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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 9: Your Mine

Karan p.o.v.

Karan woke up with a sore shoulder and realised he was alone on the bed. Naina was seemingly already up. He smelt a sweet aroma filling the air and realised that she must be cooking. His stomach churned for food. He slowly got to the bathroom and got himself dressed. His shoulder had a slight bruise still but he was expecting it to be worse. He gave a quick comb to his hair and walked into the kitchen to see Naina setting up a small meal for them. She smiled seeing him approach her.

Good morning he said smiling in return. He sat down at the counter and took a sip of his tea. He scrunched up his face immediately. Tumne shakkar nahi dali is mein? He questioned. Kyun? She asked alarmed. She came over and took a sip from his cup. Teek hi toh hai, she judged. He took back the cup and sipped it. Haan ab bilkul teek hai, tumhare hont jo is cup mein hain. She blushed uncontrollably and turned away as she came round to sit next to him.

It was just then that Karan fully looked at her. She was wearing quite a short pink dress, which she had complimented with black tights and some boots. A black jacket to go on top. She noticed his stare and shied away. Wow was all he managed to say. If he ever met a man who only preferred modern dress wearing girls, he would show them his wife and how sanskaari she was but looked stellar in modern clothes just as well as in the classic. She caressed his face then and he snapped out of his dreaming.

Tumhari shoulder kaisi hai, she asked. He gave it a rub, not bad he replied. Tears filled her eyes. Yeah sab meri wajah se hua tha, she started. He cupped her cheeks and lifted her eyes to his. Aise koi bat nahi hai, he replied sternly. She pulled his collar in suddenly and their was a quick brief kiss. Karan realised this was the first time that Naina was making a move. He was shocked. She blushed and started eating her share trying hard to hide her blush in her hair.

They had spent the rest of the morning just walking around the resort. They had gone to the cinema available down and watched a nice comedy film. Hands entangled. Popcorns fed. Love was in the air. Finally they headed off to the restaurant for lunch. The place had a nice warm atmosphere with plenty of heaters to keep out the cold. It even had an indoor swimming pool. Karan found a nice comfy seat in the corner and snuggled down. They had ordered some tasty food and had eaten quite well. Mein washroom ja kar aati hoon, she said as she walked off. His eyes met a lady who was stepping out from the pool. She was beautiful he thought. Just in a different way. He was busy admiring her when she wrapped a towel and came in.

Excuse me sir, my swimming suits zip is stuck behind can you please help secure it. For a minute Karan thought she was asking someone behind him. To his surprise, she was talking to him. They were quite late for the lunch and So were one of the few in the restaurant. He wondered which country she was from. American, Australian, Canadian. Karan felt nervous, but there was no harm in helping he thought so he stood up and tried to untangle and pull up her zip.

Naina p.o.v.

Naina walked out of the washroom to find herself in shock. Not only was her husband standing next to a women who was dressed in such short and revealing clothing, but he was even touching her. Rage filled in her. Her cheeks turned red for the first time with anger as she went closer to the table. The lady thanking Karan for his help rushed off back to the pool. Kya kar rahe the? She questioned reaching the table.

Karan must have noticed her tone as his answer came with softness. He slowly explained what happened and she couldn't help but smile. Her husband was a gentleman sometimes. By the time she ordered some dessert, the same lady had changed into a nice floral print dress and now was standing at their table. Would you please dance with me? She asked Karan. Naina's eyes widened. Karan look smitten by this women and this made Naina upset. He took a look at Naina who was busy shaking her head. Please she begged again, just once. Karan didn't refuse and led he off onto the stage. Naina couldn't bear to watch any longer. Steam filled her ears.

With a final stomp, The fury increased watching the lady pose for a selfie with Karan and giving him a small peck on his cheek. Naina managed to stumble and stand up. She walked straight to their room, shaking from side to side in anger. I hate you Karan she mumbled gurgling. I hate you. She repeated to no one. She didn't know how she managed to get into their room, but she thanked that the key was with her and slammed it shut. Her eyes quickly clouding up with tears.

Karan p.o.v.

Karan returned to the table feeling horrible. He wanted a quiet lunch with his wife and instead he got a little distracted. But he felt bad about turning her down. After all she had begged him. To his surprise he didn't find Naina at the table. Having asked the waiter where she went, Karan ran outside trying to call her name out and look around. He decided she must have gone back to the room. He tried slamming on the door but to no avail, she was inside and she'd locked him out. He ran round to the other side and climbed into the balcony hoping she hadn't done something to herself.

