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Posted: 8 years ago
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👏 Wao so beautifully written buhat mind relexing feeling aye read kr k buhat cutie os hai with kasam touch loving it please please update soon really can't wait for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tessaloni

Good going Divya. I see you're keeping true to the theme of the show. Rishi has been faithful to her memories and would soon have her back; Tanu/Tanuja knows she's destined for someone and would recognize him when facing him. Loved the family banter and a Rano concerned for her son is refreshing from the monster-in-law. So yes I put my brain aside and enjoyed the sweet story 😃

Firstly thanks for the sweet comment..yeah her heart recognises him but there will be MU in which there will be fight between mind and heart. Ultimately heart wins but have to see how her heart wins over mind
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: zoha7865

awesome!👏loved when rishi saw tanu's face. keep on writing!👍🏼


thanks for ur comment. updating
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ManazzaShahid12

👏 Wao so beautifully written buhat mind relexing feeling aye read kr k buhat cutie os hai with kasam touch loving it please please update soon really can't wait for next


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thanks for ur comment. updating...
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Note- Once again i am mentioning logics dont work here.I hope you enjoy this chapter.

Part - 2

Night at Rishi's house
Rishi holding Tanu's photo remembers morning incident and feels sad for not meeting her and thinks he will meet her soon. He thought to inform to his family and thinks it's not right time to tell. He always wanted to write book but somehow he didn't wrote but now he is so happy as he saw his Tanu. One glimpse of her made him to live his life once again.
He started writing book with his childhood where he and his Tanu spent most of the time playing together and Tanu saving his life. Then he going to America and forgetting her but not his heart where he used to get flashes of her and his childhood. His return to India. In airport, getting current shock by touching her hand unintentionally while giving her chain. Terrorist attack in which once again Tanu saving him. Their first meet under the bulb. While writing all this he slept on the couch unknowingly.
Morning at Tanuja's house

