MG- Tujhey Dhoondon Kahan Part 12 pg 54 - Page 15

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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update buddy
Geet determined to find Maan and went to the village postman's house with Tai
Geet is lost in her mrrg days and the prank on her mrrg night
Ra,u told her about another village nd shes going there
cont soon
thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely update neha dear😳😳. tai ji so cring person. geet know about postman through tai. tai said post man house marriage happen..geet and taj reach postman house. geet remembered sr night.. so geet surprised seeing decoration..maan told eveything done by samer.samer so naughty person.he did decoration and hide behind curtain ..time god maan mom searching samer.. samer caught by infront of family insake of phone..samer so cute person..he want know how rude msk how romance his wife ..😆.samer and maan shared lovely bonding. postman said about maan not come to this village and said other raju know about anything..so geet start other destination ..i hope geet will sucess in her mission..waiting for that time only..
thanks for pm and continue soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

Nice update dear

Liked it!!
Geet was all set to find Maan and Tai was helping her out
Geet was reminiscing her past were Sameer played prank on her and Maan on their wedding night and called Maan as a statue.
Well according to Ramu , maan is not in there village as he didn't see any new face in their village .
Well geet is set out to search for maan in nearby village with raju's assistance
Thanks for the pm
Will be waiting for the next update

thanks 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
thank you
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pixelflower620

Lovely update buddy

Geet determined to find Maan and went to the village postman's house with Tai
Geet is lost in her mrrg days and the prank on her mrrg night
Ra,u told her about another village nd shes going there
cont soon
thnx fr d pm

thanks😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetfavo

sorry for late neha dear

its ok dear😊😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetfavo

lovely update neha dear😳😳. tai ji so cring person. geet know about postman through tai. tai said post man house marriage happen..geet and taj reach postman house. geet remembered sr night.. so geet surprised seeing decoration..maan told eveything done by samer.samer so naughty person.he did decoration and hide behind curtain ..time god maan mom searching samer.. samer caught by infront of family insake of phone..samer so cute person..he want know how rude msk how romance his wife ..😆.samer and maan shared lovely bonding. postman said about maan not come to this village and said other raju know about anything..so geet start other destination ..i hope geet will sucess in her mission..waiting for that time only..

thanks for pm and continue soon😊

thanks for your lovely comment😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 7

With new determination geet reached next village and with the help of phone she reached bus stop and wait for the man then after few minutes a man came towards her and asked

Ap Mrs. Khurana???

Ji

Aur ji ma raju shrivastav mjh ramu ne phone py bataya tha ka yap mjh sy milna chahti hain?

Ji kya unhoney ny bataya kay ma kyun milna chahti hoon

Ji nhi us ne kaha kay ap khud ziada behtar bata skti hain

Oh acha!

To ayye chai peetey hoay baat krtey hain

Chalye

They sat at the dhabba and asked waiter for tea then raju asked

Tou behan ji ab bataye ap ko mjh say kya kaam hy?

Geet narrated her side of story and said

To kya ap ko iss barey ma kuch maloom hy?

Hmmm

He takes a sip of tea and thinks for few seconds

Jis dates ki ap baat kr rhi hain humaein kuch log miley to thy ab un ma ap kay pati hain ya nhi ya nhi pata

Such apko kuch log miley thy

Ji bilkul yeh hi kuch agey peechey koi chaar 4 log mily thy face mjh yaad nhi kyun k ma ne shi sy dekha nhi tha warna ma apko bata deta

Acha!!! Phr

She asked excitedly and prays in heart

Plz god plz un ma marey maan bhi hoon

Ap mjh do minute dein ma ek call kr loon phr apko batata hoon

Ji pr zara jldi krye ga

After minutes he came and sit opposite her and said

Dekhye behan ji apko kuch bataney sy phele ek baat clear kr doon yeh sab krna mera kaam hy aur iss kay ma paisey loon ga agr apko koi problem nhi hy to agey bataon

Apko jitney paisey chahye ma doon gi pr information shi honi chahye

Acha to phr theek hy haan to ma ne kaha tha ne kay 4 log mily thy un ma sy kisi ka bhi naam mjh nhi maloom haan yeh zaroor maloom hoskta hy k wo sab kahan hain

To bataye na wo sab kahan hain

Dekhye un ma se ek to dosrey din hi marr gaya tha aur hum ne hi uski last rituals ki thin ab wo ap kay pati thy ya nhi...

