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_Chaverah_

@_Chaverah_

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

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2filmy

@2filmy

Trailblazer

Posted: 8 years ago

I feel his frustration and anger
He is angry on himself for swaying
He is disgusted at himself for deviating from his mission
His bruised hands depict his bruised heart

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deepa

@deeps_92

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

Lovely OS...you beautifully explained his emotions. ..what he felt whenever he sees her
He is angry that she still has power to alter his senses
Beautifully written
Ps - ur description of Advay in boxing shorts and punching the bag was too distracting to concentrate on words

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 35

Posted: 8 years ago

wow, that was such a heart wrenching One Shot.

Advay's pain, hurt and betrayal.

His attraction towards chandni was beautifully portrayed by your wonderful words.

Loved it so much.

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maryam

@Audrey.h.

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Wow candy that was really hot and intense.. Wish we get to see some sort of a scene like this in the show too! Advay boxing what could be better😳

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raji

@raji_sudha

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

Wow that is beautifully penned down .Looking forwad for your writeup.

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_Chaverah_

@_Chaverah_

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deeps_92
Lovely OS...you beautifully explained his emotions. ..what he felt whenever he sees her
He is angry that she still has power to alter his senses
Beautifully written
Ps - ur description of Advay in boxing shorts and punching the bag was too distracting to concentrate on words

@P.S:

I don't think we'd get to see Barun in nothing but boxing shirts, punching d crap out of d punching bag.

Tho, Maine apne work mein liberty le li🤣

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_Chaverah_

@_Chaverah_

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-
wow, that was such a heart wrenching One Shot.
Advay's pain, hurt and betrayal.
His attraction towards chandni was beautifully portrayed by your wonderful words.
Loved it so much.

Originally posted by: Audrey.h.
Wow candy that was really hot and intense.. Wish we get to see some sort of a scene like this in the show too! Advay boxing what could be better😳

Aww,thank you so much yaaron (:

Edited by _Chaverah_ - 8 years ago

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_Chaverah_

@_Chaverah_

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: raji_sudha
Wow that is beautifully penned down .Looking forwad for your writeup.

Why, thank you so much (:

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Pizookie

@Pizookie

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#10

Well, I started reading this OS a few hours ago but then a notification of Barun getting a haircut changed my phanki mood and got me all high excited.😆 Now that I have calmed down, I started to read again.

Coming to the OS, well, as usual love your writing and loved reading Advay's deep emotions and thoughts. I hope to see such scene in our show too how Advay channelises his thoughts for the revenge. Enjoyed reading it, Candy.

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