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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_21



(Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake)

Maaneet married, due to some circumstances or says some misunderstanding break this relation ...both take divorce...when one partner want divorce, she denied...he realize the mistake denied for divorce...then she want divorce for his happiness...now both apart from each other...living own life alone or with another partner, both soul unknown from this...

Kya ye dono fir milenge

Ya is kahani ka yhi end point tha

Ho sakta hai

These two souls never made for each other or vice-versa...


do pyar karne wale kabhi juda nahi hote ,

sirf sarir se juda hote hai
mann se nahi
kya malum ek din zingi ke do rahe pe phirse wo mil jaye...?
.
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jise hai kho jana milte hi kyun hai...?
agar chod na tha hath
to pakd te hi kyun hai..?

abhi abhi to hua sache pyar ka ehsas?
daman chudake wo chale jate kyun hai?

unlogono ki judai pe
do aks bikhar gaye
.
.
.
phir dil ne kaha
ye to saruat hai yaro
picture to abhi baki hai.
.
.

phirse milne ki tamana mein alwida karte hai,
hum mile na mile phir bhi milne ki dua karte hai

chahe hum kal na rahe,
chahe hum kal na mile
par lekin ye wadiya
humesha yenhi pe rahegi
aur doharati rahe gi pyar ki har dastan..
.
.
phir milenge chalte chalte.

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credit goes to idunno👏
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beautiful story
iska last part do na
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Posted: 7 years ago
A Perfect Mismatch

Maan
we are tied by god in sacred relation
but we are Mismatch in all aspects
i want to hold you
you want to run from me
i know am not perfect for you
but our relation make after taking rounds or vows in front of holy fire
how i break this tie
but i have too
.

Geet
what i dreamed?
what i get in return ?
i dream about Moon
but get only darkness of night in hand
how i accept him
we are totally mismatched
am princess and he is ????????

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Posted: 7 years ago
List updated

Originally posted by: priya_21



Ongoing FF on page 8 With concept

1) You are mine

2)Ye dil kya kare

3) Khawaish Season 2

4)Khamoshiya...gungunane lagi.

5)Hum Aapke Dil mein Rahte h

6) Mohabbat...ki adhuri kahani
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7)Beintaha - Mohabbat ya junoon (going end soon)

8) Waqt ...badalte rishton ki dastaan

9) SANGINI...PIYA KA MEIN BANUGI

10 ) My Beautiful Mistake (going end soon)

11) WO HUMSAFAR THA

12 )khudrat ka khel (going end soon)

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13) Teri Meri love story

14) Is Life A Dream ? (going end soon)

15) Vivaah Adhura Bandhan (going end soon)

16) Tere Liye

17) Dil... Ki..Kalam se

18) Wo Ek Din Season 2

19) Sauda

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20) Gunaah
21) Aapka Dil Humare Pass hai
22) Bulleya

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23) Kuch rang pyaar ke ase bhi
24) You are mine S#2

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25) Sangini - Season 2
26) Wo Lamhe - Season 2


27 ) A perfect Mismatch

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Posted: 7 years ago
check following pages


i updated link of stories

for reading OS - see this two stories

Dastaan - e-Mohabbat - link

Tere Nishaan - Link

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For SS

Wo ek din - link (29 parts + Epilogue)

Wo Lamhe - Link (17 parts + Epilogue)

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For FF

you have all link from page 16 to 18 (already mentioned above )

ongoing list - link
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Posted: 7 years ago

Zindagi ...ka Safar

Hey all of you,

Now you all know me

Am geet

And this is your show

"Zindagi ka safar

I come here once again with the issue of life

.

Let's start the program

You all almost heard about this song

The campaign called life, how is the drive;
No one understands, no one comprehends.
How's this path on which one and all stride;
No one understands, no one comprehends.

Zindagi Ka Safar Hai Ye Kaisa Safar
Koi Samjha Nahin Koi Jaana Nahin
Hai Ye Kaisi Dagar Chalte Hain Sab Magar
Koi Samjha Nahin Koi Jaana Nahin

.

Weekly I come and I chat with you all

And discuss about the life

How life turns in one second

How we not able to understand our life partner

Where we lacking

.

Isse kuch rishte jud jaate hai

Aur kuch ase tutate hai

Jo kbhi jud nhi paate

.

.

So time to open the mail

.

Lucknow se pooja likhti hai

"She needs tip for how we judge the man

Tomorrow one boy coming home to see her "

First we take pooja on call, for she can hear our discussion now

.

.

Hey pooja

Am geet from "Zindagi ka safar Show

.

Aapka swal hai

Aap ye kaise jaane jo aapko dekhne aa rha hai

Wo thik hai ya nhi

.

Ji madam

.

Pooja dear

Sbse phle mein aapko wo tips dungi

Jo meri friend ne mujhe di thi

.

