Tanshi SS - YOU ARE MY LIFE Updated Final Part Page - 4

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Inspired from the forum writers of PV and KTPK iam writhing OS. It is my first ever writing. This OS is based on telugu film "Oka Laila KOsam". May be this OS could be of two parts. And one more important thing is please keep you brains aside while you are reading this OS as logics dont work here.
YOU ARE MY LIFE
Part-1
For the past 20 years he is receiving Business man of the year award consecutively. Now this year also proudly presenting Business man of the year 2017 to the most handsome, hardworking and especially most eligible bachelor of the country Mr. Rishi singh Bedi.
What Rishi bhai why did you switch off the TV. Iam watching your award presenting ceremony na said Manpreet.
Why are you watching again and again. You came to ceremony na.
I watch again n again because my bhai got Business man of the year award. By the way you know the best part of your introduction is when she addressed you as most eligible bachelor of the country. How funny na
Rano who overhears all their conversation comes and says what so funny! my son is most handsome and most eligible bachelor what the lady said is correct.
See maa also saying that Iam most eligible bachelor you are feeling jealous. I can smell it.
Manpreet who keeps angry face and says "may be that lady didn't see me that's why she said you as eligible bachelor. If she sees me then she definitely will say iam most handsome and eligible bachelor not you.
Chintu who comes running and says "oh no papa you don't even know you are married. Those who are married are not bachelors. Mamma join papa in school as he don't even the things I know.
All burst out into laughter.
Again Chintu faces towards Ahana and says maa Rishi chacha is married na then why nani is saying chacha as bachelor. I have seen chachi's photo mamma she is so beautiful.
Ha beta Rishi chacha is married but chachi is dead na that's why he is bachelor said Rano.
All their faces became sad and dull by the mention of Tanu. Rishi gets up sadly and goes to his room followed by Rano.
Rishi holds Tanu's photo and says "why you left me Tanu. You gave me promise that you would never leave me but you left. You promised me that you will comeback but you never came. Slow tears came across his face.
Rano who witnessed all these got tears in her eyes. Slowly she came towards Rishi and placed her hand on his shoulders and said " Don't cry Rishi. Tanu feels sad if she sees you crying. She only wished your happiness that's why she sacrificed her life for you. Your are just wasting her sacrifice Rishi. You have your life Rishi which she gave, you have to move on without her Rishi. Please don't destroy it.
Ma please don't start again. I got used to my life with Tanu's memories. Iam quite happy with her memories. Please don't force me to marry.
Iam done Rishi your fathers health is becoming worst day by day because of you. The only cure for his disease is you getting married and living happy life.
Maa Iam happy now. I only love Tanu and I can't imagine anyone in my life other than Tanu. Please understand by saying this he goes out from there
Rano in tears thinks " I can't see you sad Rishi. I will search for a girl who is like Tanu and who loves you like Tanu.
Rishi's car is struck in traffic. He sat dull facing his head towards window lost in thoughts reminiscing his moments with Tanu. Suddenly air started blowing. A cool breeze of air touched his face waking him up from his thoughts. He can feel the air which is hinting him that it came from his Tanu. He can smell her fragrance. He is feeling weird that his Tanu is very near to him. He saw here and there but found no one. He thought it as dream.
But something caught his sight. Two children of around 7 years of age crossing road on other side of the road. Last night it rained heavily so roads were filled with dirt.
A car which is passing through the same road passed through a pothole speedily. When the dirt in pothole is about to fall on children then a girl wearing white chudidhar came and draped her dupatta around children. The dirt fell on her dupatta and dress.
Rishi is watching all this. The girl is facing her back towards Rishi. He can recognize the long air which he wanted to play. He could feel his Tanu.
The girl bent down and gave kiss to both the children. With a smile the children said thank you and gave kiss to her and they went by saying goodbye. The girl turned backwards with a beaming smile on her face. Now he could see her face. He was shocked and sat there like statue looking at her. Tears were falling from his face. He is reminiscing the moments with Tanu. The happy moments of him with tanu were flashing before his eyes. Suddenly the moment where Tanu got bullet by saving him got flashed in his eyes which bought him to reality with a jerk. Then he saw the girl, his Tanu is leaving from there.
He tried to open the door but suddenly car started moving as the traffic is cleared. He couldn't get down in moving car. He shouted at the driver to stop the car.
