 😆😆😆 I will try to imagine some bike sex scene and then will try to write... 😆

feel free anytime for any idea me & miri is trailer writer u are full movie writer😉😆

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-RadhaRani-

@-RadhaRani-

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Haan haan, kyun nahi? Marathon kerte hue sex ker lien ge bhayee... 😆😆 Koi masla thori hai... 😆😆😆
Dekho i always told you guys that Mukhiji is an explosive bomb..😉 In my imagination, he was always like that... sirf start hone ki deir thy... 😆

Marathon main taklif hogi but on this poss ArMu will super bang bang☺️🤣

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: -RadhaRani-

Marathon main taklif hogi but on this poss ArMu will super bang bang☺️🤣

🤣🤣 I am dying! This picture is actually giving me ideas! 🤣 Extremely weird ideas...

. 🤣 Na kero yaaar... mere ander ke shaitan ko naa jagao.. 😆

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-RadhaRani-

@-RadhaRani-

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Doc.love

🤣🤣 I am dying! This picture is actually giving me ideas! 🤣 Extremely weird ideas...
. 🤣 Na kero yaaar... mere ander ke shaitan ko naa jagao.. 😆

running bike idea given by Miri maine to sirf pic main bata ke clear kiya hai😛😆 and we making for you easy Doc.😳😆

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Mihrimah Ahmed

@ShadeOfWhite

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: -RadhaRani-

Marathon main taklif hogi but on this poss ArMu will super bang bang☺️🤣

Radha Raniii humesha samajhti hai main kya chahti hu..☺️ashleel dimag ek jaisa hi sochte hai☺️

@doc dekh idea maine dedi..demo Radha ne dedi..ab der kis baat ki? Shuru ho jaa😳 bas brake lagana baar baar taaki "woh" hosake running bike pe u know😛😉☺️

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