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CHAPTER 15




Before shot,Other side


Abdul, Salima, choti and Mir enter in party hall .Dadi wait for her children.

( abdul told salima about everything to dadi but jo don't know dadi and zoya r jalal family members even dadi also don't know salima and choti r jo family members )

Dadi look at four: Abdul, Mir u came beta , iam not search bride for u, so yourself searched for ur bride with teasing tone

Abdul and Salima blushed for Dadi comment and Mir and choti shocked for Dadi comment.

Abdul: Dont tease me Dadi, i already told to u, i love with Salima

Mir look at choti: She is not my love and In my dreams also I never think like that

Choti: Ha , dadi I don't want like monkey for my love with chuckled face

Dadi smiled both fighting.

Dadi: Both stop.i want bless my babus first

Mir: Dadiii with shouting voice.

Dadi close her ears with her fingers: Ok Salima bahu

Dadi blessed both Salima and choti.

Dadi mindvoice: Where is my badi bahu till now she not come I think she struck in traffic jam.i want introduce my bahu everyone but she not come

Abdul: Dadi lets go inside .in few minutes moon also arrived lets start pooja

Mir: Dadi Shona not come with u

Dadi: U know very well, she not come with sad voice

Abdul: Dadi lets start pooja and Salima stay away food its eight wonder.she saw any food now she will break her fast without complete any ritual with teasing look at Salima

Salima glared to Abdul and Abdul gulped his saliva

Dadi: Dont tease my bahu.if u tease her, I will beat u with warning tone.

Mir: Dadi iam also hungry with puppy face

Dadi: U also fasting with shocked face

Mir nods puppy face : Iam fasting for my future love.idont know where is my love.with dreaming face

Dadi look at choti: She is here na

Mir: Kya with confusing face

Dadi: Lets go start pooja.

Everyone finished poja and moon arrived

Salima : Dadi moon arrived with excited voice.

Dadi: Ha beta start ur ritual.

Salima and Abdul infront each other and Mir and choti separate each other doing ritual.

Choti finished her ritual but not break her fast & looking Abdul and Salima breaking fast

Both are feeding each other to laddu

Mir come stand with choti.if u want laddu I will u give u why u starring my SB laddu yaar

Choti: U... (not finished yet Mir put laddo in choti mouth.Mir run to save his life).

Choti : Iam not leave u idiot and pickup more laddo in her hand and run behind Mir.

Mir runs fast and choti unknownly hit her foot in pillars

Choti: Haaa..sit down look at her foot

Mir come near her: What happen Jhansi rani.

Choti: My foot hurt with painful voice

Mir checked her foot and helped to her standing.

Choti: Ouch.it is paining

Mir lift choti in his arms

Choti: Hey duffer what are doing put me down

Mir: Chup iam helping ,both are eyes meet.both are searching something in each other eyes

Dadi gave fake Cough

Both come out dream land but Mir not put down her in ground

Dadi: What happening yaar with teasing tone

Mir:Dadi , don't think wrong way, Oh..she foot hurt that only I help her.

Salima: Kya what happened baby ,u hurt so much with worried tone

Choti: No didi iam alright

Mir: SB, u said really baby to her.but she so heavy .i think now my arms both are broken with teasing tone

Choti: First put me down with angry face and Mir put her down to ground and choti pinch his arms hardly.

Mir Shout: Haaa

Choti put four ladoo in Mir mouth.

Mir munching laddo: Tum

Choti : Tit for tat with smirked face

Both unknowlingly break their fast.

Dadi: U all r hungry ,lets have ur dinner and went out

Choti: But angel not come with worried voice

Abdul:ha...she already call me.she struck to traffic jam and said to me break ur fast

Choti: I will waiting for her,aj

Abdul: If u not eat , Salima also not eat anything and come lets go dinner outside .ur my lovely saaliji.u not denied ur jiju wish right

Choti nod her head: Ok jiju with half heartly.

All r went for dinner .

Other side Zoya sitting in lonely place ( same place both Asad and zoya celebrated fasting in previous year)

Zoya reminding love moments and chatting with Asad in tear eyes

Man: what are doing here with harsh tone

Zoya look at man: mind ur business.leave me alone with attitude face.

Man: u stay alone ,this is not good for u with harsh tone.

Zoya standing and grabbed his collar : what do want mr Asad Ahmed khan, u already snatched my happiness and now u worried about me said Zoya faints in his arms

Asad tapped her cheeks: shona wake up dear, plz wake up yaar.carefully put down in ground and bring water in his car and splashed water to her face .

Zoya come to conscious: water

Asad offered water to her and shona drink slowly then come out free from in his arms.

Zoya: tell me why u worried about me, u only break up with me

Asad: just shut up Miss Mohammed,go to home now.

