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Posted: 9 years ago

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Superb teaser
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Harshita Srivastava

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Here is next part as you all want this story's next update so enjoy..
Shot - 5

Raman - yahi to plan h mera bhn K e through apni angel ko apne Karib laaunga..(st) wait for me Angel I'm coming to meet you tomorrow.. Saying he smiles dreamily..looking him smiling mihir tease him..

Mihir - ohho bhai where are you lost ? Achha now I got it angel Bhabhi ke khyaalon mein kyu saying he push him slightly..

Raman (held his ear) - firstly don't you dare to call her angel bcoz he is only my Angel & secondly uske nhi to or kiske khyaalon mein khounga..

Mihir - ahh bhai sorry now plz leave my ear its paining.. For sake of my no no ur & only ur angel plzzz..Raman left his ear - now that's like a good boy now go back to ur work..BT mihir is still standing there looking him in same posture Raman asks him through eyes - what??

Mihir - bhai can I ask a question? he said with pleading eyes..while raman hot his own head with file ..then says - u know Mihir sometime I think u r really mihir or someone else..

Mihir looked him with confusing face ..- I didn't get u bhai ap kya kehna chahte ho?

Raman - arey idiot I mean tu mujhe KBC ke Amit ji ki yaad dilata h jaise wo ek sawaal ke baad dusra or phr next puchte rhte unhi ki tarah tu nhi ek ke baad dusra then another..

Mihir - wow bhai you love me so much you compared me with Amit ji wow I m feeling like flying saying he start dreaming

Raman - jyada mt ud pgle kyunki chahe jitna udh le rehega tu aadhe ka aadha or waise bhi Amit ji ke question ke answer dene pe prize milta h BT tere answer dene mein sat dukhta h saying he start laughing ..

Mihir (made faces) - you are so mean bhai jao mujhe kuch nhi puchna or apse baat bhi nhi krni saying he turned his face then raman says - okk as ur wish I m going bcoz mujhe late ho rha h (st) I know beta Bina puchhe tujhe sukoon milega nhi or agr ab mai puchunga to tu bhaav khayega ..BT ab tu khud mujhe rokega or puchega saying he was about to go then mihir called him & raman smiles BT don't show him..

Mihir - arey bhai ap to serious ho gye ..

Raman - nhi to mujhe to LGA tu serious ho gya so mai jaa rha..
Mihir -mai or serious wo bhai apse kbhi nhi bhai..

Raman - pakka naa..
Mihir - haa bhai now can I ask..

Raman - ha puchh qki Bina puchhe to tu maanega nhi which mihir nodded..so carry on kya puchhna h..

Mihir - bhai I want to listen urs & Bhabhi's love story ..

Raman - abey pgl abhi love story start to hone de yhan meri angel be mujhe reject kr diya or tu mere Jale pe Namak with chilli daal rha h saying he looked him angrily..

Mihir - no bhai u got it wrong I mean to say when & where you saw Bhabhi first time & most importantly how she became ur "Angel" ..

Raman - oh to ye janna h tujhe mihir nodded..

Raman - wo din to mai kbhi bhool hi nhi skta saying he starts narrating him ..

FLASHBACK
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Raman is talking on phn - yes papa just now my flight is landed & I m coming no no papa plz ap bs car bhej do mai aa jaunga han papa ap tension na lo agr mujhe raasta nhi smjh aayega so I will you ..okk bye
He was waiting for his car - itna time ho gya abhi tk car aayi kyu nhi papa ko phn krta hu saying he called Mr bhalla

Mr bhalla - ha putta ..
Raman - papa where is ur car abhi tk aayi nhi..

Mr bhalla - wo puttar actually abhi meri driver se baat hui h wo traffic mein fasha h jldi aa jayega tu ek kaam kr tbtk pass ke kisi coffee shop mein chla jaa..

Raman - okk papa ap bs driver ko mera number dedo taki jb wo aa jaye he will call me ..
Mr bhalla - wo maine de diya h puttar tu tension na le..
He was searching for coffee shop suddenly start raining - oh god ye baarish I hate it he was saying then his eyes fell on a girl who is enjoying in rain like a small baby & this girl is none other than ishita ..she is wearing white frock suit with simple embroidery ,simple metal earning & her left hand was full of silver bangles.. She is totally enjoying in rain & standing with open arms with close eye which make her like pure soul in short his angel he was totally mesmerized after looking her..he was looking her without blinking his eyes (st) - kya yahi mera pehla pyar h love at first side Jo mere frnds kehte the ki jb tujhe pyar hoga naa everything will be freezed my Evey's don't want to take off from her..

