Shivika 2S- Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar // Page 7 (22/03/2017) // Completed

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#51

That was nice
Both are hurt and showed their vulnerability to each other
Yet in the end they are meant to be

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Wow Shan'e this was damn Intense...

With the song and their hearts turmoil nd overflowing emotions.

Beautifully written. Amazing.👏

Dont know how u write stuffs like this.

Brilliant dear.

It was painful... loved the ending..."I'm home."

Their eyes spoke volumes.

It was heart touching.

Well this was for part one.

Love Sharmi.

Edited by lucky_princess - 8 years ago

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Aah! It was a bliss reading this.

What a variations of emotions... Beautifully portrayed in every angle.. .every perspective.

Both of them expressing nd exposing their vulnerability in front of each other was the best. The way she was afraid to be hurt once again...scared to let him rule her heart... but she failed... nd he failed too... cuz it was love.

I loved Shivaay more here cuz he faced his fears and finally confessed. His confessions was honest and beautiful.

That was brilliantly written!!👏

Nd that unexpected kiss was needed there... 😳. Their submission to each other was absolutely beautiful.

I loved this... nd finally Anika confessing her love was nd a kiss in the rain to top it all.😳😳.

Once again happy bday Harshu...

Shan'e u r awesome... u r getting all the more amazing. Keep the coming dear.

Love Sharmi.

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

What a wonderful conclusion to a beautiful story. Loved it!

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Khidki

@Khidki

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

I don't know from where to start from and where to end to appreciate this..!!

I am at a loss of words..!!

This was Beyond Beautiful..!!

I totally agree that there are these few songs that can totally make you do almost anything..!!

The first song, gives me goose bumps every time I listen to it.. And tge second is also one of those songs which takes you to all different world..!!

And your story took me to a different world and it was beautiful, could so feel it..!!

Awesome..! :)

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

loved it, so emotional and heartwarming

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jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Read both the parts...

Super emotional...

And. So raw feelings... It broke my heart to see both shivaay and ani like this...

But in end both confessed...

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AhanaO9

@AhanaO9

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Whoo!!! I can't help but sigh at the end of this one... and getting me to do that is rather hard, even though i do say so myself...😆 😉😛 But seriously... this was amazing... 👏

Edited by AhanaO9 - 8 years ago