RiKara OS:Dude & Beauty Series:The Beauty & The Admirer

Wow

aww lovely second part loved 😊 it

Finally you answered it. The best line was though of Gauri's father finally agreeing that he would have married his daughter to him!

Finally got to read the Rikara version :D You already know how much I loved this xD It was so beautiful. Om is such a darling. His conversations with his future father-in-law in the bar were too good. Loved how Om cares for Gauri. Reading both of their perspectives just made the story even more amazing. Really loved how he could get easily whatever was in her mind.

I didn't think it was possible, but you made me fall for your Om even more than I already had with Gauri's perspective of things.

Aah brilliant! Although I was waiting for Gauri to find out that O and her dad know each other would've loved to read her reaction on her dad drinking no but really you truly are a splendid writer, I fell in love with both perspectives it amazing how you did it

I fall in love with this story whenever I read it. ❤️

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Wow

Awesome OS

All the questions that were left unanswered

In the previous OS

Were answered here
thanks dear😛...

How Omkara fall in love with Gauri

How Omkara & Rakesh know eachother

Well the world is small

Rakesh never thought om will ever meet his wife & daughter

Indirectly he supported their love story
yes... imagine his shock... he was giving tips to this boy in a pub to woo his daughter😆

Now after reading both of their perspectives

It feels so complete

How both could understand the other

Without even saying anything

I just loved it

thanks dear😛

Originally posted by: ...Dexterity...

Beautifully penned :)

thank you😛

Originally posted by: maivelli

aww lovely second part loved 😊 it

thank you dear😃

Originally posted by: Rumadiv

Dear Kuku, hey divya😛

I can't tell you how much happiee wen i started to read the story. Written in starting dedicating to Rumadiv. I was shocked surprised and still not able to believe its for me. I cant express how much happiee am felling right now 😊 ❤️. Even i my wild imagination i din think you ll dedicate to me. Am feeling proud and honoured. You are the first one to dedicate to me.
you are the first friend i made in this forum... you were the first one to ask me my name.. this dedication was long overdue😳

Then to the story i loved Om pov of more than Ri's. They say mostly love starts with fight but here with hurting of ego. Ha ha ha nice one. Om is surprised that Ri sees him has he never existed in this world which as made Om to look into her more. Its nice to read in Om's pov. Mostly surprisingly the friend was Ri's father who had already approved him if his daughter would get a guy like him tats y wen Om came to meet Ri's parents. Ri's father instantly agreed for the marriage.
there had to be a strong reason for a guy like Om who forgets every girl's name, to get affected by her.. and like how Rudy adviced Om (from Kal Ho Na Ho) ignore a girl to get her to notice you, same thing happened with Om😆😆😆... yeah, Gauri's dad knew, what Gauri meant to Om

Then the scene between Om Ri and their son was beautifully expressed.Om is obsessed with a girl child but blessed with a baby boy. But it was more happiee wen his saw him a few seconds and closed his eye's.
yeah, he fell in love😳

Hope you write all your stories in Om and Ri's view. More than other character i like reading it in Om n Ri's view. Am obessed with them and with your story writing also.
awww that is so sweet dear.. i am posting those stories which i feel would suit RiKara and the ones someone asked me to post here... a Cinderella one is coming😆
With love, love ya too😛
Divya.

P.S : If u are in front of me i would have given you big bear hug. Love you 😊 😉 awww that is so sweet yaar.. thank you🤗

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid

Awesome update...❤️

thank you so much😃