Zoya:miss Mohammed two seconds before only u told shona wake up dear and plz wake up yaar with lovely voice now miss Mohammed with harsh tone, wow super acting mr Ahmed with taunting tone

Asad slient with angry face

Zoya search something in her bag.

Asad: iam not worry about u with angry face.

Zoya: plz open ur mouth and then I accept ur not worried about me.

Asad: u become mad

Zoya: ha I mad with u and u open or not , now I am understoodd , oh great mr Ahmed khan scared with infront miss Mohammed so funny yaar.

Asad:iam not scared u and also ur bhai and open his mouth

Zoya put sweets to his mouth in fraction of seconds and said thanks for break my fast and kiss his cheeks , bye dear , see u later and went out quickly.

Asad smiled her childish acting and carries his cheeks said: I love my pagal shona

Other side Akdha pairs

Jalal: Jodha u like this chain

Jodha nod her head and plz break my fast iam hungry

Jalal bring water pot give to her at time saw one man point Jodha head through gun .man triggerd gun and Jalal push Jodha to ground,the bullet hit to Jalal shoulder.

Jodha hears bullet shot and saw bullet hit on his shoulder.

Jodha come to Jalal side and bring his head in her lap: Jalal ..wake up and her hand close to his wound ( bullet shot) place.

Jalal open eyes slowly: Jo. .i love u , he went to uncnsious state.

Jodha: I love u too Jalal plz don't go away from me, anyone help me with heavy voice

Jodha shout help, save my Jalal.

Bodyguard hears bullet sound and come to place.

Bodyguard: mam what happended to sir

Jodha: help me bring him to hospital

Bodyguard pick up Jalal in his arms and placed in car back seat, Jodha placed jalal in her lap & went to near hospital and admitted icu to Jalal and Jodha waiting outside for saw her life ,her soul in danger at ICU

Doctor: mam, mr Mohammed in danger, if we not remove bullet in his shoulder immediately otherwise he will die

Jodha grabbed doctor collar: don't say once again that word in ur mouth, doctor and save my Jalal otherwise I don't know what do with u and ur hospital with angry voice.

Bodyguard remove her hand from doctor collar : mam plz come down, nothing happened to sir ,plz doctor start operation now.operation starts and Jodha waiting for her love even not she got single drop tears in both her eyes, she not cried but she have pain in her heart.

Other side everyone enjoyed dinner.

Abdul phone ring and pickup phone and come to lonely place.

Abdul: this time u call me what happened with worried tone

Man: Jalal shot

Abdul: what, when will happened with stammering voice

Man:just now bodyguard call me and informed Jalal shot and operation starts to Jalal in xyz hospital.

Abdul: Jalal alright?

Man: I don't know yaar.

Abdul: Asad, u did anything to him or anyone tried shot to Jalal

Asad: I don't know whose shot to Jalal.u go to hospital and give me Jalal health detail

Abdul: iam going now and I call u later.

Abdul went to others and said to Mir: go to Dadi car and drop girls in apartment.

Choti: jiju Jodha di not come

Abdul: u and Salima go to ur apartment and Mir drop both of u.she went to Jalal,don't worry about her

Choti: ok, if she will call u then said to her call me.

Abdul went out place and Mir dropped girls to apartment then Mir and Dadi went to mansion

Doctor come out of operation thearte and Jodha stand up ,went to near doctor with hopeful face.

Doctor: mam nothing to worry he is safe now and after few hours he wake up and u go to see him in ward.

Jodha: thanks doctor, u save my life.iam sry i talked harshly with u

Doctor: its ok mam ,I understand ur feeling,went to his cabin.

Jodha went to Jalal room and kiss his forehead , sit chair near to bed, one hand held his hand and other hand carrying his hairs and starring to him

Abdul reached hospital and see Jalal in bed ,Jodha sitting next to him,Abdul went to doctor cabin.

Abdul: doctor, how is he now

Doctor: he is safe ,time god,that bullet not deep in his shoulder so don't worry, his shoulder only hurts ,if he take rest fully ,it becomes alright.

Abdul: thank u doctor

Abdul call to Asad

Asad : u reached hospital Abdul, how is he now

Abdul: he is alright and Jodha with him

Asad: kya ,Jodha with him what happened to her with worried tone

Abdul: nothing to her, how u know Jodha with doubting face.

Asad: ha ,I know every moments of Jalal ,bodyguard told me with little heastiate face

Abdul: ok and cut the call

Abdul don't want disturb to Jodha so he wait outside and slept in chair.

Early morning 5' clock Jalal open eyes slowly and Jodha starring to him.

