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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 4
That day Sharukh came to Tanuja's house for birds feeding.
Sorry didi I asked that sir to give number but he didn't give and said I already have girlfriend.
Ohhh what! I didn't ask his number for that. I just normally asked. Okay leave it.
One thing didi he asked bird's name. I said I don't know. Did u kept names for them?
Upto now I didn't. Seems like good idea, okay lets think about some names. They both think.
I got let's keep them Laila and Majnu. How are names?
Super didi. I will tell to that sir when I meet him next time. Okay didi I have to go. Bye.
Bye Sharukh.
She thinks such a nice guy he is. He didn't give his number by saying he has a girl friend that too when a girl asked him for number.
Preparations are going on in Tanuja's house.
Tanuja is getting ready by her mother and bhabhi. Rishi's family arrives there. Both families greet each other.
"Tanuja he is so handsome, if you like him then smile when I look at you. If you feel shy in telling in this way you can signal to me I will tell to remaining people "said her bhabhi.
Okay bhabhi good idea done.
Tanuja comes there and greets Rishi's parents and sits near her parents.
Ahana asks Rishi to look at bride. He says "no I won't. Once look at her. He hesitatingly looks at her and gets shocked and looks at both Raj and Rano. They smile looking at him.
Okay now you can reject girl. See she is not that much beautiful na. We can say no to this marriage said Manpreet teasingly.
So you all know this. I mean you all know that I saw her and I love her.
"Haa we know I saw her at mall and you searching her desperately. I came to maa buaji and said they agreed. We searched for her and sent your proposal said Manpreet.
Haa Rishi I talked to her. She is just like Tanu di not only in resemblance but also her character is same like Tanu di said Ahana.
Ahana asks Tanuja to look at Rishi. She shyly lifts her head to look at him. She gets shocked by seeing him. She feels happy but by remembering mall incident she gets angry.
All send them to garden for talking.
See how lucky I am. I came here to reject the girl and see you are the girl I am going to marry.
Excuse me don't fool me you said you love me but you came here to marry another girl.
No Tanuja you are mistaking me I fell in love with you at first sight. You are the only girl I love.
I know with how many girls you had love at first sight.
What said Rishi.
Meanwhile Raj says "shub muhurat is going. If all is okay then we can fix this marriage'
First we have to consult them. If they are okay with this marriage we can proceed said Satyendra.
Ahana says it's okay for us as Rishi said okay while going.
Tanuja's bhabhi says wait I will ask Tanuja and she goes to garden.
Leave it. I don't want to marry you. Please go outside and say to all.
By seeing her bhabhi Tanuja stops fighting and smiles at her bhabhi. Her bhabhi too goes smilingly and says Tanuja said okay for marriage.
No I don't want to say. If you want you go and say.
Tanuja goes from there angrily and tensed Rishi follows her.
Today Muhurat is very good. Today itself we can do engagement said Satyendra.
Tanuja who is listening all this gets shocked and tries to talk to her father. But her father ignores her as there is only less time for muhurat. She agrees as she doesn't want to create scene there. They exchange rings. Tanuja hesitatingly puts ring on Rishi' hand. Rishi looks happy and Tanuja tensed. Marriage date is fixed which is two weeks away.
One week passed but Tanuja is not lifting his phone not giving replies to his messages. He always tried to impress her but she didn't. Rishi lost his patience. One day he asked her for one day out. She reluctantly said yes because of her family.
She was helpless. She wanted to say no for this marriage but she loves her father very much so she couldn't say no. one day she went to her father to say no to the marriage. He is talking with friends showing her childhood audio clips. He was so happy by seeing them. She stood near door and watching his father. She too felt tears when she saw his father. Then his father showed them Rishi's photos and said he is his son-in-law. I don't know what I felt but I felt he is the guy who is made for my Tanuja. They are made for each other. His friends praise him how lucky he is as he got such a loving daughter who could say yes to his father proposal in this fast generation.
Satyendra says yes I am lucky to have such daughter. She doesn't say no to me as she respects my decisions and she has full faith on me. By listening all this Tanuja goes from there. She is confused whether to marry him or not. Yes she has full trust on her father's decision and her heart is too saying same. But one part of her is not agreeing whenever she trying to think positively that mall incident came flashing in her thoughts. As marriage date is nearing her dreams also started coming regularly.
She went out with Rishi because of her family members as she doesn't want to make scene. He took her to park but she is not showing any interest. Lastly she took her to maternity ward in hospital.
Why you bought me here asked Tanuja.
Wait a minute he said and showed a nurse who is giving baby girl to her mother after delivery. He showed mothers love and emotions and said my love towards you is so pure like that mothers love.
I always wanted you to feel my love but you never cared about my feelings and emotions. So I bought here.
Tanuja is touched by his words. Neither of them talked in car and he dropped her in her house and went.
She could feel his sincerity but she couldn't get over that incident in mall.
Three more days passed.
Rishi is in editor's office
I have seen your book it is really such a nice story but what about ending you didn't wrote.
I will write in one or two days and I came here to take money for my first edition.
You are new and this is your first book so we can't give you money.
Come on sir I am not asking you money for drinking or for something else. I just wanted it because it is my first ever money which I gained by myself for my first ever book. It's so special to me.
Okay I will give 25000 on one condition that you should publish your next book here only. He gives Rishi cheque of 25000Rs. Rishi taking cheque goes from there.
What Rishi why you agreed for 25000 you know it costs more than that said his friend.
No problem yaar I just wanted to buy a gift for Tanuja with this special money.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part - 5
He goes to Tanuja house that evening and greets them. He says I bought gift for Tanuja and asks them to come upstairs. He arranges telescope and says in our universe we have so many stars. Some has names some don't. I consulted International Star Agency and named one of the stars as Tanuja. All are surprised. Tanuja too surprised. Satyendra asks how we can identify that star.