Someone is knocking at the door. Tanuja went and opened the door.
Good Morning didi. How are you?
Good Morning Sharukh. I am fine. How is your bird business going?
Fine didi. I bought food for birds.
Okay come on lets go to garden. Yesterday I found two birds soaking in rain near the tree. I kept them in bird house.
Ohh that means we have two new birds. They went to bird house and she surprised to see them still in bird house.
Didi these are my birds I mean I have sold them to one sir. He gave 1000 Rs and freed them from cage by saying they too have freedom and we should not cage their freedom.
She remembers her father words and thinks how good he is. He thinks like my father.
Sharukh next time when you meet him take his number and give it to me.
Okay didi I will take his number and will give it to you. Bye.
Bye sharukh.
Manpreet is talking to Purab in office seriously. Rishi comes there and asks Manpreet "what is the matter, you two are discussing seriously. Tell me if I can, I will solve it.
Manpreet says You know na bhai he loves one girl and that girl also loves him but she is not saying. His parents are forcing him to marry but he is not ready as he loves her. So he proposed her but she said nothing.
Are you sure she loves you asked Rishi.
Yeah sure she loves me very much but main problem is she loves her father so she fears that he may not agree for our marriage.
Okay then I has a solution for your problem. Tell me where she is, I will talk to her.
I asked her to come to the mall which is nearer to the office.
Okay I will meet her. What is her name?
"Mallaika said Purab.
At mall
Tanuja with her friends Netra and Vidhi goes to mall and sits in a restaurant.
"My marriage is fixed and engagement is in three days and marriage date has to be fixed said Netra.
"Wow that's great news "said Vidhi.
Meanwhile Rishi enters with Manpreet and Purab. "Where the girl is "asked Rishi.
Purab points a table which nearer to Tanuja table. Rishi asks Manpreet and Purab to stay there and goes near the table.
While Rishi is approaching, Tanuja feels something and thinks "why I am feeling something which I never felt before. Same feeling I felt yesterday morning that someone is looking at me but I found no one. Now I feel like someone very close to my heart is very near to me. She sees here and there but by that time when she turns towards Rishi he sits at the table. She couldn't see him.
He took one rose from the vase which is on the table and says I LOVE YOU by giving rose to Mallaika. She is shocked.
By listening those words Tanuja and her friends turned to see him. There was pillar between both the tables. Tanuja can see Rishi but Rishi can't see Tanuja because of pillar.
When Tanuja turned to see him she was shocked as she felt the similar feeling which she felt before. She felt like she knows him from years and came only for him.
When Tanuja is looking at Rishi he too felt the same feeling that his Tanu is near to him. He sees here and there but couldn't find her as there is pillar between them. So he continued with Mallaika.
Realizing her shocked face Rishi once again said I LOVE TOU which bought both Mallaika and Tanuja to reality.
Manpreet and Purab who are listening from far get shocked by his words. Purab says What is Rishi saying, is he helping me or he is setting his life.
I am also thinking that only. Don't worry he won't do anything like that you know na he loves Tanu very much. Seems like he is up to something. Let's wait and watch.
"What she said with a shocked face.
I said I...LOVE...YOU... I saw you yesterday evening at Baba temple and fell in love at that instant.
What! You saw me and fell in love with me in a minute. That's so dramatic.
No not a minute. My heart liked you at an instant but my brain took 5 minutes to realize as my heart froze at that moment when I saw you.
Unknown to her tears started rolling down her cheeks. When she felt her cheeks wet she realized she was crying. She thinks "why I am feeling this much pain when he is saying I LOVE YOU to her. May be it's just an attraction. I shouldn't think much about this.
Sorry I don't love you. I love someone.
But I saw your facebook status in which it is single.
"What is your name? Mallaika asked Rishi.
Rishi Singh Bedi.
Netra who is listening all this searches his name in face book and sends friend request.
Rishi Singh Bedi. I know you. I have seen you in Purab's birthday party.
Ohh! you love Purab. No problem, seems like you haven't told him. No need of telling him. I am more handsome and wealthier than him. We can date for a month if you feel you love me then we can stay together or else you can go back to him. I won't tell him anything.
Tanuja who is listening all this gets frustrated and tells to her friends "See how cheap he is. He knows she loves his friend but still he is asking her to love him. How can he cheat his own friend? Come on lets go. I feel disgusted here. But deep down in her heart she is feeling something. It feels like he is not wrong. But her mind took charge over heart saying he is wrong person who is characterless.
Tanuja along with her friends leaves from there.
What nonsense you are talking. I love Purab and I can't ditch him.
Once again think about my offer. Don't lose it. (Under the table with his hand he is signaling to Manpreet and Purab to come there)
No I said na I love him. If you don't go from here I will call police.
Meanwhile Manpreet and Purab comes there.
Mallaika seeing Purab gets up and tells him "See what your friend is saying. He is asking me to ditch you. I said I love only you but he is not listening.
All laugh. Mallaika looks confused.
Then Rishi realizing Mallaika's confused face says "It's just a drama to make you confess that you love Purab. Look our plan worked you confessed that you love Purab. See Mallaika if you love your father go and tell him about your love matter. He definitely says yes. Don't fear, go and just tell him.
Mallaika goes to Purab and says sorry by hugging him. Purab too smiles and hugs her.
Meanwhile a girl who is wearing school uniform comes to Rishi and says Happy Independence Day by giving National Flag. He bents down and kisses her on cheek by saying same to you.
Manpreet comes to Rishi and says bhayya you are mind blowing and you became cupid. Something changed you; you are acting differently from yesterday. What's the reason?
Differently...What...me...nothing I just helped Purab that's it nothing more by saying this he goes out unable to answer Manpreet question.
He is standing on the first floor of the mall and watching downwards. Same girl who has given him flag came near to Tanuja and gave flag by saying Happy Independence day. Tanuja bent down and kissed her on same cheek where Rishi kissed.
Rishi is watching all this. Without wasting a second he came down through steps to the same place but she is gone by the time he came down.
Again he felt sad but felt happy by remembering that she too kissed the same cheek.
Rishi is in bike going to office stops near signal. Shahrukh who saw Rishi comes near him and says Hi sir, how are you.
Fine Sharukh. How are you?
Fine sir. Did you remember the birds you freed that day?
I remember. Why?
One didi is taking care of those birds. I said about you, how you freed those birds. She asked your number sir.
Ohh good but tell her I can't give her number as I already have girlfriend. By the way what are those bird names?
Don't know Sir I will ask her and will tell you.
Okay bye.
Bye sir
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P.S - Sorry for spelling and grammatical mistakes.
This chapter is full of MU so please keep your patience.
Edited by Divya333 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Jealous Tanuja lol.Love her jealousy . Again mu but for sure it will clear soon not like cv mu.Waiting for next plz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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they haven't interacted yet there exist MU's already, sparks will surely fly when they finally come face to face 😆. but the lovebirds that they both rescued are already linking them. good update dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part - 3

Night at Rishi's house:
He again starts writing book. He resumes with Atta incident in kitchen, engagement with Neha. Again in that engagement how she saved him. Tanu's roka with Pawan and engagement where again she saved him. His plans of proving Pawan's relation with Saloni with the help of Manpreet. How he kidnapped Tanu in the mandap. How they got married and moments of happiness they spent before her death. How she sacrificed her life for him. By writing all this he got tears in his eyes.

And his 20 years of life where he spent without Tanu like a lifeless body. And how he saw his Tanu at the road. This part bought a smile on his face. The mall incident where he helped his friend Purab. How he missed her all the time. Bird incidents etc.,.

He completed writing and thought have to see what will happen next. He went to sleep.
Tanuja is thinking about Rishi. How could he propose a girl whom his friend loves? May be there is some reason behind it. My heart is saying he is not wrong person. One part of her brain is saying no...no you can't think like that he is big flirt. After long debate she came to conclusion that "I don't like him. She goes to sleep unknowingly while thinking about Rishi.