Jalal: why iam here, who are u , why u held my hand with confused face

Jodha removes her hand and light slap to his cheeks and Jalal left hand touched his cheeks said Jo with puppy face

Jodha :ha ur Jo, why u did with me ,tears rolled flowing in her eyes , last night reserved tears come out this time ,if u not push me that bullet hurt me only, in ur sake that bullets hurts ur shoulder and ask me who am I , now I told what relation with u,iam madly love with u.iam pagal.iam pagal...kneel down into ground cries vigrously

Jalal: stop cry Jo , iam not see ur tears Jalal tried get up bed ,haaa ...his shoulder hurts

Jodha get up and carefully helped him to sit in bed .

Jodha: why u tried get up to bed, u hurts urself but I have pain. Plz did not it once again Jalal ,I cannot alive without u.her head placed in his bare chest and cried

Jalal: Jo , look at me

Jodha look at Jalal face with crying face

Jalal: my crying baby stop ur crying ,u r not good in crying face with teasing tone

Jodha: chup bilkul chup, I go to call doctor

Jalal: no u stay with me, idont want doctor, I want only u and give me water first

Jodha put glass to Jalal mouth but Jalal not open his mouth and Jodha raised her eyebrows and Jalal get glass in her hand

Jalal: first drink , iam not break ur fast till now,i know u not have anything yesterday

Jodha sip water said: I will bring juice for u,

Jalal: u give ur water that enough for me

Jodha: but I already I have sipped that water, how will u drink that water

Jalal: I want ur water only else iam not break my fast with cute anger

Jodha smiled his cute anger: offered to water and Jalal drink

Jalal: Jo ur water so sweet like ur name ,stay with me Jo and hug her

Jodha blushed: I always with u Jalal but u need doctor now and removes from hug ,went out

Jodha come with doctor and doctor checks Jalal

Doctor: how is feeling now mr Mohammed

Jalal: iam alright doctor

Jodha glared to Jalal: no doctor he is pain in his shoulder, give any tablet reduce to his pain

Doctor: ok mam I give injection to him and then pain will be reduce

Doctor injected Jalal , Jalal shout ouch, Jodha come to Jalal and rub his injected spot

Jodha: it is paining with worried face

Jalal starring to Jodha and doctor starring both of them

Doctor: mr Mohammed, really ur luck person, she not tolerate ur little bit pain with smiling face.

Jalal : I know doctor,she is my angel

Jodha: doctor iam sry once again I badly behaved with u yesterday.

Jalal: Jo why u asking sry to doctor

Doctor: I tell u mr Mohammed and doctor narrates everything yesterday night incident and left out

Jalal thought: why Jo u love me so much

Jodha : why u starring me

Jalal: my wife is beautiful that sake only I cannot remove my eyes from her

Jodha blushed his comment and u need rest , sleep Jalal

Jalal : iam not sleep , u come sleep with me

Jodha: how can I sleep with u, u already ur shoulder hurts

Jalal: ha, my right shoulder only hurts and u sleep with my left arms.open left his arms gestured to come

Jodha unwillingly come to Jalal arms ,Jalal hand protectively to Jodha waist and Jodha head to Jalal chest.both are slept.

After some time middle age nurse come Jalal room and saw that both are sleeping peacefully

Nurse: both are made for each other, hey bhagwan plz keep save masti Jodi & evily thing away from them and went out

Morning 8 clock

Abdul sleep ouside incomfort position and some one tapped his shoulder

Abdul with closed eyes: Ram singh, donot wake up me, I need sleep.

Mir: Ram singh nahi Mir hai

Abdul opened eyes quickly and saw Dadi, Zoya, Mir infront of Abdul with anger glared eyes

Dadi: why u not told Jalal shot,itna badi hogiya tum with angry voice

Abdul: oh Dadi, iam sry but how u people know about Jalal shot with hestitate voice

Dadi: u forgot it iam ur Dadi ,Hamida banu Mohammed ,where is Jalal

Abdul pointed Jalal room and all three banged Jalal room

Jalal wakeup and hearing three of them shout and Abdul come to Jalal room now remember Jodha also in same room with Jalal but thank god Jodha went out few minutes back

Dadi: Jalal beta, u alright

Jalal look next to bed but Jodha not in his arms and scanned whole rooms she is not here.

Mir & Zoya: bhai Dadi asking u only but who are u searching

Jalal: oh.. nurse come to Jalal room

Nurse: mrs Mohammed

Jodha enter room same time and Dadi unison: yes sister

Everyone shocked their place, Jodha shocked Dadi, Mir ,Zoya all are together in Jalal room and Dadi, Zoya and Mir shocked Jodha in front of them

Nurse voice all r come out shocked world said mam mr Mohammed prescription give to Jodha and went out.

Jodha: all are together in this room with confused face

Dadi, Zoya and Mir: u r here with pointing their index finger to jodha

Jalal:don't know what happening between them

Dadi: Jodha beta, what r doing here, why nurse give u Jalal prescription

Zoya: ha di,what r doing here

Mir: Zoya, this is not ur di , this is my GB

Zoya: shut up

Jalal cough heavely and Jodha went to Jalal , give water to him

Dadi, Zoya and Mir shocked in their place,Jalal accepted girl help.

