Fire - A ShraMan Drabble - Page 6

Originally posted by: --Elara--

Unres

I don't know what exactly to say, I am speechless! 😳This is so well written Zoya! 🤗

Originally posted by: evaviego

@Zo. Sachi bolte hai "Assumption is the mother of all screw ups" 🤣

Hahaha yes! 😆

And yaa.. thanks for writing the translated version along with it. 😛🤣

I'm pretty helpful like that😉

Good night coz Bahut hua aaj ke liye. Need to digest all the newly learnt French words. So i need a good long sleep for that now. 😛

Hahhaha so jao so jao😳

Originally posted by: Nik03

Res 😳
****
Unres
Zoya 🤗

Nik🤗
Sowii bro for unressing sooo late...It took me much longer than I expected. 😕

Oh that's alright.. no issues😛

Coming to the upii...!!
Angsty one..now thats interesting... 😉

I know right😛

I've hated you since we met....Is it really true Shravan???...Nah!!

Obviously not😃

I didn't fall into the darkness, I was pushed into it. I didn't choose it, it chose me...Lost and Inner Shravan 😭
The one who felt cheated...by everyone whom he loved unconditionally!!

I'm simply trying to subtly make you feel terrible about your existence...Ouch!!...It hurts!!
It was meant to 😎
All you needed to do was come to me and I would have made it all work...Well in my pov, If Sumo really would have told Shravan the truth, Would Shravan have believed her??!!...No!!
As far as we know Shravan, his love, respect n trust on his father was much much more for him to believe her.
TRUST...is what they both lacked in their relationship , their love.
just my pov Zoya.Dont mind ha?..😊
Why do you think I will mind? You put forth your point of view and I respect that. But in my opinion he wouldn't have believed outright but that doesn't mean he would let go. He would have shaq and start investigating and eventually reach where he was intended to.
This Shravan is way too hurt...N you slayed in writing his anger,his pain, his frustation...Coz no one cared for him ever...no one asked him what he wants..everyone took decisions on their own without even thinking of how they would affact him...no one fought for him...just gave up on him soo easily...!!
I know right.. I feel the writers did too much wrong with him and never bothered to set it all right..
Kyunki jab andhera roshni ki bheek maangne aaye, toh apna ghar jala dena hi sahi hai....Dialogue 👏
Woah man!!...This is Zoya!!
Its your forte man...no one can beat you in this...no one!!
Aww man! Thank you so much hon!
It was a difficult path ahead, but she wouldn't let go of him ever again....Way to go girl...!!
Everyone deserves a second chance...you too!!
Yo!
You rockk Zoya... 👏
Awesome n blasting one it was...!!

Shukriya...
The thing I loved the most is its ending...❤️
You didnt left it on a sad note...didnt left Shravan alone suffering...You ended it with a hope, a POSITIVITY!! Zoya special
😳
Loved it ❤️
I'm glad you loved it so... Honest confession I was supposed to end it at Shravan's monologue.. When I was proofreading before posting I realised that's not how I'd want him to live, and then I added the last part 😃
Thanks for the pm n keep writing these awesome pieces bro... 😊

You're welcome! And sure will...
Loads n loads of Love n 🤗 🤗

Loads of it back at you 🤗
Nikka sa Nik 😛

Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold Thank you so much for the appreciation hon!

Originally posted by: bworm

My dear meant it as a compliment.

Aww yey!!

Really appreciate all the hardwork and thought that goes behind each story, whether long or short.

Thank you!

And you did not bore me...a well written story is never a boring.

Thanks bro...
Mujhe sach mai laga you got bored...

I'm so glad you didn't 😃

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

Zoya ...🤬

I'm speechless yar...

Speechless hai toh gaali kaise de rahi hai😆

I've read Ur many works but this one, girl I'm at verge of loss of words...

At a verge of 🤣 See that's what I like about you! Always at a verge but never completely at a loss of words 😉

The dialogues were 👏 bestest ( I know it should've to be best, but they were more than best)

Awww thank you!

This is a diff dark drabble for me...

I've read a few dark OS's before, but this one is so classy...

N u always chose the perfect track...

I like classy 😳

That part of edkv, I hated most of them..

I know right! It sucked!

N yeah shravu is a self-destructive man...

He'd hurt himself for anyone's deed...

N sumo, well yeah you pushed him to that he'll, so it's Ur duty to bring him back too...

It's only fair that way...

Very beautifully written Zoya ...👏

Shukriya!

N thanks a lot for all the PM's dear 😊

You're welcome anytime!

N m really sorry for extremely late replies ...

That's okay...

Love ya...😊

Originally posted by: sheeluneelu

Hello Zoya !!

I just loved it

Thnks fr writing n pm :-)