When it was dark the first star which comes to sky is the star I named as Tanuja and shows them star through telescope. Tanuja feels happy but again she thinks that he is fooling all of them and goes from there.
Rishi too follows her and show Intenational Star Registry certificate. She tears it into pieces. He gets angry and asks what is your problem I am trying to impress you but you are behaving like mad person. If you don't want this marriage to happen say to your father.
No I can't say to him Rishi. I love him very much.
Okay Tanuja now this is not in either of us hands. I will meet you in mandap. He goes from there saying Bye.
That day night he was drunk and talking to Tanu photo which is in his phone. He is sitting in bar. Some goons come there who were fully drunk. One of the goon sees Tanu photo and says see mama how hot she is and takes phone from Rishi forcefully.
Rishi asks them to give his phone. But they push him and comments badly about Tanu. Rishi gets angry and fights with them.
Next day he goes to editors office and takes book which is published under name YOU ARE MY LIFE. Editor comes to Rishi and says I wish in climax hero heroine meets. Rishi gives sad look and goes from there.
On his way to home he meets Sharukh. Sir you asked about bird names na sir. Didi kept them Laila and Majnu. She asked me to tell you bird names.
He smiles weakly and says I thought to give this book to my girl friend but ...he thinks for a minute and asks Sharukh "give this book to your didi and he goes from there.
Marriage preparations are going on full swing. Haldi and Mehendi went smoothly. Now the day of their wedding arrived.
Rishi is in mandap doing pooja and Tanuja is in her room sitting sadly.
Suddenly police arrives in mandap. They come to Rishi and says you are under arrest. He is confused and his father asks them the reason for arresting.
Two days back you fought with one gang. In that gang you beat one person severly and he is dead. He said your name in deathbed and died. So we came here to arrest you.
Tanuja's friend comes there and informs about whole incident. She comes there.
Rishi pleads inspector to give him 30 mins as his marriage will complete and says that his lawyer will take care of remaining proceedings. But police won't listen to him.
Then he goes to his father and says sorry papa. It's just a mistake. Please talk to lawyer and throw how much amount they want. Today is my marriage and I want this marriage to happen at any cost. Please papa please do something. Raj slaps him hard on his face and asks inspector to arrest him as no one will give bail to him and says to Rishi I don't want to spoil that girl's life because of you.
Tanuja is smiling and thinking now all will know what his character is. Rishi comes to her and pleads that he didn't do any mistake and asks her to forgive. Then he goes closer to her and whispers in her ear "Are you happy now and goes with police. She is confused and smile vanishes from her face.
She is sitting in her room and Rishi's words are constantly ringing in her ears "are you happy now. She thinks What does that mean? Did he deliberately cancel marriage for me? Did he really cared about my happiness. The book is lying on the bed. When she about to leave the room the birds come flying and lands on book. She turns back and sees book which is titled YOU ARE MY LIFE where Rishi's photos is printed at the cover of the book.
Then she remembers Sharukh giving her book by saying that sir asked to give this book to you didi. She asks him to keep the book inside as she is in marriage tension and she didn't focus on book.
She started reading book. Now she is getting clear picture of her dreams while reading Tanu's part. Tears started rolling down her cheeks while reading book. She realized that she is his Tanu and came back to him to fulfill promise of Kasam that she made to him. When she is reading book the picture of every scene came flashing before her eyes. She is reading mall scene and accident scene. How he played the drama of arresting to stop marriage for her. She is completely in tears by remembering her harsh words towards Rishi. She even insulted him many times and now she is regretting. She went to her papa and said "papa I want Rishi.
Rishi is sitting in beach and thinking of his moments with Tanu and Tanuja. Suddenly he hears someone calling Rishi. He turns and sees Raj there.
He is shocked to see his father there. Papa... my friend gave bail to me. I am sorry papa. Please forgive me. I didn't do that mistake. It just happened sorry for spoiling your reputation.
No problem beta I know it happened accidentally. You did no mistake. I will talk to Tanuja's father and I will ask him to agree for this marriage.
No papa don't do that I am bad person I went to jail by killing one person.
Meanwhile Satyendra comes there and says beta please marry my daughter. Come on lets go to house you can marry her today.
No uncle. What are you saying? I am not right person for Tanuja. She will get better one. Once ask her if she will accept for this marriage or not.
Tanuja is in tears by listening to Rishi's words as how he is defending her and putting total blame on him. She comes from behind and says please marry me Rishi. I love you and she goes to him and hugs him tightly. He too hugs her back smilingly as well as confusingly.
Raj comes to Rishi and says we also can do acting not only you.
Satyendra asks Raj to come and says let them have some privacy and we have to do marriage preparations again. They both leaves from there.
Rishi and Tanuja sit on beach holding each other's hand. Rishi with confused face asks what is all this.
Tanuja ask him to close his eyes and brings two love birds and shows him. He is thrilled and says you are the one who Sharukh said about. Yes I am he gave me book which you asked to give. I read and remembered everything.
Remembered means what.
I am your Tanu and returned to fulfill Kasam which I gave to you. I used to have one feeling that we are connected by soul but some misunderstandings separated us. Today I realized that You Are My Life. Now no misunderstandings only love
Ha only love. Both gets emotional and hugs each other.
THE END
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
Wow yaar such a wonderful end.Atleast something interesting in this boring weekend.Thx for update.Such a wonderful end.Plz write one more of like this
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
So Rishi was selflessly letting her go and that made her question things; the book helped her connect to her past. And finally they can have their happily ever after. Nice ending dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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👏 Wao such beautiful imagination don't have words for it you nailed it with you imagination superb wao a story without too much negativity and love cute happy ending well done.

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