Fire - A ShraMan Drabble - Page 3

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Res
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Unres
Zo🤗
Priii🤗

I was so angry with the track . CVS could have atleast shown her feeling guilty after she killed him a zillion times

@Bold Agreed!!!!!! CVs screwed up bit time 🤔
But who cares when we have you .
Chun chun ke sabse hisab legi tu 😎
Arey! Aaise waise! Kaise kaise! Shravan ko tadpane ka badla aaisa loongi na... 😎
She's here to apologise ?
WELCOME TO HELL!!

Hahahha! Huhahahahaha!


I've hated you since we met."
Ouch! It hurts

Does it?🤣
"So that justifies you ruining mine now?"
After stabbing him then leaving him to bleed to death she has the audacity to question him ?
Unbelievable !!!

She always was... And cause CVs ruined it and its always feminism, Shravan was branded wrong in the end Logic?

She thinks he's trying to get back at her ?
Well he be like

I so wish Shravan was like Damon! Apna kaam banta, bhaad mai jaye janta😎
You are falling each day
Really Sumo ??
Sumo se pyaar karne ke liye, uske level ka hona chahiye na! Jitni woh giri hui thi, he had to fall to her level. Try kia bechara par kabhi woh level tak reach hua nahi 😆

F**k you and your eyebrows
"I didn't fall into the darkness...I am death itself.

For Dialogues

LMAO! ROFL! Where do you get all this from 🤣

" I won't answer that, I will show you, each day. ...I will be your worst nightmare, I promise.
That was harsh but she deserved it after all she had put him through .
She deserved much more. Feeling guilty for her deeds topped the list!
Kyunki jab andhera roshni ki bheek maangne aaye, toh apna ghar jala dena hi sahi hai.."

Rudra Pratap Ranawattt! Hwat! ☺️

Mai kya hi bolun . Mere ghise pite comments aur gifs se tu bhi bore ho gayi hogi .
Never! Tujhse kyun bore hongi mai pagal!
All I can say tu apne naam ke according hai..Kisi bhi cheez me jaan daal sakti

Oh! Whoa! Wow! Thank you Priii!!!! 🤗
Best compliment ever! Tu aur Resh competition kar rahe ho kya? Kaun Zoya ko speechless karega❤️

You gave life to these fictional characters .

Heyye Shukriya!
No one ...I repeat no one can do that .

Dil le yaar!
I love you yar 🤗 ...You know that ?
Of course I do.. And I love you more... You know that?
PS.- I just realised I made it a reaction post

I love reaction posts! Do this often 😉

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

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Zoyi 🤗

Resh 🤗

Meri jaan this is one of the best angsty pieces I have read 🤗

Aww man! Thank you❤️

Brilliant 👏 Each word hold so much more meaning to it. Fabulous 👏

Shukriya!

She should have been happy that he didn't take it to heart and hurt himself but something stabbed her, why didn't he get affected? Why did something feel off?

They pretty much are!

"I've hated you since we met."

She should get this by now 😕

We just established she's dumb...😆

"I didn't fall into the darkness, I was pushed into it. I didn't choose it, it chose me. There in the depths I rose like a phoenix. I became something you cannot imagine. I am dark. I am despair. I am death itself. I am."

God this is 👏

Yeyyy!

Now as drop dead gorgeous as I may be, I'm certainly not a vampire

Certainly no less😳😳😳

Never 😎

I'm simply trying to subtly make you feel terrible about your existence."

She should be ashamed too 😵

Hell yeh!!!!

But I had forgotten it's the fire within me that kept me alive, peace is not what I wish for. It's pain that I want. And pain it is that I will give. Hell hath no fury..."

😭

"Kyunki jab andhera roshni ki bheek maangne aaye, toh apna ghar jala dena hi sahi hai.."

God! Where do u get this lines from? Which part of ur brain is it? Tell me tell me 👏

Mujhe honestly pata nahi... bas likhne baitho toh dimag mai aa jata...

"Tum poochti ho kyun? Qaatil pooch raha hai ki qatal kyun hua?"

Did he

Suman's earlier resolve was now rock solid

Cause you hate her🤣

This is just fabulous Zoyi.

Thank you!

Loved it ❤️

I'm glad you did!

And love u 🤗

I love you more!

P.S.- Forgot to add 😛

The bit u wrote about death reminded me of "Death Be Not Proud" 😳

Oh man! That's one hell of a compliment!

Originally posted by: Arpi1234

I, I, I ... It's always about you isn't it? This is what sumo was actually in the show...

Haina!