Zoya: Dadi plz pinch me I have doubt ,iam in real world or iam dreaming

Dadi: iam also same state

Abdul: Jodha is Jalal secretary, yesterday she only admitted to Jalal in hospital

Jodha: abp Jalal Dadi i means Jalal sir Dadi and shona u come with Dadi it means ur

Zoya: ur Jalal sir sister

Jalal thought: everyone already know Jo, Jo also know my family members, what happening in my life

Jalal: what happening here with confused face

Dadi come to Jodha and touch her shoulders: she is my friend , Jodha

Zoya side hugs to Jodha: she is my gudiya di. She is one save me in Chennai

Mir: bro u already know she is my GB with other side hugs to Jodha

Jodha nods her head to Jalal and Jalal smiles his family already accept Jodha in our family.

Doctor come to Jalal : everyone what r udoing here, everyone go out, he need rest. All are went out and Jodha only stay with Jalal

Outside

Dadi : iam alright told u,my choice is best, u saw how much she carrying to Jalal

Zoya and Mir: iam also told my choice is best because iam also select Jalal bhai to Jodha bhabhi

Mir:we all are selected same person to Jalal bhai but both are very comfortable with each other, how it is possible and Jalal bhai not denied Jodha bhabhi help

Zoya: di come to delhi in two weeks ago only , Jalal bhai also meet after party I thought how it is possible

Dadi: one person only know all look to Abdul

Abdul: I don't know anything Dadi and I need to call Salima about Jodha in hospital ,went quickly save his life to devil Mohammeds gang.

Dadi: leave him.he not tell anything about Jalal matter .we will find out what going between them.

Inside

Jalal: plz give me phone with pleading face

Jodha glared to Jalal: I give permission only half hours .u accept I will give ur phone otherwise iam not

Jalal: no jaan,half hours not enough for me,I will check my mails and important calls,u r my secretary ,u know very well my schedule and important meeting

Jodha: ha iam ur secretary but first iam ur wife and then ur secretary. I will rearrange all ur schedule in after next month.

Jalal: no Jo,not next month ,reschedule in after twodays

Jodha mouth open widely: kya two days after, u think u have any cold,that only iam reschedule ur work.i remind u mr Mohammed u have bullet shot yesterday with moist eyes

Jalal: Jo, ok reschedule to after next week

Jodha nods her head negatively

Jalal: ok fine ,reschedule to after two weeks and not more plz...ur my darling,my Jo ,my sweetheart.

Jodha give to his phone: I will think about reschedule meeting with fake angry and wentout to join others.

Jalal checked yesterday missed call and one unknown voice message and open message

A male voice laughed evily

How r u Akbar , u think that my bullet missed to ur ladylove. U think u saved ur ladylove with me.ha Akbar iam not see her face but she has sexy structure in saree itself.if she wears modern dress she become more ok ,i will deal with her later.i thought she passing cloud for u.but u saved her from my bullet even not consider single sec that bullet hurts u.i understood how much u love that sexy girl.now I will target only her. l want to see ur fear face Akbar .fear face Akbar...laughed evily. I will back Akbar

Jalal anger raised hears his every word and body stiffned ,blood boiled in his anger and his eyes become red.

Jalal selfthought: u want touch my Jo first u face Akbar ,Akbar never fear anyone and Jo not safe stay in apartment. Today itself she stay with Mohammed mansion only,she stay with me ,infront of me.

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CHAPTER 16


Hospital

Jalal: Abdul, find out voice message came from which number

Abdul: I already told our bodyguard but number id proof everything fake and number also dead.why u not said to everyone Jodha is ur wife

Jalal: Abdul, u not understand Jodha is danger in sake of me.if anything happened to her.i can't live.if I said to everyone about me and Jo married,Jodha will be more danger and I already informed her don't revealed our marriage.

Abdul: Whose try to harm u.i know we have more no of business enemies.but he have more guts send voice message to u

Jalal: I don't think, he is business enemy.i thought he is personal revenge with me.he want to see fear in my eyes.ok Abdul we take about later in our house, i need discharge today itself and now on Jodha stay Mansion only

Abdul: but Dadi

Dadi enter the Jalal room with Jodha

Dadi: What dadi ,Abdul with questioning face

Abdul: Oh Dadi

Jalal: Dadi, today onwards Jodha stay in mansion with straight face

Dadi: Why

Jalal: Yesterday I shot that time , Jodha stayed with me and she is one save me.so she also danger

Jodha: How can I stay with ur house with innocent face

Jalal glared to Jodha (mind): Mohammed mansion is not my house our house Jo

Jodha gulped her saliva as puppy look to Jalal

Jalal reply look I deal with u later and Jodha give pout face.

