Mayur SS: Strangers in the night Part 16/Page 27(The END) - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago
awww!! such a cute update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally mayu realized his luv lovely update thanks 4 pm me dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow yaar maja aa gya... Lol Nupur in confused state😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.

really amazing. mayu was damn happy. he was just smiling like a fool. poor nupur thought ki she kissed mayank in her dream. lol. sab nupur ki tung khich rahi hai. hehehehe.maza agaya. loved it.


Thanks Faru...

abhi to aur maza aayega
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Part 11 Realization Page 18

Part 12

Looking intently in her eyes he said, Ho to ab bhi raha hai tumko... bolo na... She tried to calm herself down but the way he was looking at her, his nearness was driving her crazy...he moved a bit closer to her and said, Jab mein tumko aise dekhta hai jese tum mujhe dekh rahi thi.. to batao na...tumko kya feel hota hai .. Her eyes get widen at his question...how could she answer the answer will blurt out some hidden feelings of hers and she cannot just spill everything out without knowing what he actually feels about her.

She got up and said , I don't know what are you talking about mein Gunjan ko dekhne jaa rahi hoo...

He stood and stopped her, But Gunjan to tumse naraz hai..don't you want to know the reason..

She turned to him and said slowly, Tum kuch bata hi kahan rahe ho..

He felt more for her seeing her cute face, he took a step towards her and said, Vo actually Nupur... suddenly his eyes fall on Samrat who was instructing him not to tell anything to Nupur...and forcing him through his action to find an excuse...he fumbled a bit and then continued

Mayank: Vo Nupur...actually kal raat jo hua uske baad Gunjan to kia..jis jis ko pata hai.. har koi yahi keh raha hai that was something not expected from you... saying he supressed his laugh

Nupur when in a thought and asked , Aur kis kis ko pata hai

Mayank: As of now me, Sam and Gunjan.

Nupur took and deep breath and said to herself, Pheww bach gaye... but in logo ko aisa kya pata jo mujhe yaad nahi..aisa kiya kia mene kal raat ko. She was still in thoughts of last night's incident when Mayank broke her trance and asked, Vese tumko yaad to hai na ki kal raat kya hua tha... He asked so intently directly looking into her eyes making her heart to jump at the greatest height. She slowly nodded her head in negative and said, Mujhe kuch bhi yaad nahi ". Somehow hearing this Mayank face fall but he regained himself and said to himself, Ooh ye to kaafi badi problem ha...

Nupur making puppy face : Aisa kyu keh rahe ho Mayank.. mene aisa kya kiya... kahin mene kuch galat to nahi ker diya.. mom dad ko pata chalega.. to mein kya... kese face karungi.. batao na.. kya mene kisi k saath bura kiya..

He continued a bit playing with her, Hmm kaafi bura... tum soch bhi nahi sakta utna bura kiya hai tumne...

She was slowly getting emotional and asked, Mene kiske saath bura kiya....

Mayank : Merr saath.. tum mere alwa aur kiske saath badla le sakti ho...

Nupur innocently : Kya kia mene

Mayank: Itne bhole style na poocha karo..Bygod.. for a sec her eyes went wide the way he delivered bygod, he continued though,' Kal raat... Mmm abhi chod dete hai.. abhi rehersal k liye chalte hai...

He turned to her and said: Chale Sam aur Gunjan k pass.. Seeing her face all guilt striken he said or rather whisper in her ear, Dont worry tumne aise bhi kuch galat nahi kiya hai ki tumko apni nazrein neechi kerni pade.. no need to feel guilty about any thing... She looked him with all hope and confirmation, he simply nodded his head as if conveying her to chill about everything. She wiped her eyes and make a way to rehearsal room

Samrat and Gunjan were standing near stereo deciding over a song when Mayank and Nupur entered the room. Gunjan tried to be angry from Nupur but seeing her sister all sad because of this, she went upto her and hugged her, Sorry Di...mujhe aise tumse baat nahi kerni chahiye thi..chalo ab hua so hua.. lekin aage se mujhe tum sab batana... Nupur just nodded her head but in mind she was wondering, By god bata to meim tujhe Gunjan but mujhe khud kuch yaad aaye to na... Mayank and Samrat were looking at the love of two sisters but then they broke their trance as they need to prepare for the party.