Though there are so many things I didn't like about sumo but one thing which I mostly didn't like that She never thinks from Shravan's pov, she only thinks from her pov.. For her it her way or high way...

So so true ya! he honestly didn't care...

She only cared about her family not about Shravan.. Good that Shravan vented out everything.. We know Shravan won't hurt any one except himself..

Such a gem this man...
Love sumo's determination to get her best friend Shravan back. ..

Yo!
As always wonderful piece from you 👏

Thank you!

and Thanks for pm...

You're welcome😳

Originally posted by: --Amulya--

Yaar Zoyi,
Hey Amulya!

This IF's often doesn't do its job properly, its not taking my like for your writeup

Oho.. but your like is here now😛

I so wished I'd get to watch this in the show, your writings always make me both sad and happy at the same time. I just loved it.

Aww man! Thank you!
Usage of such heavy hindi dialogues, andhera roshni waala line is too good but pain inducing one.
Thank you! Yes it's pain inducing...

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Oh the angsty Shravan..how he hates her taking his name.and yet he knows that when she leaves, he would stop living. There would only be a survival till he stops breathing.

'I ve got ice in my viens,

Blood In my eyes,

Hate in my heart,

Love in my mind '

Whoa! That's deep! 👏

Loved his lash back at her though. .would go a long way in clearing her off his system, no that would be impossible, maybe fading her presence.

I know right...

'Drop dead gorgeous as he is' he says. .oh if he ever decides to demand a payback. .he will be one hunk of a revenge😆

Oh he'd be death himself😆

She drove aimlessly for 3 hours..woman you should have been ambitious enough to fight for him in the first place😕

She's always been slow...

She will revive him someday we know..we hope.

Yes, umeed pe toh qayanat kayam hai...

Those last lines Zoya. .apna ghar jala dena wala part..clapped when I read them.

Oh did like really😆

Lol..I have kept you on a pedestal so high..you would suffer a heart stroke if you as much as take a glance down😆😆

Well then I won't look down, waise bhi mujhe height se thoda darr lagta hai😉

Too good⭐️

Thank you!

Originally posted by: evaviego

Bonjour Zoya.🤗

Bonsoir Eva 🤗

Comment allez-vous?😉

Ca va bien, merci. It vous?

Surprise...!!! 😛 Socha aaj kuch hatke karte hai. I don't wanna be the last one this time. 😆

Je suis tres surpris mai tres heureux aussi! Assez francais pour l'instant...😃

I don't really like drabbles. I love longgg updates. 😳

Hahaha aaisa hai?

The picture itself is very angsty. 😆

I know right...

Ms. Suman Tiwari. My mouth fell open in the first dialogue itself.😲

Phir baad mai poora update read karke jaw must have hit the floor😆

"I've hated you since we met." uh oh.

"I didn't fall into the darkness, I was pushed into it. I didn't choose it, it chose me. There in the depths I rose like a phoenix. I became something you cannot imagine. I am dark. I am despair. I am death itself. I am." Mind-blowingly beautiful...!!! 👏

Thank you ya!

I won't take you back cause you gave me up at the hint of a problem, when a problem genuinely does arise tomorrow, you would flee leaving me to fend for myself. I know the feeling.😕

I will put you guys in hell, pull you back out only to push you harder into the fire. Man he is scary AF.😲

Imagine Namik portraying this on screen! Aag sirf TV ko nahi lagti, sab jal jaata😎

"he was a raging inferno but that didn't mean he'd ruin her to bits." This is the reason we all love him so much. No matter how pathetic and disgusting he may sound. deep down he is just the most lovable person ever. 😳

Heart of gold this guy had...

She didn't give him promises or assurances, but his heart knew her's had chosen him.

I am Glad she returned.

Makes two...

Dialogues ke toh kya kehne. Felt goosebumps while reading.👏

Thank you so much!

They say when we are pushed to our limits and torn open we recover and grow stronger than we were before. May they be each other's strength and grow in love as no one ever has.

Absolutely ya... So well put...

Too dramatic? I know.😆 Got a bit carried away. Sab Resh Chechi ki sangat ka asar hai.😛

Hahaha not at all... Well put😳

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Shravan's outburst is natural when everybody back stabbed him he might react like this how he reacted now...but hurting himself that only can be done by Shravan, but Suman understood she was reason behind all this. She was responsible for his current status...& she is only cure for his wound..
Yup😛
Nice Drabble Zoya.. & Thanks for PM
Thank you so much! You're welcome!
Vinu

Originally posted by: Vishakha2092

Zoya bro!!!... I have no words...Sacchi me...The piece blew my mind away...Hats off...