Pehli nazar mein kaisa jadoo kr diya..
Tera ban baitha hai mera jiya...
Jane kya hoga kya hoga kya pta..
Ish pal ko Milke aa jee le zara..

He was walking towards her like a mesmerized person..

Mai hu wahan ..
Tu hai jahan..
Meri bahon mein aa
Aa rhi jaa aaa..
Baby I love you...

He was standing in mid road without realizing anything & even he didn't hears loud horn of truck which about to hit him many ppl was calling him BT he was not listening anything ..meanwhile Ishita turn after hearing loud noise of truck & crowd and next moment she was totally shocked to see the scene in front of her & without wasting a second she run to save him & he was smiling like a idiot (st) - Omg she is coming to me oh god kahi mujhe heart attack naa aa jaye saying he put his hand on left side..
Truck was about to hit him BT suddenly he pulled by ishita and next moment she was fell on ground & he was on her ..
She asks - are you fine?BT he is only looking on her with smiling face ..then she said - uthiye plz ..

Raman - hmm
Ishita - hatiye mere upar se now u r all fine saying she tried to stand up BT can't..suddenly someone came and pushed him & make her stand she is none other than our divya..

Divya - hey Mr. Where are lost haa can't you see & hear itni jor se truck wala horn Baja rha log chilla rhe BT u r standing like an idiot when ishita glared her..

Raman - ohh so sorry ms..saying he forward his hand to ishita BT divya held his hand & says - ms divya .
Raman - OK ms divya & thanks you for saving my life saying he looks on Ishita she smiles when divya held her hand - chal ab aaj ke liye bahut stunt ho gya..saying she starts walking while ishra were looking at each other..

Raman - oh no mai uska naam hi nhi puchh paya shit yr abhi mai use kaise search krunga koi nhi Raman tu khud uska naam rakh le yes ye shi rehega BT kya saying he start thinking then something click on his mind - yes she is looking so pure & beautiful like we heard in stories of angels yes she is my "Angel "... I will find you very soon angel tab take wait for me ..meanwhile his car came & he drove towards home..

PRESENT
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He is still smiling dreamily when mihir says - come on reality bhai..ap to phr kho gye ..waise kya meeting thi bhai totally filmy BT yahan Bhabhi ne hero banke apki jaan bachai..not bad

Raman - hmm she is my everything my Angel ..I love her a lot you know Mihir is wearing very simple suit BT its perfectly match her beauty use kisi make up or jewelry ki jrurt nhi h wo jaise h mujhe waise hi psnd h..

Mihir - bhai mujhe bhi milna h Bhabhi se..plz

Raman - don't worry evening mein hm log uske ghr jaa rhe h tu bhi chlna okk.mihir nodded then both went towards office..

IN COLLEGE
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Divya went to canteen and order sandwiches & 2 coffee for them she was waiting for her order (st ). - bhagwaan ap kya chahte ho puri duniya mein apko sirf meri ishu mili h sare GAM dene ke liye Usne apka kya bigada h waise hi uski so called family kam hai usko dukh dene ke liye ki ap bhi usko dukh de rhe ho AGR khushiyan chhinni thi to phli de kyun u know mai hmesha use hope diya ki nhi ishu tere liye bhi jrur koi h BT no apne use bhi glt kr diya aj ke baad I will never ask from you something at least tab tk jb mere ishu ko uske hisse ki khushiyan nhi mil jati saying she wiped her tears which about to fell from her eyes and take their order she went to ishita..

Ishita is still sitting on same place with sad face divya reached to her looking her she smiled ..

Divya - tan tadannn ye rhe cheese sandwiches with filter coffee for my jaan..saying she forward her ..she took sandwich & start munching slowly..

Divya - waise ishu I have an idea kyu naa tu mujhse shaadi kr le dekh ek boy ki tarah mai tujhe protect krti hu or or pyaar to mai tujhe sbse jyada krti hu ..bol kya bolti h..listening this ishita starts laughing loudly ..

Divya (st). - chl finally tu khul ke hasi to ..then she asks - arey why are you laughing I m serious bol to abhi shaadi kr le..

Ishita (holds her stomach)- achha phr tere kabir ka kya hoga listening kabir's name divya looked down with dull face when ishita asks - what happened divya kabir ka naam sunte hi tera chehra kyu utar gya saying she hold her chin.
Divya - nhi yr aisa kuch nhi h chl class ke liye late ho rha h..BT ishita held her hand..

Ishita - nhi phle you tell me koi baat h Jo tu mujhse chupa rhi h..
Divya - arey nhi yr aisa kuch nhi h chl ab ..