First throw water on him

And give importance on his expression not words

Because he surely speak lovely but his expression show true colors

Second notice how he behave with your servants or kids

Isse kya pata chal jaata hai

.

Nhi

Anyone intentionally or unintentional throw something on you

Surely for one two second you irritate

Because your dress spoil

So you can't judge the person from this thing

But yes his nature can judge if he talks with kids and servants

Specially servant ke sath kaisa hai

.

Madam aapne kya ye tips try ki thi

.

Nhi

Himmat hi nhi huyi thi

.

Fir ab mein kya karu

.

Bs zukna nhi tum

Jo tum chaho

Wo sbke saamne HA ho

Ye na ho

Uska bada bhai HA khde

Ya wo khud HA khde

Aur shaadi ke baad us HA ke koi mayne hi na rhe

.

Jo bhi hai dil mein khul ke khehna aur puchna

Khud HA tb tak mt khehna

Jb tak saari baate clear na ho jaaye

.

Kya sbke saamne khehna asaan honga

.

I know

Advise dena bhut asaan hota hai

Par sbke saamne bolna bhut mushkil

Ek zizak hoti hai

Awaaz na jaane kyun bahar nhi nikalti

.

Us waqt smjh nhi aata

Kissi aur ko advice deni ho

Ya mom-dad ko kuch bhi khehna ho

Ya friends ko khehna hai

Yaha tak kyi baar jinhe jaante tak nhi

Unse bhi baat kr lete hai

Par jb khud ki zindagi ka itna bda decision hota hai

Na jaane lafz kaha gum ho jaate hai

Na jaane hoth kaise khamosh ho jaate hai

Dil mein bhut kuch chal rha hota hai

Par khehne ko kuch nhi hota

Sehma sa dil

Zuki si nazre

Ek HA ko janam de jaati hai

Humne to HA nhi khan a

Fir kaise

Kaise saamne wale ne humari chupi ko HA le liya

Kaise

.

Madam are you ok

Yes am totally fine

I know hum chahe kitna bold kyun na khle khud ko

Par ase maamle mein na jaane kya ho jaata hai hume

.

Pooja bs dil ki sunana

Dil ne galat suna toh

Dil se liye decision galat nhi hote pooja

Bs hum kyi baar usse sunane mein galati kr dete hai

.

Madam ydi dil na bole

Aur sb kuch thik lag rha ho toh

Kya fir mein NA kahu ya HA

Us pal bs shant ho jaana

Is sach ko apana

Tumhe ek na ek din ye ghar chodna hi hai

Tum unse bs kuch hi duri pe ho

Unse jb chaho milne aa sakti ho

Ye smjhana

Khud ko

.

Aksar hum apne mom-dad, bhai-behn se dur jaane ke dar se

Gabra jaate hai

Hume saamne wala hi galat lagne lagta hai

.

Is sch ko smjhana khud ko

Fir sochna

Just imagine own self as his bride for few seconds

Uski kahi huyi baatein

Tumhari baatein

Ek khubsurat sapne dekh paa rhi hu ya nhi

Ek baat bhi khatak rhi ho

Toh wo chupana nhi

Bs kh dena maa papa se

Wo smjh jaayenge

.

Ydi sb thik lage tumhe apne sapno mein

Toh fir HA khehne mein kaise der

Thank you madam

So guys

Aaj ka humara safar yhi khatam hota hai

I come again with new questions

Bye

All of you

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Geet ready to go but hear his voice she stopped and turn to see him...

So Miss Geet

Apne Ha kis base pe kaha tha mujhe

Geet : hum yaha humari baat na kare toh hi acha hai

.

He held her arm and pulls closer and said here all know you are my wife

She control own tears and removed his hand and said wife nhi X-Wife

Humara rishta tumne toda tha geet

Maine nhi

Tum mujhse alag huyi thi

Na ki mein

.

Toh kya karti

Aap jhoothe

aapka pariwaar jhootha

Mere saare sapno ko maar diya aapne

.

Now you must be happy

Hai na

Paisa hai

Shaurat hai tumhare pass

Par in sbke liye tumne mujhe kho diya geet

Mujhe kho diya

.

Aapko paa hi kaha paayi maan

Aapke liye toh humesha se sirf geet galat rhi hai

Aur aapki maa

.

Maa ke khilaf ek lafz nhi geet

.

She laughs and turn to leave... but her step stopped and said kal ghar aa rhe ho na

Bache Miss kr rhe hai aapko

Maan : ha

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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you once again for the effort in making the list
I've bookmarked this thread
will check later if there is any stories I missed to read
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Posted: 7 years ago
bookmarked'i will read your other stories soon😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ARJUNKIAPS

bookmarked'i will read your other stories soon😃


its possible kya

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Thank you once again for the effort in making the list
I've bookmarked this thread
will check later if there is any stories I missed to read

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