His heart pounded as he luckily found the back entrance open. He walked in to find their room pitch dark apart from the small candles perched on either side. He looked around frantically calling her name until he heard a final swish in the water. He adjusted his eyes to see a familiar figure sitting on the side of the pool before him. His heart hammering against his chest. Naina turned around and noticed him. On the contrary to what he had expected, she asked him to come closer. He joined her placing his feet in the water as they sat side by side.

Tumhe bure lag raha tha na ki mein unke jaisa nahi hoon, she asked. Karan looked confused. Par mein unke jaise ban sakthi hoon she said, and with that she let the bath robe she had been wearing drop down from her shoulders. His eyes took in the sight. She was wearing a swimming suit. It was a one piece but still quite a revealing one with cuts near Her hips and quite backless. His breath caught in his throat. Before he could say or feel anything. He felt his jacket being pushed off and his shirt buttons opened.

In the next moment, heat rose up his spine as she kissed him. His hands exploring her in areas he hadn't touched before. She slowly pushed away before slowly dipping into the pool. He followed her in. The water was just right allowing the swirls to be made around them as Naina pulled him towards her again. The kiss was even more urgent this time. His hands in her wet hair. Her gripping onto his paining shoulders. The pain shot at him but he didn't want any distractions.

Suddenly he pushed her away. She kept coming back at him and pulling him close. Nahi Naina,yeh teek nahi hai, he argued. He held her firm and caught her eyes in his. Tumhe kisi aur ki tarah banne ki zaroorat nahi hai, tum jaise bhi ho mein tumhe hi pyaar kartha hoon. I love you. Her eyes were calm. Her lips quivering. Karan turned around and reached out to the edge of the pool where his jacket lay. He slowly brought it to her and wrapped it round her shoulders. Aur aise kapde tumhe pehene ki zaroorat bi nahi hai, slowly pulling the jacket tighter. Par tum... she started.

Nahi Naina, mein janta hoon ki tum bohot gusse mein hogi par mein sirf us ladki ki help kar raha tha. Meri dil toh ek ladki ne bohot pehle se le liye hai, with that he pulled her closer. Her lips meeting his in a small silent kiss, just to confirm to her that she was his. He wrapped his hands around her waist, kuch der aur romance toh kar sakthe Hain, he smiled giggling. She blushed. He pulled her into him. The water splashed around them taking them into the deeper side.

chandmeinchupi thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
Hey guys... so sorry for the late update. Hope you all like it. Please comment. Eagerly waiting for your reviews.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hey dear it was a beautiful and hawwwt update. The way Naina is showing her longing for Karan everytime is portrayed by you so beautifully. That jealousy of Naina brought the sexy side of her in front of Karan and Karan being so much in love with his wife just wants her to be the way she is n this is the best feeling when you are being so much loved n ur loved ones want you to be the way you are. Girl... u killed it again in this update as well. Waiting eagerly for next update. Lots of love
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Originally posted by: dilwali

hey dear it was a beautiful and hawwwt update. The way Naina is showing her longing for Karan everytime is portrayed by you so beautifully. That jealousy of Naina brought the sexy side of her in front of Karan and Karan being so much in love with his wife just wants her to be the way she is n this is the best feeling when you are being so much loved n ur loved ones want you to be the way you are. Girl... u killed it again in this update as well. Waiting eagerly for next update. Lots of love


It's always a pleasure to read your comments. It's like reading an in depth analysis of my stories. So glad that you like it and enjoy it. Yes I wanted a scene like this so I fit it in this sequence. Hoping you will enjoy my next one.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it once again. Im enjoying reading how naina is gradually showing what she feels, and karan is such a sweetie. Looking forward to the next one!! 😊
Edited by nawshi - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: nawshi

Loved it once again. Im enjoying reading how naina is gradually showing what she feels, and karan is such a sweetie. Looking forward to the next one!! 😊


Hehe glad u liked it!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
Chapter 10: Love makes life beautiful


Naina p.o.v.

Naina woke up to find Karan deep in sleep. She was still wearing his jacket and swimsuit. A blush crept onto her face seeing his bare muscles. She traced some patterns on his chest and admired him. She was lucky that fate had given her Karan. He was a dream husband that every women would die for. Of course he was good looking, she never doubted that since the first day she saw him. But what always caught her attention was his even bigger heart. Some would say that people turn cold after a long time of separation but he was complete opposite. Although he had spent time away from friends and family due to his childhood sickness, there was never a moment where he blamed or hated them as a reason for him being sick for so long.
Looking at him sleeping like an angel, she couldn't help but smile. Karan was no longer the very shy, restricted sole he once was. He was free now. Free to express what he loves and desires. She was proud of herself. She had made him realise the true him. More then anything she longed to be with him forever. She watched his chest rise and fall slowly with the breathing and placed her palm on his chest. I just want a place in your heart Karan, a place of love and warmth just for me. Please never let anyone come into it. Just you and me forever. She smiled. The clock was ticking and it was time for her to sneak out. She wiggled herself off to change.