Ishita - OK mt bta mujhe mai khud kabir ko phn krti hu or puchti hu saying she dialled his number BT divya snatched her phn & cut the call..

Divya - we broke up..

Ishita (totally shocked ) - whattt BT kyu aisa kya hua..bol
Divya - leave it yrr tu tension na le..

Ishita - ye tu bol rhi h Jo meri hr prblm chahe wo Badi ho ya choti mujhse jyada dukhi hoti h..chl bta jldi tujhe meri kasam..

Divya - ek thappad marungi kasam kyu di ..
Ishita - bcoz I know tu aise hi sach bolegi..

Divya - wo hmara break up parso hua..
Ishita - jin din maine tujhe us rishte ke bare mein phn krke btaya tha..to tune mujhe usi din kyun nhi btana..

Divya - Kaise btati phli baar to tu itni khush thi or mai nhi chahti thi ki mere kaaran tu sad ho..or uske baad tu waise bhi us rishte ke break hone se dukhi thi or mai tujhe or dukhi nhi dekhna chahti thi isliye saying wiped her tears..

Ishita hugged her tight & says - mai kitni buri frnd hu na apne dukh mein tera dukh dekha hi nhi dekha..

Divya (break hug) - bhkk pgl h kya tu world no no universe ki bestest frnd h Jo sirf mere pass h so now stop crying ..saying she wiped her tears..

Ishita - PR tujhse achhi nhi PR break up kyu hua ..
Divya - arey chhodh naa..

Ishita - nhi bol..kahi meri wajah se saying she looks on divya..

Divya - nhi yr saying she turned
Ishita - nhi mai hi wajah hu haina maine kitni baar bola ki tera mere sath itna time rehna kabir ko pasnd nhi PR tu nhi maani..

Divya - yrr for me u r more important than anyone bcoz being a orphan u never treat me as that or tune mujhe jeena sikhya or rhi baat kabir ki so jis rishte mein understanding nhi wo waise bhi tikta nhi achha hua abhi toot gya..achha ab chl class saying she drag her towards class..

Ishita (st)- kyun murugan aisa Q kiya apne mujhe km dukh diye ki divya ko bhi meri wajah se..

IYER HOUSE
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Ishita reached home and saw Amma is running here & there ..appa was sitting on sofa sipping his coffee ..she without saying anything going towards her room..BT amma stopped her

Amma - arey achha hua tu aa gyi ishu jara mere help kr de arrangement mein while ishita looks on her with confusion..

Amma - aise kya dekh rhe h oh ye soch rhi h na ki itni taiyari Q wo kya h naa Bhalla's aa rhe h shagun leke shaam ko ..tu ek kaam kr fresh hoke jara kitchen mein aaja or meri help kr de kuch dishes banane mein okk ishita nodded sadly..and went inside her room..

Appa - ye kya h madhu wo waise hi sad h ish rishte ko lekr or tm use he was saying when amma says - mujhe mt sikhao kya krna h kya nhi or KB tk us baat ko lekr baithegi wo ..

IN EVENING
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Bhalla's reached iyer's house..amma welcomed them..

Amma - arey aaiye naa ap log saying she called - vishwa came dekho wo log aa gye ..

Appa also came & welcome them then all settle ..in living room..
Amma - ap log baithiye mai abhi aati hu saying she went in kitchen.. While Raman's eyes only finds his angel ..

Mihir - bhai Bhabhi kaha h dikhai nhi de rhe he asks very slowly..

Raman - mai bhi use hi doond rha hu he was saying when ishita came with tea for everyone raman again lost in her..she put tea on table and distribute everyone and lastly she forward a cup to Raman BT he is only looking her without blinking his eyes.. She again says - ur tea when mihir pinch him..

Raman - ahh kya h mihir while mihir signaled through eyes towards her.. & says - bhai apki chai lijiye Bhabhi saying he stopped when Raman glared him then he says - I mean Bhabhi ki bhn kbse chai de rhe h lijiye then raman take cup from her smiling and said thanku.. Then she went from there..

That's all for this update ..I know I didn't add teaser part BT its pretty long update so teaser portion in next update..

PS - its pretty long update so I want long comments also ..& likes too..

Edited by harshiidiv - 9 years ago

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Harshita Srivastava

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Posted: 9 years ago

#233

Updated next part..
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Twinkle Solanki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#234

Superb update
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Sreelekha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#235

Nice updt di
Raman loves ishu very much...
Fb scene is nice
Loved the bonding between ishu and divya..
Bhallas are came to see Miku
Once again raman lost in ishitha..
Waiting for teaser updt...
Continue soon
Thanx for the pm di
Pls updt soon