Fire - A ShraMan Drabble - Page 7

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

There are dialogues which are called dialogues.

And then there are dialogues which are so striking that they make you want read and reread then again so that you can completely absorb them and then memorize them to preserve what you've felt while reading them.

Lara! What have you done!

I read, I re-read, and I re-read... I'm grinning like the fool that I am!

Thank you so much 🤗

Well done on writing so many of such imapactful dialogues in this shot. 👏👏👏

Shukriya!

(I was imagining Ekta Kappor thunder bolts and three takes on those)😃

Shit! Now I'm laughing 🤣

Cause I heard those thunder bolts, I felt the wind and imagined Mandir Bells shaking...😆

Comedians have punch lines to make people laugh. But writers do have these specific type of dialogue style to shake readers to the core.

Oh my Gosh! Bas kar de! I'm going to become a puddle of mushy blushy goo!

I myself absolutely love writing this kind of dialogues, and I loved now reading these terrific ones from you. ⭐️

Thank you Lara!

Dil zit ti Lara-ki.
*hugs 🤗

Hugs back!

Lots of love,

Lara.

Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold You always say na ke my comments on your work leave you with insane happiness and motivated to write...

Your dialogues have a stronger effect on me!

I've been a huge fan of your's forever and this when it comes from you, takes my heart!

Thank you 🤗

Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold Anju! It's been so so long man!

But it's good to have you back...

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

Are sorry gali ni de ri 😭 vo emoji by mistake gya

Arey mai mazak kar rahi thi ya..

Chill😆

N loss of words well u know me...

Yes I absolutely do!

Longest comment in history😃

Yeah it's been a long while ...

Oh yes!

Ur most wlcm sweety 😳

I might not come here regularly, but will definitely visit this page whenever I'll get time 😊

And we shall wait for your return!

Originally posted by: Joyness

So well written...zoya

Originally posted by: sptrno

Damn how could I miss THIS MASTERPEICE hun!...

I wonder how😆 😉

This was so intense emotional painful yet so sooo damn beautiful I so loved it...EDKV FEELS FULL ON...

I'm glad you liked it so!

Please please write more parts for this story...please Zoya...tumhe pareshaan toh nahi karna chahthi yaar but please aise Epic stories ke liye few parts toh banti hai!

Umm.. This was a one off piece, but I'll think about it and if anything pops I'll be sure to write 🤗

Thank you.

Love,

Spandana

Originally posted by: NiMikFan

No words M speechless 👏

Originally posted by: orion23

Thanks hon!!!