Unfortunately, for her she was now beginning to run out of decent stuff to wear and today's ensemble was a bit too short. Karan noticed too when she had stepped out. But he had given her confidence that he loved her heart not her looks and she didn't need to worry about anything else.Today's schedule was a bit different. After having talked to her di in what seemed like ages, and updating on each other's fun endeavours, pulling each other's legs, She and Karan were heading down to the court where certain games were being played for couples. Karan was insistent that they attend it. Meghnal didn't want to be a part of the competition and they had gone off on a boat ride to enjoy the afternoon. They sat down at a table just in time for the start.

The host began telling rules about how there will be certain mini games being played and in the end they would select the winner of best couple. Naina's worries went back to their performance in the best couple competition. As if having read her mind, Karan gripped her hand and gave it a squeeze of comfort. The first round was a couple race, where the men had to lift their partners in their arms and reach the finish line. Naina braced herself for a fall, but it never came. Karan had swiftly glided her up in his arms and had carried her off hurriedly towards the finish line. She was surprised but not shocked, after all her husband was a handsome hunk.

The second round was a bit more tricky, Naina was quite worried if this was going to work. While the men sat in a different room and waited. The women had to each pour their cologne in a bowl which the men could smell when it was their turn and identify which was theirs. Pouring her cologne in the bowl, Naina had her heart in her mouth. Would Karan be able to guess this, she thought. To her surprise when it was Karan's turn, he sniffed each perfume and stopped directly at her one. As he slipped back next to her in line, she asked, tumne Kaise pehichaana? He smiled making her heart jump. Tumhaara khusboo kahin bhi pehchaan loonga mein.

Karan p.o.v.

He wanted to prove himself today. The last time he had participated in a competiton of this sort, he had no idea about Naina but now things were different. After yesterday's incident, he wanted to show her how much she meant to him. He breathed her in his every breath. He couldn't imagine even a day without her in his arms. Old or young, he wanted to be his forever. So far the two rounds have gone great. The third round was even more harder. The ladies had been given a large set of shoes, of which they had to choose a design and size that fit. Naina had already made her choice and was now eagerly tilting her head watching him as he was going through each pair. He tried to remember all the times he had actually seen her foot, which was quite difficult as she always wore long shalwar or dresses. Finally he came to a shoe which seemed to resemble something he had seen before.

The scene played in his head. It was the day she had gotten an allergic reaction on her hand. She had gotten herself treated and nicely placed her feet out for him to see. He visualised that shoe now and saw the one in his hand was quite similar. He looked at the sizes now and tried to remember the first time Naina had walked into his house making those red footprints after the wedding that every bride does. He chose the shoe and turned around walking straight to Naina. She looked up with tears in her eyes as he slowly helped her put it on. A perfect fit, the whole crowd cheered. The two other top competitors giving them cold glares.

Having been chosen to the next round, Karan could see that Naina had become even more nervous during the lunch break. She had barely eaten but then he couldn't complain as he couldn't eat either. Both worried of the next rounds ahead, While the beginning round tested general compatibility and how much the men knew the ladies, the next set of rounds was more about how much the ladies knew of the men. Naina was sweating now and thin beads of sweat were forming on her forehead. Karan slowly took out his handkerchief and wiped it off. Tension mat lena, mujhe tumse zyada koi nahi jaanta. She smiled. His heart gave out a little flutter. The men were told to make a juice of their choice while the ladies waited in a separate room. The ladies then had to taste and identify which juice was made by their husband.

Naina p.o.v.

Naina entered the arena curiously, she looked at the five glasses on the table and realised that there were two orange juices. She recalled back to the moment when Karan and jiju had made juice for their mum. She knew he must have made the same one. Besides it was one of the few things he could possibly make. Now looking at the glasses, she tasted both, trying to keep her concentration to the maximum and remembering back to how his one was. She picked the right one and was applauded by the audience.

It was now way past into the evening and the next task was being announced. The next round was even more tricky. The men had all submitted their watches which were now placed in boxes. Naina was very confused. Karan never wore watches. It was only recently when he began working that he began to wear them. Even then she hadn't given much attention to what he was wearing. Now looking at the watches before her, Naina felt a lump form in her throat. What if she would lose this game and they got out? It would all be her fault. No she wouldn't give up. She would do this for her love. She picked up each watch and tried to trace something that would give her a feel of him but she got nothing.

