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chai92

@chai92

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Noor first take this Hugs 🤗

This is the first thing I read this morning! Must say the OS made my day!
Beautifully written! Rudra ShivKara's binding gel! Hope something like this actually happens in the show and different shades of Rudra will be explored soon.
You should just keep writing more! ❤️

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twerping

@twerping

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+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Magical! Absolutely magical! I'm on the hunt for scraps of the IB I fell in love with and thought a good place to start would be the old fanfics. I don't know why I hadn't read this earlier but anyway, I am beyond glad that I did! This was so amazingly crafted...the slippery slitheriness of Svetlana, the potential for Om and Shivay to enter into a zone of total.conflict and then the arrival of Rudra to simply turn the situation on its head with his unique attitude towards anything that threatened the balance of harmony between the brothers. This was so incredibly beautiful, I think a bit of me is crying simply at the depth in it.

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EnasZ

@EnasZ

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

wow ..😲😲😲

what a concept👏👏👏 ... what an idea ..👏

lovely ... that is beautifully written 👏

h hope u get time to turn it to a ss

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preity_d

@preity_d

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Noor,

It was an amazing piece of writing. The essence of old IB ... Ahh !! You so beautifully portrayed the shivkara dynamics. Kudos to you from trespass Svetlana's mind ! It was so thrilling to read from her pov. Hope, she was used more artistically. The colour gray has always a charismatic appeal to create something mysterious, mystic and misty that Svetlana, Omkara and Shivay are represents here. Hope to read more from you soon !

Pretty Preity 😆 ❤️