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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello guys, Myself jasmine! I guess you know me! I am trying to write an one shot for many days now, and today I really want to pen it down for you guys! Its my first ever story on Avneil, so pour your love on this!
Avni stood transfixed as she watched neil walk away without even listening to her or giving her a chance to explain! She wondered whether it was the same old Neil Khanna who always faced the truth. The same Tillu, who knew that in a battle between lies , deceptions and truth,its always the truth that wins.
At first,his silence hurt her so much,she felt as if a thousand knifes pierced through her heart because he was the only one who always took a stand for her, stood by her in times of crisis and consoled her in times of hardships, no matter what.
But even after all this, she had hope!
After all, its the hope that she had inside her, that has kept her alive, gave her strength,helped her fight for her rights, all these years. She knew, there are always bright stars that help us fight against our problems even in the darkest of days!
She knew he would come back, she knew he would clear all the misunderstandings , she knew he would support her and stand by her side as he always did. Because she trusted him and she knew, he would always be there for her. To protect, nurture and love her..
That's it for now!
I would like to hear some feedback! If I receive some good response, I will think of continuing!
Btw, My real name is mirra and my pen name is jasmine!
Anyone out there, who would like read more of my works, can check my profile out!
https://www.wattpad.com/user/balamirra2326
Thank you
~Jasmine


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very well written
Avni hoping that Neil trust her and will stand by her no matter what...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice
You should write more and longer one if possible
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awsome u should write more :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zenab78

Nice
You should write more and longer one if possible

Thanks! Just gave it a try!
Will write an other shot soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pri12

awsome u should write more :)

Thanks! I will!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nicely explained her feeling . Waiting for more OS from you

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