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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mahakaali

Fuming, she stood on the edge
Of the world on the Judgement Day;
A scintillating wonder on the ledge
Taking and taking as Death would may.

Death-rattles droning in the breeze,
Jackals pouncing, hawks' sweeping;
Actors in the theater of blitz-
Battle cries and groans and weeps.

You would say she is a summer's rainy night,
But for the garland of skulls dangling off her neck.
She is a true wonder, the mother of your light,
But for her Ravaging, that without a check.

She roars and she screams,
Being the Mother of all beings-
Her weapons marked with bloodstreams
Have shattered countless evil Kings.

I admit I have been a fool
In trying to tell you of her vigour
That is unfathomable. You'll
Realize only if you'd know her.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
Here's an insignificant ode from my side to Mahakaali devi.

Herein please bear in mind that I'm awful with poems, and this is just my view.

Thank you and I hope you enjoyed the read! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#3
Beautiful poem Dear
Awesome 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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woow hats off chottu👏👏👏
that is written on point admiring this⭐️⭐️

this ode goes well really apt it is
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Posted: 8 years ago
#5
beautiful Poem loved it so much.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg, this is so PERFECT Pro! 👏 I really loved this so much, your use of rhyming was so seamless, and the flow was simply perfect.

She roars and she screams,
Being the Mother of all beings-
Her weapons marked with bloodstreams
Have shattered countless evil Kings.

I loved this stanza in particular, sent chills down my spine.

AWESOME job!
Edited by ..RamKiJanaki.. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wonderful piece dear...👏👏👏

thanx for pm .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#8
This is so so beautiful, Choti. ❤️
Like I say, you're amazing with words. ⭐️

Thanks For Pm.
Keep Writing.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oye hoye <3
Loved reading this ProStar ⭐️ It was perfectly written and so apt!
Do write more! <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is spine chilling and just amazing! The power that radiates throughout the course of it is extraordinary, Pro!

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