My First story :Love by chance Part 10 pg 128 Oct 8

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Sabri_moon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Congratulations for ur first story..

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Sabri_moon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Nice update. Looking forward to read more.

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Ankita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

congrats for your first story

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riddhima

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

congratulations for your first

concept was very nice
keep it up
thanks for pm and accept my request

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Fantastic Chapter

Loved Ishita and Mihika's bonding that was so lovely

will be waiting for next chapter

to see what happens

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paru

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

hi sweets...
congrats for your first story
start was very nice
do countinue soon...
thanks alot for pm

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xLavenderx

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Very nice start
Loved ishmi bond
Mimi r in love
Ramannn kaha hai!!
Congratulations for ur first story

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Harshita Srivastava

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Hlw frnds..
Firstly I want to thanks all of you for giving such a awesome feedback on 1st part of this story.. Really its means a lot 😳

Teaser

Mihir reached his home after dropping mihika he entered & saw all helps are running here & there..
He don't know what's going on..

Mihir(st)- what happen all helps in so much hurry today is not any festival to kya kisi ka b'day h Omg mihir u r such fool mihika sahi kehti h tu ek number ka budhu ram h..BT kiska b'day h papa ka nhi nhi to maa ka nhii phr kiska h saying he held his hair in frustration...
Then he called his maa- maa maa where are u?

Toshi from kitchen - ha puttar bol ki kaam h..
Mihir -ap kaha ho maa?
Toshi - puttar mai kitchen mein hu tu yahi aa Jana mai bhutt busy hu saying loudly..

Mihir (st) - aisa kya bna rhi h maa Jo itna busy h..CHLO wahi dekhte h..

Mihir went to kitchen & stunned to see that his mother was preparing so many dishes..& asked ...
Mihir - maa aj kuch khaas h kya Jo itni taiyari ho rha hqki aj koi festival to h nhi or na hi kisi ka b'day h to phr ,,kya koi guest aa rhe h..

Toshi ji smiles & said - WO puttar..she was going to told him the reason of this preparation BT Mr. Bhalla called him at
Same time & mihir immediately went from there without listening her..

So that's it for teasing all of you
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Plz hit the like button & do comments also..
Thank you..