Poison and Wine - A Shivika Song OS

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Amazing story..love it. Very poignant.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

What to say...my words seem so inadequate to express the poignancy and the beauty your writing...of this OS. When he pulled the chain of her neck...I was scared...not sure what his next action would,,,,but I loved his Tadi...the way he removed the ring from the chain...slid it onto her finger...finally back to its rightful place...and full on commanded her to come to him...to come HOME!!!

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Gopika

@itsgops3010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

OMG.. it's beautiful... I think u should write more of this sort...

I really can see everything that you hv written..

Loved it😳

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Vaishnavi

@vaishnavi31

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..

Thank you!!😊

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Vaishnavi

@vaishnavi31

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: rainbowveins
This was so beautiful :') Everytime I see you've written a new story, you have no idea how happy I become because I just know I'll be in for an amazing read. Thankyou for writing these during such painful times in the show!

Thank you!! Thats tooo sweet of you to say❤️This comment makes me feel even more retarded now for having forgotten I had posted this OS😆

Glad you enjoyed it, always look forward to your feedback🤗

Will continue sharing more OS and more stories here on the forums😳

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moon99

@moon99

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

ALL I CAN SAY IS THAT IT WAS ABSOLURTELY BEAUTIUL!!!!!!!!!!!

I was perfect, and the level of understanding between the to left me wanting more

You have to do a part 2 ... please 😳

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

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