Samrat: Behen milap ho gaya ho to party k baare mein soche..

Nupur : Haan .. bilkul.. to kya decide kiya hai tumne..

Samrat: Haan to hum soch rahe hai ki ek ek achi performance bhi de mom dad ko apne.. to mene aur Gunjan ne ek song prepare kya hai..ek aap aur bhai ker lo..

Nupur: KYA... Her kya was actually very loud..

Gunjan: Di.. aise kyu shout jer rahi hoo... dance kerne ko bola hai Shaadi kerne ko nahi..

Nupur widen her eyes even more, Mayank couldn't resist it and said, Nupur to ye ghadi ghadi aapni aakhein itni badi kyu ker leti ho.. sahi to keh rahi hai Gunjan. He smirked while completing the last sentence keenly observed her expression, no wonder he could able to get all her expression very well.

Nupur fumbled a bit but re-gained herself and asked Samrat ,* To kya song choose kiya hai tum dono ne apne liye..

Gunjan : Hum na Di do songs to fuse kerke ker rahe hai perform, first is Pyar hua ikrar hua... and second is Jagg jhoomya thaare jesa na koi..

Mayank : Wow.. superb .. aur humare liye..I mean what about me and Nupur?

Gunjan and Samrat eyed to each other, he took the remote and put on Mayank's hands and said, Bhai vo surprise hai... aap khud hi sun lena aur practise ker lena.. ab mein aur Gunjan aapko seedha lunch per milte hai...

Nupur and Mayank both were confuse and realizing they are not left with any other option he played the music.

As soon as music chords hits Nupur's ear drums every tissue of ofher get tensed, the goosebumps reached upto their highest level and she just could not able to meet her eyes with Mayank. But yeah she can't deny the fact that lyrics were actually translating the feelings of her hearts.

Chaahe Tum Kuch Naa Kaho
Maine Sun Liya
Ke Saathi Pyaar Kaa
Mujhe Chun Liya

Mayank slowly walked towards her, taking her hand he pulled her such that she collided with his torso


Chun Liyaaa
Maine Sun Liyaa

Pehla Nasha
Pehla Khummar
Naya Pyaar Hai
Naya Intezaar
Karloo Mein Kya Apna Haal
Aye Dil-e-Bekaraar
Mere Dil-e-Bekaraar
Tu Hi Bata


He swirled her around, and here she tried not to break the contact of her eyes, a soft smile was appearing of both of their faces it seems they both were enjoying the lyrical music of the song


Pehla Nasha
Pehla Khummar


They haven't rehearsed together, but the way their feet were moving in sync with each other, it seems they don't need any rehearsals.


Udthaa Hi Fhirun
Inn Hawaaon Mein Kahin
Yaa Mein Jhool Jaun
Inn Ghattavon Mein Kahin

He twirl her around more and catch he through her waist. Not breaking the eye contact he asked her, Nupur..kya tumko yaad hai kya hua tha kal....

She nodded her head in negation.

Udthaa Hi Fhirun
Inn Hawaaon Mein Kahin
Yaa Mein Jhool Jaun
Inn Ghattavon Mein Kahin

Ek Kar Doo Aasman Aur Zameen
Kaho Yaaron Kya Karu Kya Nahi

He picked her in air and twirl once again and asks, Kuch bhi nahi.. koi glimpse bhi nahi?.

Pehla Nasha
Pehla Khummar
Naya Pyaar Hai
Naya Intezaar

She gave a thoughtful whether to share the morning dream with him or not what if her dream was real...


Karloo Mein Kya Apna Haal
Aye Dil-e-Bekaraar
Mere Dil-e-Bekaraar
Tu Hi Bata

She asked him, Was I drunk last night. To he answer he just nodded.

Pehla Nasha
Pehla Khummar


Now she was all shy cause she is pretty sure about one thing that what ever she dreamt in morning some part was certainly true..she asked him, And I came to your room last night... To her answer he again nodded his head.