Dadi see both sign language (mind): Confirmed something something between them

Dadi: Why we arrange police protection to Jodha beta instead of stay in mansion with smirked tone

Jalal: Ha oh ..ha Dadi she is my secretary na.i need her help.

Dadi: Kya JMK/Akbar need girl help.omg I heared correct word or something else with teasing tone

Abdul giggled: Nahi Dadi u heared correct word only.

Jalal glared both of them and choti, Salima, Mir and Zoya enter Jalal room

Choti &Salima: Jiju app kaise hai

Jalal smiled: Iam alright choti and Salima

Choti: angel,jj shot yesterday night but u not call me and inform me about that incidient

Jodha: I scared choti.my mind block.i don't know what iam doing that time.my full thought only for him idont think anything .i full concentrate for him and his shot wound.in my frustration yesterday ,I scolded doctor badly.when doctor said he is safe that time only my heart beat become to normal beats.

Everyone stunned her word it not a word.it her heart.

Abdul clear throat: Choti I informed u and why angry with Jodha.she don't have her phone.

Choti slapped her head: Angel ur dress , phone and ur laptop in this bag.

Jodha get the bag and went to restroom.

Dadi: She is ur secretary right Jalal with teasing tone

Jalal not look to Dadi: Mir help Abdul to shift Jodha apartment things to mansion

Zoya: Gudiya di stay with km.thanks bhai.iam happy .

Salima face fell down: Jodha stay with mansion

Jalal: Ha Jodha and both saaliji stay with mansion

Abdul and Mir face bright selfthought: Salima/ choti stay with me

Salima side Hug to Jalal and thanks jiju

Jodha come out after change her dress

Jalal look at Jodha selfthought: In simple salwar and without make up why she so more beautiful .now she stay near me how can I control ,Jodha Ki babaji save me.

Dadi: Jalal beta girls stay in mansion outhouse not our mansion

Jalal,Abdul and Mir shout: Kya

All three look at each other and Dadi teasing look three of them and Salima, Jodha blushing and choti and Zoya smirked look

Jalal: Ok Dadi no problem with irritate tone

Dadi: Jodha beta u also need rest.go back to home .i will take care him

Jodha: Yesterday I slept in best cushion in my life look at Jalal arm

Jalal smirked: Jodha u liked that cushion so I arranged Ruqze cushion every night for u.

Jodha blushed his words.Noone understand Akodha talk.Jodha come out his thought.

Jodha: Abdul jiju and Mir u both not go to office today.and Shona u need go to college, already u exam near, this is ur final year so don't bang ur class and Dadi u also need rest otherwise I booked other bed for u with bossy tone

Everyone mouth open and their jaws touched to ground,Salima and choti giggled their reaction and Jalal shocked seeing Jodha avator and her bossy tone to his family

Jodha look at three of them: Salima and choti u both are helped apartment things to mansion outhouse with Ruqze tone and both are pout

Jodha: Jalal sir , u need rest with bossy tone

Mir : Before marriage JB bossy with us .after marriage our life will become ..with horror face

Dadi: Ha, beta but iam happy, see she bossy with us but even Jalal also in our list.how she said take rest to Jalal.Jalal also obey her order.she is one right choice to our family.

Jodha: Dadi and Mir .why u both murmuring each other with doubting face

Dadi: Nothing beta why u call Jalal to Jalal sir and choti also called him Jalal jiju , u also call Jalal to jiju with smirked. Face

Jalal with grinned teeth: Dadi she is my

Dadi: Secretary right Jalal with taunting tone

Jodha: Ha Dadi u said right , I call him JJ only in home and in office I call him Jalal sir.

Everyone look at Jodha in shocked face expect Salima so innocent

Jodha: Why everyone starring me I said true only.u have doubt I call him

Jalal nods his head negatively and Jodha smirked face to Jalal

Jodha: Stress that word: JJ take ur tablet and everyone go to ur respective work.

Everyone went out and Jalal angry glare to Jodha

Jalal: Why u call me JJ ,Jo

Jodha: Ur my JJ right

Jalal : Jodha iam not ur jiju and iam ur husband with puppy angry face

Jodha giggled look at Jalal angry face and pinch both cheeks in her hand: I love u JJ

Jalal: Jo dont said that word once again

Jodha: If I told what u did with me JJ

Nurse enter in Jalal room in little tub with full of hot water and sponge

Nurse look at Jalal bicep and dreamy look at Jalal structure

Jodha glared nurse for nurse eye drooling to her husband bicep and first Jalal hestitate nurse look and then see Jodha reaction so decided tease her

Jalal: Nurse, what is ur name.i think ur name become angel right with flirty tone

Nurse: Oh dreamy , how u find out my name is Angelina with loving voice

Jodha angry glared to Jalal and nurse.

