Shivika 2S- Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar // Page 7 (22/03/2017) // Completed

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Awesome update...I loved this story...while reading this i felt like I am melting in the rain...anika's emotions were well portrayed and the way shivaay said his real feelings are amazing...these two are unique...

Once side Annika is running away in fear of getting hurt

Other side shivaay doesn't know how to express his feelings and how to look beyond his beliefs...when he decided to confess anika is not listening...

I loved the way shivaay explain his thoughts about her

Its a mind blowing update

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KashiTessa

@KashiTessa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

There are no words to describe this.
You are an inborn writer that too well great potential.
Coming to 2S I loved it.
Shivikas emotions were beautifully portrayed. Their raw craving for each other, fears, insecurities every Damn thing was so beautifully expressed. 👏 😊
Waiting for your other such works!

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LilyJames0194

@LilyJames0194

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Hi MorningStar! This was incredible! I reread it again because I didn't want it to be over. Anika and Shivaay both are the storms as well as the soothing rain in each other's lives.

If you have a PM List for your next OS', do count me in!

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Rida Sadaqat

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Oh my god.. that was beautiful 😳 I am glad I received your PM..
it was a totally emotional rollercoaster and I loved Shivaay's bare confession and Anika's honest fears..whenever it came to them.. ❤️
It was just Awww.. 😳 in Shivika's language...
I hope something like this happens in the show too..where Shivika accept that they aren't just each other's power but weaknesses too..
Beautiful post... 🤗

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rani-lucki

@rani-lucki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

that was so beautifl

i really wish anika n shivay have a rain sequence one day

thank you dear

:-)

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bworm

@bworm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

This was so beautiful. You got me all choked up and teary.

👏

Thanks for the pm

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

My friend...🤗

Iam speechless after reading this...

Words are not enough to describe the beauty of this...

I can sense the rain...how beautifully portrayed the feelings and emotions of shivika...

You are a blessed writer ...

The thoughts of Anika it was a conflict between heart and mind...she was unconsciously accepted it...she was madly loves him.

But her concious mind was still struggling...naam,khoon,khandan,Zimmedari...shivaay's words were still disturbing her.Today he started to open his mind...Anika was trying to avoid this...Her internal fears were stoping her.Her love is selfless...she is ready to sacrifice her happiness for him.she only wishes for his happiness...when she realised her feelings she always feared about the sepration between them.It will shatter her into pieces.but his happiness only matters for her.

She hide her feelings...tried to ran away from him.but he always made it tough for her...

But Shivaay he was also trying to avoid this feeling...but atlast his heart won the battle.Anika broke the invisible walls in Shivaay's heart...she changed him...

The love confession was unique one...

Edited by Sakkiyah - 8 years ago