RiKara OS:Dude & Beauty Series:The Beauty & The Admirer - Page 2

Originally posted by: lovesick23

Finally you answered it. The best line was though of Gauri's father finally agreeing that he would have married his daughter to him!

thank you dear.. he had to, seeing how much Om loved Gauri😛

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome Loved it yar

thank you dear😛

Originally posted by: Naina280599

Finally got to read the Rikara version :D You already know how much I loved this xD It was so beautiful. Om is such a darling. His conversations with his future father-in-law in the bar were too good. Loved how Om cares for Gauri. Reading both of their perspectives just made the story even more amazing. Really loved how he could get easily whatever was in her mind.
thank you so much dear.. so glad u read this version and loved it as much... thanks a lot... yeah, i loved writing Om and his FIL scenes, coz i was thinking, 'you have no idea, who you are talking to'😆

You've written both of their perspectives in such a beautiful way. Already hooked to any stories you post in future too xD You're an awesome writer, indeed. thank you so very much dear...

Much love 🤗 love ya too🤗

Originally posted by: varshajoshi17

Superb os di

Loved it

thank you so much dear😃

Originally posted by: writergenie17

I didn't think it was possible, but you made me fall for your Om even more than I already had with Gauri's perspective of things. awww that is so sweet yaar😳😳

Even with The Dude and the Ordinary Girl, I was enchanted with Omkara and his layers. He was a chill dude, a good friend, a college heartthrob, a guy with a strong sense of responsibility. And of there was his adorable love for Gauri. ohmigod! u make him sound so dreamy❤️

But here, we get to see things from his perspective and lemme tell you, you just made me love him so much more. The sort of unapologetic self-centeredness in the beginning, (hahahaha that is so cute and endearing)melting down to overarching concern for Gauri's opinions, and care for her even above himself, is just too perfect to not fall in love with. the way you describe my version of Om... is much better than, how i cud ever explain... thanks dear.. actually made me proud of my creation🤗

You make magic with words my friend... and I am a huge fan! that is so sweet yaar.. thanks a lot

Thanks for sharing! thank you so much for reading and commenting dear😛

Can't wait to read more... will try to post more soon😛

Originally posted by: lizzy110

Aah brilliant! Although I was waiting for Gauri to find out that O and her dad know each other would've loved to read her reaction on her dad drinking no but really you truly are a splendid writer, I fell in love with both perspectives it amazing how you did it

thank you so much dear.. so glad u enjoyed reading it... unfortunately, Gauri will never find out how O know her father, coz O promised him that he would never tell his daughter that he drinks.. and O loves to keep G guessing😆

Originally posted by: .Tanmaya.

Amazing OS

thank you😛

Originally posted by: YasmiNaaz

I fall in love with this story whenever I read it. ❤️

that is so kind dear... thank you so much😛

Originally posted by: perfictionist

beautiful! 👏

thank you😛

Originally posted by: DeewaniMastaani

Loved it!

thank you😛

Awesome os!!

I am so glad you expanded on Omkara's perspective.
Such a sweet, innocent love story!!!
I love both the stories and that is why I have read this story 20 times already.
I love the characterisation of both Om and Gauri.
I have always loved cute college love stories!

I loved the line, "fell in love with someone's eyes the second time". Thanks for the awesome OS!

Love,
Poroma (your true fan!!! 😛 )

Originally posted by: arshifansiri

Awesome os!!

Loved it.

Enjoyed reading this.

thank you so much dear.. so glad u enjoyed reading it.😛😛

Originally posted by: Poroma92

I am so glad you expanded on Omkara's perspective.
Such a sweet, innocent love story!!! thank you dear.. so glad u liked his perspective😃
I love both the stories and that is why I have read this story 20 times already. awww that is so sweet yaar
I love the characterisation of both Om and Gauri.
I have always loved cute college love stories!

so glad u like this Om and Gauri...
I loved the line, "fell in love with someone's eyes the second time". Thanks for the awesome OS!awww thanks hun... so glad u liked that line😃

Love,
Poroma (your true fan!!! 😛 ) hehehhe thank you poroma😃

this was so so beautiful penned down!!

Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-

Superb loved it so much

thank you so very much hun..

Originally posted by: DEFOM

this was so so beautiful penned down!!

one of the best i have ever read on rikara

hats off

keep writing more n more on them please :D

thank you so very much dear... i am so glad u enjoyed it so much... i hope u've read the first part where the story is from Gauri's perspective😃
will try to write more😃

Originally posted by: sb1234

Superb !!!

thank you so much dear😃

I know I've commented on this before but I had to again since I was re-reading it. The best thing you could do to any father was to ensure that his daughter would find a man who loves her more than that father. You did exactly that in this story and that is what makes it so beautiful!

Amazing story loved it so much.