Jalal: Oh u look beautiful I thought ur name become angel only.

Nurse: Oh dreamy, iam so lucky u said iam beautiful in ur M shaped lip

Jalal forgot one soul fuming in his every action and that valcono blast anytime

Jalal: Why u held more weight in ur hand.ur hand will be pain with flirty tone.

Nurse: I forgot everything when I see ur hot

Jodha not tolerate anymore

Jodha both hand in her hipcup: Kya hot sister with angry face.

Jalal and nurse gulped their saliva see her angry face and tone

Jalal selfthought: Jalal u cross ur limit today.great Jalal great,Akbar beat by his own wife today

Nurse: Mam..mam

Jodha: Kya mam mam with angry voice

Jalal: Jo with slow voice

Jodha glared to Jalal and Jalal shout his mouth

Nurse: Sponge bath for sir

Jodha: Iam here na.i will take care him .u put this down and get out our room

Nurse: This is my duty mam

Jodha: I saw what duty u did it .if u not go out otherwise u go out this hospital permanently

Nurse: Sry mam Iam going now and went out immediately

Jodha look shift to Jalal: What r u saying she is more beautiful so iam ugly and she picked that tub she will be pain.u shamelessly flirt to her even infront of ur wife.I thought ur lord ram but ur lord krishna

Jalal: Jo,ur my beautiful woman in the world, u tease me so I also tease u.iam not do it once again

Jodha: Kya u thought do it once again if I saw anyone girls around drooling u or u flirt with any girl.i will cut ur

Jalal hand close his private part and nod his head

Jodha: I cut ur tongue

Jalal relieved and pull Jodha to his chest: Jo u r one in my heart noone stay in that place except u .u have full right with me

Jodha tear eyes look to Jalal and Jalal felt bad for her tear eyes

Jalal: Iam sry Jo.dont cry

Jodha: If anyone try to touch ur shadow also it become hell for me .u r mine sirf mine with her nose poked to his chest in crying voice

Jalal smiled about her possessive and worried about her insecurity.

Jalal: Jo iam urs only ,After some time both slept

Next day evening

Doctor checked Jalal and give prescription , files and his tablet everything to Jodha

Doctor: Mr Mohammed u alright but don't strain urself specially ur arm and if night u have any fever.i will give u medicine u take it and it normal one dont worry about that fever.

Jalal: Ok doctor, discharged papers everything ready.

Doctor: Yes Mr Mohammed already Mr Abdul collect everything take care & went out.

Jodha: Dadi call me she arranged pooja for u in mansion.so we need go now.

Jalal: Why Dadi not understand .iam not trust that thing

Jodha: But I trust it.if Dadi do anything it is good for u Jalal,today donot against Dadi word Jalal plz..

Jalal: Ok

Mohammed mansion

Dadi arrange pooja for Jalal and every servant do pooja work. Dadi standing in mansion entrance and check flower arrangements

Dadi: Chammpaa where r u

Chammpaa is servant of km and lady love of Ram singh.she have bad habit.if she hear " be careful" word if anything in her hand put down to ground and also forgot everything quickly.

Chaampaa come to Dadi with one hand bowl of water and other hand bowl of vermilion powder.

Dadi said to other servant be careful to flower arrangements

Chammpaa put down both bowl in ground at mansion entrance.

Dadi: Chaampaa why u did it, see u make vermilion liquid.

Chammpaa: Sry Dadi maa I cleaned soon

Dadi: Go arrange rice pot to pooja and said anyone clean this place.

Chammpaa nod her head and went inside and Dadi also went inside.

Chammpaa come to see Dadi maa with rice pot.Dadi already went inside.and look down vermilion water.

Chammpaa: Chaampaa u forgot to clean this place.and put down rice pot in Mansion entrance , went to get the cloth.

Jalal car arrived to km.

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Jodha: Jalal we need go to our house but driver drove to Delhi exhibition palace.u need rest Jalal and then we go to roaming why u said driver to this place with innocent & baby anger face.

Jalal chucked her thought: Jo this is not exhibition palace.this is our Mohammed mansion

Jodha: Kya this is ur home

Jalal nod his head and Jodha relaxed ,this is not his home.

Jalal: Our home

Jodha face to horror: My home

Jalal nod his head : U r one the queen ofthe house and I am ur slave

Jodha nods her head: No Jalal ur my god to me.iam ur sla. Jalal finger touched to Jodha lips

Jalal: Dadi waiting outside for us.let go step down to car

Jalaleet enter to Mohammed entrance and Dadi stop but Jodha look whole mansion with gulped face

Dadi start arati to Jalal obviously Akdha both standing next to each other.and tilak to Jalal head and Jodha head

( guys sorry I don't know any ritual about muslim religion so I wrote my own ways..if u hurt insake of my writing , iam sorry yaar , forgive me..this is only fanfictions so forgot ritual , religious everything.this is my request .)