When she got to the final watch, she heard a tick tick noise. Some moments played back in her head once more. It was the day she had fainted on the bed when he hadn't called. Karan had helped her, made her food, fed her. In the silence of the room, was a small ticking, from his watch. Naina's heart jumped with joy. Yahi hai, she said loud and clear. Skipping down the steps, she hurried to Karan, who gave her a quick high five.

The host finally announced that the fight for the final prize would be between them and another couple who had been playing all their rounds in an equally strong way. The final round would be a picture round. Karan jumped at that. This time, it was Naina who willed him on. Hum yeah kar sakthe hain Karan. He nodded. A newly found confidence building in arms and eyes. Both Karan and Naina had to play in this game but separately. They were each given a puzzle that when put together would form a picture of their partner. As the time started, Naina was very happy. She was always known for being good at puzzles. This puzzle wasn't easy though, each piece was a cube and all six sides had different noses, eyes etc.. so you had to decide how your partners facial features looked from memory and try and put it together. she carefully started to work on her picture.

Karan p.o.v.

Karan started panicking. This was so difficult. All the noses and all were too confusing for him. He closed his eyes and thought of what Naina would say to him. Be strong. Tum yeah kar sakthe ho. He took a deep breath and slowly imagined her in his mind. Now his picture finally started to come together. As the time came to an end, both couples were assembled on stage. Aur yeah competition jeethe hain, Karan and Naina. A huge roar erupted in the crowd. Karan's heart leaped with joy. His first victory. He had always lost but with Naina at his side,he would never lose again. He would learn to win. Learn to fight. Holding her hand tight in his they accepted a small winners trophy and package. But the gifts and tokens did not matter as much as happiness of proving to each other how much they were meant to be.

As they headed to their room after the complimentary dinner, hand in hand with her head leaned against his chest, Karan stopped suddenly. Naina tum room jao mein aata hoon, he said. Par kyun, tum kahan jaa rahe ho, she asked. But he didn't reply, he quickly brushed off to one of the hits in the distance. Sorry Naina he thought to himself, but yeah mujhe tumhare liye karma hoga. Agar tumhe batata tum mana karthi. And with that he turned the knob and carried off into the room.

Naina p.o.v.

It had been a while since Karan had gone off. Tears came to her. What was so important that he didn't even want to tell her about it. She started to sob. A slight turn of the knob snapped her out. She turned around to see Karan hurrying in. Karan she said as she ran to him. She stood shell shocked seeing the front of his shirt lined with small droplets of blood. All the rage and sadness vanished in an instance and panic took over her. Karan Kya hua, she said as she pushed him into the sofa. She slowly unbuttoned and took off his shirt to see the damage.

Her hands numbed. Her heart beating faster now. There on his chest, nicely above his heart was a word. A word that made her heart ache. Naina. Her name. He had tatooed her name. She tried to say something but the words wouldn't come. She hugged him tightly and felt his arms come round her hips. Tumne jagah manga tah na, he asked. Realisation dawned over Naina. He must have listened to her talking to him in the morning. More tears flooded. As he wiped them away. Mere dil mein tumhare siwa kisi aur ke liye jagah nahi hai, he said. As the moonlight shone and illuminated their faces, both their hearts beated in the silence, Love makes life beautiful.
Edited by chandmeinchupi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey everyone... hope you like this update please do read and comment.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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U know ur ff is one of the main reasons that i constantly go on india forums otherwise i have been on this forum for years but have not been very active. I get so excited to read ur ff. And ur so quick at updating, we all love u for it!!!
Coming to the update, i cant get over these 2, they are just so adorable ❤️ aww he got her name tattooed. 😳 love it!!! Thanks again for the quick update and looking forward to next one xxx
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: nawshi

U know ur ff is one of the main reasons that i constantly go on india forums otherwise i have been on this forum for years but have not been very active. I get so excited to read ur ff. And ur so quick at updating, we all love u for it!!!

Coming to the update, i cant get over these 2, they are just so adorable ❤️ aww he got her name tattooed. 😳 love it!!! Thanks again for the quick update and looking forward to next one xxx


U wouldn't believe it but writing is not really my plus point. Even in school my English was quite weak compared to my other subjects. But here I am seeing all you people comment on my. FF and my heart wells up. I have never received so much appreciation. Thank you so much. Yes I try to do quick updated whenever possible as there will be days when I am in my grandmas house and I won't be able to update as often due to the network isssues. I am trying my best to keep the story with a lot of feel and give justice to their characters. Please keep reading and keep commenting.

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