Sir I cant stop car now as we are in middle of the road. Wait for 5 mins I will stop at the side of the road.
Rishi is restless. When the car stopped he went near the place where he saw his Tanu but she is gone. He searched for her but she is no whereto find. He shouted Tanu loudly.
Haa with a jerk the girl turned back. "What happened Tanuja why you shouted. You are fine na asked her friend.
Iam fine netra. I felt like someone is calling my name that's why I shouted like that.
Oh no Tanuja we are alone in car and the car is running in middle of the road how can anyone call you. May be its just a dream.
Maybe it's a dream but you know I felt like someone calling me sadly. Okay just leave it.
Okay what about your dream they are still bothering you.
Haa sometimes. When Iam having that dreams I feel like I lost someone and I came for that person. What makes me surprise is I can't see any of their face in my dream. I only could see is one boy and girl taking rounds around fire. Boy is putting vermilion on girls hairline and then the girl getting shot that's it. It makes me feel that iam somewhat connected to that dream.
Tears started running from her cheeks while she narrating her dream.
Okay leave it yaar you are becoming too emotional for a dream.
Don't know what is happening as I remember this dream tears automatically comes from my eyes.
Rishi is feeling sad as he saw his Tanu but couldn't find her. He wakes from his thoughts when he sees a boy selling two love birds. He asks driver to stop the car. He goes near the boy.
Sir, will you take this love birds they only costs 1000Rs. Please take it sir.
Okay I will take them. What is your name.
Sharukh sir.
He give 1000 Rs to the boy and opens the cage and frees them.
Sir what did you do, you bought them for 1000 Rs and now you set them free.
I don't like birds in cage so I set them free. They too have freedom so let them live in freedom. By saying this he goes to sit in car.
You are so good sir. Okay sir bye.
Bye, he leaves to office.
Tanuja reaches to her house and that afternoon its raining heavily. She goes to play in rain. She was enjoying rain.
Satyendra once come here see your daughter is playing in rain go and bring her otherwise she gets cold. And you will scold us for not taking care. She wont listen to anyone except you, go and bring her.
"Okay maa I will bring her how dare she. I will scold her said satyendra to his mom.
He angrily goes to Tanuja. Dadi is happy as her son is going to scold her daughter.
He goes to Tanuja and asks her to come. She keeps sweet face and makes him dance in rain. Both enjoy in rain.
By watching this dadi smiles and says I know he will do this only. Other than this what he can do as she is his darling daughter.
Tanuja who is dancing sees two love birds near a tree soaking in rain. She goes near them and carries them inside house.
Papa I will keep them. I will take care of them. Please papa please say yes.
Come on say yes, you are used to it na whatever your daughter asks you will give na said dadi sarcastically.
Okay but you should not cage them as they have their freedom to live. We should not cage their freedom.
Oh papa that's not a problem I will just keep them in garden. I have a bird house na without any doors. They are free to go if they want.
Okay done I will give permission to you but you should not feel bad if they leave.
Okay papa she hugs him and kisses him and says I will not feel papa and you are best papa in the world.

P.S sorry for grammatical and spelling mistakes
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great job... waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Achelvi

Great job... waiting for next update


thanks for your comment
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: mommyangel55

Interesting concept...updatw next soon



thanks for ur comment
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Love the os dear.What a story.love bird with our love birds.Please update soon.Can't wait more for next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely OS dear! Keep on updating regularly, waiting eagerly for it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good going Divya. I see you're keeping true to the theme of the show. Rishi has been faithful to her memories and would soon have her back; Tanu/Tanuja knows she's destined for someone and would recognize him when facing him. Loved the family banter and a Rano concerned for her son is refreshing from the monster-in-law. So yes I put my brain aside and enjoyed the sweet story 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: arya1210

Love the os dear.What a story.love bird with our love birds.Please update soon.Can't wait more for next part


thank u Arya for ur lovely comment
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suntala

Lovely OS dear! Keep on updating regularly, waiting eagerly for it.


thank u Suntala for ur lovely comment
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome!👏loved when rishi saw tanu's face. keep on writing!👍🏼
Edited by zoha7865 - 8 years ago

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