Jodha: Why dadi u put tilak to my head.

Dadi (mind): First time my bahu enter my house how can I ignore to remove evily sign from her

Dadi: Nothing beta come inside we start pooja

Jalaleet enter the house but Jodha look concertate full to mansion design, modern and richess

Jodha right toe unfortunately touched rice pot and rice fallen down to ground and right foot step dipped to vermilion water.Jodha foot print in mansion.

Everyone to pooja room and in pooja room Jodha see noone light to Diya lamp

Jodha lighted to Diya and pooja started and priest blessed Akdha .priest thought both are couples and went out.

Jodha helping Jalal settled down to hall sofa comfortably , Dadi, Mir, choti,Salima, Zoya , Abdul settled down into near Akdha.

A high pitch voice Dadimaaa ( none other our Ram singh that voice owner).

Ram singh: Dadimaaa why u did with me with angry face

Dadi: Ram singh what I did with u with confused face

Ram singh: I forgot iam only sevant of the house.

Dadi: Ram singh why u talk like that

Jodha: Ram singh bhai why u feel low thing about u

Ram singh: Madam u know me with shocked face

Jodha: Obviously I know very well u ,because I already talked with u in Phone iam ur gudiya right.

Ram singh show whole teeth: Sachi ur my gudiya baby.

Jalal rolled his eyes selfthought: Stupid Ram singh also know my Jo where and her name .in my family iam one know about Jo in last

Dadi: Ur intro section over.tell me why u angry with me

Ram singh: Dadimaa iam not talk with u and went to kitchen.

Mir: What happened to Ram singh bhai.

Ram singh come with milk plate and put down in front of Akdha table

Zoya: What is this Ram singh bhai.

Ram singh: Shona baby u don't know anything.u r baby but Dadi also forgot that ritual.

Dadi: Which ritual u talk about.

Ram singh hit his head: If new married couple enter the house.couples play this ritual.

Everyone unison : Whose is new married couple

Ram singh finger pointed to Akdha

Everyone shocked including Akdha also.

Jodha murmur to Jalal ear: Jalal how Ram singh bhai know we already married couple.

Jalal : I don't know Jo.

Mir:Ram singh bhai who told u Jalal bhai married to GB

Ram singh: I have a super brain so I found out.

Dadi: Please explain us.

Ram singh: Dadi dont talk with me.ha I explain to all of u

First outside priest told me Jalal sir wife beautiful both are made for each other.

Second gudiya baby hit rice pot in entrance and also her vermilion foot print in our house entrance way.

Third: Bahu rani only light Diya na so I confirmed both r couples.

Everyone shocked and also happy inside selfthought: How it is happened.

Zoya: But Ram singh bhai.gudiya di also not new in our house even choti and Salima bhabhi also new here.why u not thought Salima bhabi or choti to Jalal bhai wife.

Abdul and Mir glared to Zoya

Ram singh: See Shona baby both are made for each other and look both closest sit next each other I know Jalal sir never sit close to any girl expect our family members

Everyone look shift to Akdha: Yes Akdha close sit each other.Jodha move one aside to Jalal

Jalal glare to Ram singh: Ram singh go arrange my room with angry tone

Ram singh blushing: Oh ..Jalal sir

Jalal: Ram singh why u blushing

Everyone giggled Ram singh and Jalal talk.

Ram singh: I will arrange ur room to ur sughraat today with blushing face

Jalal: Sughraat

Everyone laughed loudly and Akdha both embrassed .already Jodha cheeks to red if everyone look laughing to her.

Jalal murmur to Jodha: U ready for our sughraat today.we already completed all ritual., night ritual only pending and Jalal winked to Jodha.jodha bow down with blushing face.

Dadi: Just shut up Ram singh, both r not married ,u stop ur blushing.u go arrange Jalal bed because Jalal need rest

Ram singh: Ok Dadi maa with sheepish face.

Dadi: Jalal go to rest in ur room.everyone went out respective room .Abdul helped Jalal to his room except Dadi and Jodha stay here

Dadi: Jodha beta iam sry Ram singh sake of ur embrassed today.

Jodha: Nothing like that Dadi,.i know Ram singh bhai very innocent.

Dadi: Jodha beta when I saw u first time , I want to ask this question for u.if u don't mind I ask u.

Jodha: Why u ask me permission and tell me Dadi

Dadi: If in ur home anyone have pari name .it means dead person name also with hestitate voice.

Jodha: No Dadi noone name is pari in our family.Why u asking this Dadimaa

Dadi: nothing beta lets go Jalal room

Whole Gang enter in Jalal room and Jalal settled in his bed.

Ruqz enter the Jalal room and go to hug Jalal,Jalal irriating as seeing her acting.

