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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

sweet update
loved it
cont soon


Thanks so much!! 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Chapter 12: Intertwined forever

Naina p.o.v.

Naina woke up to find herself wrapped in blankets on her bed. Her head throbbed badly and she felt quite sick and nauseous. She held her head with one hand trying to steady herself. Her eyes fell on the note on the side table.

Good morning meri jaan, jaldi se yeah juice peelo toh tumhare sar dard bilkul teek ho jayegi. Aur room ke bahar mat jaana jab tak mein kahoon please, love you, Karan.

She craned her neck round the room but there was no Karan in sight. How did I get here? She thought. She couldn't remember much. She drank down the juice and wobbled horribly as she walked to the bathroom.

She was still wearing the clothes from last night and she was staring at herself in the mirror after washing her face. Socho Naina, socho kya hua tha kal. She closed her eyes and focussed. Vague scenes flashed before her eyes. Her drinking the glass on the table. Then, I love you, she screamed and jumped into Karans arms. Then in another memory, tum idiot ho ... ek din bacha hai. She gulped as she opened her eyes once again. Oh no. What have I done? How could I have asked such things to Karan? She blushed and put her head in her hands. How was she going to face him?

Seemed like Naina didn't need to worry about Karan for a while. Breakfast arrived at her doorstep. And a little while later some boxes with a bouquet but still no sign of her hubby. It was getting towards noon. The box had opened to be a beautiful saree, it was white in colour with some black appliqu work and came with matching silver jewellery and heels. Naina was mad, today was after all their last day together and instead of spending it away romantically. Karan was playing hide and seek. Her rage even got to another level when again lunch arrived without him.

She was fed up now and decided it was best she went to look for him herself. She had been ringing his phone and he was adamantly not picking up. She put on her shoes and was at the door when the bell rang again. It opened to a man holding a small flat box. Naina took it from him and slammed the door. She knew she was being unreasonable. After all, she was showing his anger on the poor delivery boy. Naina opened the box and found a long bar of milk chocolate. There was no doubt that it was her favourite but this was just not the mood. Angered she nearly threw the box before she caught sight of some alphabets on the chocolate.

She carefully peered at the chocolates now. Her heart leaped as she managed to read the message. I'm waiting down, come soon. A small smile crept onto her lips. She went over to the box of clothes and gifts he sent earlier which were sprawled on the bed. It was then that a note in the bouquet caught her eyes. She pulled it out, I gift these small gifts for my most precious flower, my wife. The anger seemed to fade down. But she wouldn't let him off either. He had kept her waiting and now when he wanted her, she would make him wait too. She giggled and went to change.

Karan p.o.v.

Karan was neatly dressed in a suit and was immensely panicked about what would unfold tonight. It had been at least 2 hours since he sent Naina the chocolates and still there was no sign of her. Was she not coming? He thought. She might not have read it, he told himself. I think I should go get her. He looked up to see the most astonishing sight. Naina looked scintillating. His heart stopped. His mouth opened wide. She giggle as she came close. The white saree was perfect just as he had visioned it. It clung on her and showed her shapes so perfectly. It was still a little chilly so he had wrapped herself with a shawl.

He smiled and pulled her closer, offering her a hand. Their eyes met. She lifted up his chin and shut his mouth. Tum bohot hi khubsoorat lag rahi ho, he said and gave a small kiss on her forehead. Chalo, bohot door jaana hai humme, he said. He helped her into the car. The soft music in the car played as she looked outside the window. It had been sunset by the time they reached their destination. Naina looked curious about why they were stopping in the middle of a forest. She looked around and around. He came to her door side and let her out. Karan, yeh... she started to ask but he silenced her, sshhh. He took her hand in his and walked into the forest.

There were small noises now and he felt Naina squeeze his hand more. They walked a little more until they came to a clearing. He could hear her gasp looking at what was in front of them. A houseboat, decorated in lights. He helped her climb into the boat. He could feel her eyes sparkle. It had taken him a long time to get things organised. Finally it was time to make it work. He helped her take a seat at a table which was on the front deck. They felt a slight jerk as the boat moved swiftly off the shore. There was a boy right at the back driving.

Naina p.o.v.

Naina had lost her breath. The boat was beautiful and Karan had always managed to surprise her. She looked down at the table filled with her favourite dishes. It looked so yummy. A sudden soft music began playing and she looked up to see Karan on the guitar. He started singing tum hi ho. He moved round the table and kept pointing at her for the chorus. Tears came into her eyes. The wind blew into her hair. They were floating in the middle of the sea. The boat had stopped. When he stopped playing she applauded for him. He gave her a smile as he sat down at the table. They ate calmly feeding each other a little and hearing the splashing sound of the waves.

Once done, Karan came around and pulled her up. He lead her to the the front of the boat. They were now side by side leaning on the railing. His hands came round her waist. I love you he whispered. She put her hand round his neck and replied, I love you too. He gave a smile, surprised. She shied away realising she had been confident to say it out loud. She turned around and held onto the railing. She felt his breath on her neck. She shuddered. He slowly unwrapped the shawl and tossed it onto a nearby chair. She wrapped her hands around her arms as the cold wind passed over them.