Nhi nhi wo marey maan nhi ho sktey ap baki bataein

Acha ek ko to uski family ly gyi thi 3 din baad ab wo bhi ap kay pati nhi ho sktey bachey sirf do

Haan to wo do kahan hain???

Ek to yahin k hospital ma hy aur ek khud hi do din baad paas k village chala gaya wo kon tha humain nhi maloom agr ap chahein gi to uski maloomat ma kr k bata skta hoon kay wo kahan hain pr us kay pass janey kay extra charges hoon gy

Ok wo mjh manzoor hy pr ma phele hospital waley sy milna chahti hoon kya pata wo marey maan hoon

Ji acha ma abhi intezam krta hoon ap yahin rukye

Geet prays in heart

plz god mjh yahin marey maan sy mila do plz ek roshni ki umeed dekhi hy kash wo poori ho jye mjh marey maan mil jyen aur mjh kuch nhi chahye

After few minutes he came and said

Sorry behan ji aj to ap un sy nhi mil sktin hospital time khatam ho gye hain ab to ap kal hi mil skti hain

Pr mjh abhi milna h yap smjhney ki koshasih kyjye mera abhi milna bht zarori hy kya pata wo marey pati hoon

Dekhye behan ji ma smjh skta hoon pr doctor ne mana kr dia hy ap kal subha un sy mil lyjye ga

Ap meri doctor sy baat kara dein ma khud unko handel kr loon gi

Jab ap ne itna wait kia hy to kal subha ka aur wait kr lein kyun doctor sy jhik jhik krnay us ka kya faida?

Pr ma rukon gi kahan?

Uski fikar ap mat karerin yahan guest house hy ma apko roon dilwa deta hoon chalye

Ji chalye

She said with sadness after reaching their manager hand over her room keys raju said

Ap fikar mat karye ma kal subha 9 baje taka on ga ap ready rhye ga

Next morning geet ready before time to reach hospital raju came on time and they left for hospital raju left her in corridor and went to talk with doctor and take permission he came towards geet

Ayye doctor ne kaha hy wo icu ma hy hum usi taraf chaltey hain

Ji

She is so nervous every step she take wit heavy heart she is not sure about a person in icu is he her maan?

She stoped near door and heard the conversation between doctor and raju

Doctor shaab yeh hi wo hain jin k barey ma ap sy baat kit hi yeh us patient sy milna chahti hain

Acha wo theek hy pr do minute sy ziada nhi uski aisi condition nhi hy kay us sy koi mil skey

And turned towards her

Dekhye ma sirf apko do minute dy skta hoon kyun k patient bht critical hy

Ji doctor bus ma ek nazar dekh loon

Ek minute ma nurse sy keh deta hoon

Nurse unko bed no 12 kat patient k pass ly jao

Nurse nod and guide her towards patient

Geet take slow steps she saw a man on bed have bandaged on his whole body she slowly take steps towards bed to see his face in heart she is so scared

oh god plz yeh maan na hoon iss ko to kitni chot ayi hyi hy kitni takleef hogi plz yeh marey maan na hoon unko itni takleef nhi nhi oh god

then she saw his face and automatically her hand came on her mouth and she ran outside and take heavy breaths raju hurriedly came towards her

kya hoa behan ji kya wo ap kay pati hain?

And then a person's face came in her flashes his half face is injured and have marks which makes him so ugly

Nhi nhi wo marey maan nhi hain

Oh acha chalein koi baat nhi

Hum yahan sy chaltey hain

Ek minute jab ap yahan ayi hi gyi hain to us ki picture bhi dekh lein jis ki death ho gyi thi hospital record ma hogi

Nhi wo kyun dekhon?

Ho skta hy wo ap kay pati hoon

Nhi! Wo marey maan nhi ho sktey

Pr ek baar check to kr lein

Tumhein smjh nhi aya ma ne kaha na wo marey maan nhi ho sktey jab tak meri saansein chal rhi hain marey maan ko kuch nhi ho skta smjhey!!!

Kuch nhi ho skta

Kuch nhi ho skta

Last words in mummer like she wants herself to believe that maan is okey.

Edited by nehaa9 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice pt
so raju agree fr help but he asked money and she agreed they char main se bacha ek jo dusre village gaya

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