Morning at Rishi's house:

Ma how many times I have to say I won't marry anyone except Tanu. Please Ma don't start this topic again.

Rishi beta please think about your father, his health is not nice. Please reconsider your decision.
Ma what happened to buaji. He is fine na last night by saying he goes to Raj's room. Buaji how is your health I saw you last night you are perfectly alright what happened to you.

Raj gets up from bed coughing and says I feel very weak beta. I feel like I only have one month left. I want to see you happy in your life. Please beta please marry.

Both Raj and Rano blackmails him emotionally.
Okay I will marry. Happy. But I will choose my bride that's final.

Rishi thinks"I know you both are dramebaaz. I know they are doing drama but I only choose my Tanu . He goes from there.
Raj and Rano smiles as their plan worked very well as Rishi agreed for marriage.

At Tanuja's house:

"Tanuja come here her mother called her.
What ma I am getting late. I have to go to institute. Tell me fast what's the matter its already late.
Nothing would happen if you go late for one day. Come sit here your father is selecting matches for your marriage.

Ohh no problem. Let him select. I have full faith on him because he is best papa in the world. Whoever he selects I will marry him. We all know his choice will be best but in my matters it will be better than best. Papa I want same guy like you, who thinks like you. She goes out by quickly giving him kiss on cheek.
Satyendra smiles. He sits all the day and selects.

Evening

Rishi is going to home. On his way he once again saw her. She is giving shirt to one old man. She is very far from him. He has to cross road. But mere thought of losing her again made him crazy and he began running on road not caring about vehicles.

A car hit him. He fell on the road. Tanuja came running there by seeing him and tied her dupatta around his head. She became so concerned. She is asking him continuously how is he. But he is so lost on her and smiling looking at her face.

Now she lost her patience and asked him loudly how he is.
"I am okay "is the one word he could say as again he lost in her.
Give any of your friends or relative number I will call and will inform about you.
Yeah ...number is 987654321.

Okay I will call. She calls to that number. It is ringing. Yeah it is ringing in his pocket.
Ohh you forgot and gave your number. Give me any of your friend number..
He cut her middle and said I LOVE YOU.

She gave an angry look and went from there by forgetting her dupatta which is tied to Rishi's head.
He went to his home with bandages near head and hands. All became concerned.
I am okay. Its just a small accident. Doctor suggested me to take rest. By saying this he went to room and took dupatta out and kissed it.
I am 100% sure you are my Tanu. But why she didn't recognize me. What if she is not my Tanu. No that can't be possible. What I feel towards Tanu is I am feeling towards her. I love her. Only time will give answers for my questions. If she is in my kismat I will definitely meet her. If I meet her again then I will not leave her.
On the other hand Tanuja is thinking about Rishi and felt happy as he proposed her.
She thinks why I am feeling happy. No I should feel angry on him. Don't forget Tanuja he is not a nice guy. But why I am feeling his pain. Why I can't see him in trouble. Why I went running to him when he had accident. Why I feel like he has a connection with that dream. Only time will give answers to my question.

Morning at Tanuja's house:

Tanuja gets up with a jerk. Ohh again I dreamt of that. What would be that dream. Why I can't see their faces. Okay leave it Tanuja, it became your daily routine thinking about that dream. She gets ready and thinks how he could be now. Should I call him? No...no... what he will think about you Tanuja. Don't call him.

She gets a message. She open and reads it "I am fine. Don't worry about me.
She thinks "How he know I am thinking about him. Forget about it Tanuja go on with your work.
Rishi thinks "I know you will think about me and by well beings that's why I sent you that message.

Rano sees Rishi smiling at his phone and tells wah beta you are smiling that means your father told you about her.
What maa? who is she. Papaji didn't tell me anything. What are you talking about?

Ohh that means you know nothing. We selected a girl for you. We are going evening to see her.
Maa I don't want to see any girl. I don't want to go. I only said yes yesterday, how eager you people are for my marriage, that you selected girl for me in one day.

I selected that girl ten days back only. I waited only for your permission. I sent your proposal to them two days ago. They liked you and asked us to come. But you know you will like this girl. Once see her photo. You definitely like her.

No maa I won't see her photo. I don't come there.
"You will come there that's final by saying this she goes from there.
Rishi sits in hall thinking about how to avoid this meeting.

Ahana comes there and says did you see her photo Rishi. She is so beautiful.
No I don't want to marry. I didn't see her photo
Ohh Rishi see her photo you will love her and keeps photo on sofa.

I won't see her photo. What is there in that girl all are praising. Okay I will come to girl's house and I will reject that girl.
Okay let's see. I bet you will say yes.
Let's see.

P.S -Sorry for spelling and grammatical mistakes
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Wao what a amazing imagination like your updates keep writing it's really awesome good going
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wondefull update dear.I think she will be tanuja for sure.Can't wait for next part.Please update soon

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