She breathed faster and faster. To her surprise, she felt a cold tingle round her neck. Her necklace had come off and so did her earrings. Her heart was pounding in her ears. She felt his chin on her shoulder as he pulled her into him. His hands slowly sliding down hers. She turned around and wrapped her hands tightly around him. He placed a kiss slowly in her hair. He slowly lifted her up into his arms. She took her off into a doorway and slowly let her down. Her breath caught at her throat.

The room was beautiful. In the middle was a bed decorated with rose petals. The surroundings all lit with candles. The curtains swayed in the wind. She felt his hand around her again. Before she could manage to say anything. Their lips met. They have kissed before, but she always felt each one was different. She relaxed against him and felt his hand travel up to her back. Her hands came round his neck. The kiss was tender and passion all in one. When he finally let go, he pulled her off to the bathroom.

Just as the room, the bathroom had lots and lots of petals. In the centre a big tub. She could feel her pulse in her veins. She turned around to see Karan had already removed away his clothes. He was now in his shorts slowly climbing into the tub. The tub was already filled with water and had lot of scented petals floating in it. Naina he called, she stepped towards him and he pulled her ever so easily into the tub with him. The water was just right she thought. Her saree was now wet and more see through. His hands again wrapped around her. Her cheeks turned pink. She was now comfortably sitting in his lap in the tub. She leaned back against his chest and allowed herself to relax.

His fingers slowly drawing circles on her tummy, as his mouth began nuzzling in her hair. Her heart threatened to escape out of her body. After what seemed like hours of soaking, he helped her out of the tub and once again lifted her into his arms. She knew what was next. Her ears thrummed. She slowly felt herself on the bed. Her hands twisted into the sheets. Her breathing escalating as she felt his hands at her shoulders pulling away her saree. She closed her eyes, just listening to their breathing. She felt his fingers twine with hers. She could feel his lips tracing down her shoulders, her hands. She gave a gasp. Their lips met once more. This kiss was full of longing. Longing for one another. Her heart yearned for more. Their legs perfectly twining in their own way too. His bare chest pressed against her and she allowed herself to float away in the cloud of love, passion and ecstasy. The moon and stars a witness to a wonderful union.


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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey everyone,
Thanks for being so patient and waiting for my update. I hope it's not disappointing. I had a request for a Karan playing the guitar scene and I made sure to put it in. Please do give me more suggestions. I would love to know your feelings. Hopefully I can keep writing. Now that summer is coming to an end I'm gonnna get busy but I hope I'll be able to do justice.

Loads of love,
Rizka

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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey...
It's as always beautiful beautiful update.. :)
U wrote it wonderfully.. I can imagine how tough it's to write romantic and such scenes.. N u did complete justice to it.
Thank you for the guitar scene ❤️.. N oye hoyee..! What an arrangements Karan puttar.. Proud of you 😉

After the serious drama and frustrating episodes without any nairan scenes that we r getting to witness.. Ur updates are only place where we get to see Nairan together.. Thank you.. :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
It was beautiful rizka!! I always enjoy reading ur updates becos u put so much thought into them and the story flows so well. U add just the right amount of romance and keep it sweet that i just cant help smiling all the way through. Seriously my jaws hurting now cos of me smiling so much lol. As always, will be looking forward to the next one!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: JennyD

Hey...

It's as always beautiful beautiful update.. :)
U wrote it wonderfully.. I can imagine how tough it's to write romantic and such scenes.. N u did complete justice to it.
Thank you for the guitar scene ❤️.. N oye hoyee..! What an arrangements Karan puttar.. Proud of you 😉

After the serious drama and frustrating episodes without any nairan scenes that we r getting to witness.. Ur updates are only place where we get to see Nairan together.. Thank you.. :)


Yes dear it's so tough. I mean we have to make sure the romance remains as romance and doesn't cross any limits. Ur welcome. Do keep giving me more suggestions. I'll use them in my future chapters. Yes your right writing this keeps me from getting depressed from the upcoming episodes. Hehe I'm proud of our Karan too. Keep following me and showering me with your love. I'll try my best to keep writing you these chapters in return.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

beautiful update
loved it
cont soon


Thanks so much. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: nawshi

It was beautiful rizka!! I always enjoy reading ur updates becos u put so much thought into them and the story flows so well. U add just the right amount of romance and keep it sweet that i just cant help smiling all the way through. Seriously my jaws hurting now cos of me smiling so much lol. As always, will be looking forward to the next one!!


Thanks so much. I'm glad my effort and thinking shows. Hehe I'll try to keep giving you more and more sweetness to come.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: chandmeinchupi


Yes dear it's so tough. I mean we have to make sure the romance remains as romance and doesn't cross any limits. Ur welcome. Do keep giving me more suggestions. I'll use them in my future chapters. Yes your right writing this keeps me from getting depressed from the upcoming episodes. Hehe I'm proud of our Karan too. Keep following me and showering me with your love. I'll try my best too keep writing you these chapters in return.

😊😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi Rizu thanku for updating soon as u know i wait eagerly for update n i hope i dont stress u much about it.
Awww what an update. Loved it. Today u proved you are a wonderful writer bcoz she portrayed this entire scene with so much aesthetic way n serene way n you did it so beautifully that it was the perfect balance of everything. Wow what an amazing preparations Karan had made for both of them. It was such a serene place and wonderfully decorated. Finally they are happy married couple. You are an amazing writer n u shud continue writing always.
loads of luv to u n alwz waiting for ur writings

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