Ruqz fake tears : Jalal I heared ur shot.my heart beat stop.

Jalal stay away from her hug and look at his Jo and Jodha glare to Jalal.

Jalal puppy look at Jodha: Ruqz behave urself with angry glared to Ruqz

Ruqz standing next to bed: don't worry Jalal today onward I will take care of u

Jalal: no

Dadi interpet: ha Ruqz beta, today u stay with Jalal

Everyone shocked Dadi supported to Ruqz and Jodha face become pale.

Mir: shona ur doctor right,plz check Dadi,I think, she become mad.

Zoya: ha Mir bhai,see di face become pale, when Ruqz said stay with Jalal bhai tonight.

Ruqz: Jalal, Dadi also permit stay with u tonight.

Mir: Ruqz u not comfortable in bhai room even where u sleep

Ruqz: I sleep in Jalal bed

Jodha shocked shout: kya bed

Ruqz: why ur shocking and by the ways what r doing here with disgusting look

Jalal : I don't want anyone help with grinned teeth

Dadi: Jalal today only u came to hospital, u compulsary anyone stay with u.

Mir: I will stay with bhai or Abdul bhai stay with him.

Dadi angry glare to Mir: u will both go to office tomorrow.so shut ur mouth.

Dadi: everyone go out and eat ur dinner then go to ur respective room

Everyone went out and except Jodha standing starring to Jalal.

Dadi: Jodha beta, go have ur dinner and these two days ur not sleep properly.

Jodha: no Dadi,I don't want anything,iam going to my room and I need to sleep with sad face

Dadi: where u going, u go this ways also. Jalal room and ur room connected through this corriodor.and Jalal room have two door and one is front door for mansion side and back door connected to ur room in Mohammed outhouse.

Mohammed mansion and Mohammed outhouse both connected through corriodor like little bridge. , if Jalal want to lonely time.when he using same room in Jodha staying room.

Jodha: oh Dadi Jalal sir tablet and his dinner

Dadi:he already have his dinner and tablet, before few minutes u only give him don't worry about to him,Ruqz will take care him

Jodha went out with unwillingly and go to her room

Jalal: Dadi,why u allowed Ruqz stay in my room.

Dadi: Jalal u sleep and iam so tired iam going to my room.

After sometime Ruqz enter Jalal room and tried to settled next to Jalal in bed

Jalal: if u want stay in my room go to sleep in sofa otherwise go out with irriating face.

Ruqz no other ways she sleep in sofa and Jalal also slept for drugs effect

Ruqz not comfortable in sofa and wake up see Jalal sleeping and so went to her room silently and thought no one she see her but Dadi ,Mir and Zoya already standing behind curtain look at Ruqz going to her room.

Mir ans Zoya: see Dadi, u permit her stay and take care of Jalal bhai.but she went to her room.and no one help to Jalal bhai.

Dadi: she help to Jalal and pointed out Jodha enter to Jalal in back side room and why I supported to Ruqz. I what know what going between Jalal & jodha and I make Jodha to jealous with Ruqz.if Ruqz stay in Jalal room what Jodha doing I thinking but u saw her sad face.when both come to say me ,both are love each other and then jealous game continue with smirked face

Zoya: gudiya di ,affects so much because of ur jealous game.

Mir: Dadi,Jalal bhai also deserve punishment why my JB only suffer with fake angry face

Dadi smirked : so u want Jalal also jealous ok no problem next plan to Jalal and ok lets go to our room.she will take care him.all three went to their room and Jodha saw Jalal sleeping with shivering body

Jodha selfthought: chudail where she went, Jalal shivering so much and what iam doing now, doctor told if he have any fever to give tablet.

Jodha give tablet to Jalal but he is unconuisous state because of his drugs and his shivering not controlled.and cover blanket above Jalal but till now his shivering.and Jodha went inside the blanket hugs Jalal tightly.insake of Jodha heat, Jalal shivering reduce Jalal hand tightly pressed her wrist in sake of her bangles broken.and Jalal pulled Jodha to close like crushing pillow , his hand searching her bare skin. In his sleeping state here his hand enter in bare waist and pinched her and hand move to her private part .jodha eyes popped out with blushing face..she turns hugs jalal tightly . Jalal body shivering gone.he sleeping peacefully but Jodha sleep gone in sake of his act.

Jodha selfthought: in morning he thought I misbehave with him.no Jodha what do u thinking like stupid and he is ur husband and u have full right with him.i love u JJ.JJ means Jodha ki jaan not Jalal Jiju.but I love to tease u so i called to u JJ.

Jodha hugs Jalal tightly and slept.


PART END


Precap: Jalal see broken bangles in bed thought he misbehave with some one and thought ruqquia stay in room

Jalal shout Ruqz,

Gang masti

Ayesha ( jalal s step mom ) shout: booth booth...


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