Usne Baath Ki Kuch Aise Dang Se
Sapne De Gaya Hazaaron Rang Ke


He twirl her around and here she was getting red with each passing second as now she knew what she did...but still she asked, Did I said something which I shouldn't


Usne Baath Ki Kuch Aise Dang Se
Sapne De Gaya Hazaaron Rang Ke

And seeing her face Mayank also knew that she knew something... he replied,You said something which you should..and those magical words has changed my life forever..



Reh Jaaun Jaise Mein Haar Ke
Aur Choome Woh Mujhe Pyaar Se

He swirl her around and collided her back with his chest and gave a light peck on her already red crimson cheek

Pehla nasha..

Pehla khumar

Naya pyar hai naya intezaar

Karloo Mein Kya Apna Haal
Aye Dil-e-Bekaraar
Mere Dil-e-Bekaraar
Tu Hi Bata

No words were needed. She ran from there and Mayank just saw the retreating figure of hers. He knew that she knew but still he want to listen from her specially when she is in senses. Here she ran and ran she did, the dream she saw in morning was not a dream rather was reality.

She did confess her feelings to Mayank, she was feeling all so good, she was jumping...and running on the deck when she saw Rahul there, looking for her, she immediately turn and ran from there before she could caught him, she was walking very fast and was almost running.

While going she didn't realize who is coming from front and collided with him, the person himself was not ready and they both collided to a door which was open, resulting both of them to fall on the floor, however the door closed behind them and at the time Rahul passed from there saving Nupur to be seen by him.

She raised herself and without looking the person she started chanting,I am sorry I am really sorry I didn't saw who was coming from front..I am really sorry. Her head was down and she couldn't see who the person was. He gave a smile, folded his hands across his chest and said, Aisa bhala ho sakta hai ki Nupur gire aur Mayank na aaye use bachanne k liye... She abruptly raised her eyes and saw the person who has stole her heart is giving million dollar smile. She put one of her hair strand behind her and tried to run away from there. But before she could do, he grabbed her hand and pulled her towards him, clutching her waist he said,Mujhse bach ker to Tum bhaag nahi sakti...

Nupur was all red she said, Mayank chodo na please..!!

Mayank: Aise kese chod doon tumhe..aur by the way tum aise bhaagi kahan jaa rahi thi

Nupur: Vo Rahul se bachne k liye..

Listening his name, his anger rose, he hold her more tightly and said, Iss baar to mein iss Rahul k bacche ko chodunga nahi...!

Nupur thought play with him and said, Kyu aakhir kya bigada hai Rahul ne tumhara aur tumko pata hai Mom-Dad meri rishte ki baat ker rahe hai usse.

He couldn't hold his anguish and clutched her such that her back was resting against the wall and his face was at very minimal distance with her. Her breath mingled with his, her body gets goosebumps and she clutched his shirt more tightly to hold her heartbeats which were in way of coming out of her body. HE moved a bit closer to her and said in dead tone, Tum sirf meri ho.. koi haath to laga ker dikhaaye jaan se maar dunga..

A small escape came from her Mouth, Mayank.

He held her face in his hands and said, Nupur, I really really really Love You

That's it, the world stood still for both of them, last night was her drunk state but now when she heard the magical words in all senses, she wished she could be drunk again. This is too much to take, she forgot to even take breath, her heart beats again when a soft touch of feathers touched her cheek, Mayank gave a soft peck to her and said again, I love you Nupur..a lot and tum sirf aur sirf meri ho...bolo Nupur meri ho na...

How can she deny it, the way he asking her she cannot refuse, no chance to it, she simply nodded her head in agreement but he said, Nahi i want to hear those magical words.

Now red Nupur cam to her senses,Mayank kal raat ko to bola tha..

Mayank: Kya bola tha..khud to kuch yaad nahi hai...I want you to accept it

Nupur: To kerti hoon na

Mayank: To bolne mein kesi hesitation

Nupur: MAYANK

Mayank: Nupur, aaj raat tak tumne mujhe nahi kaha to mein... to mein.. I won't talk to you.. saying he left from there leaving a tense Nupur, Oh God..!! Mayank bhi na.. sab samjhta hai.. but still he wants me to say.. aur mujhe itni sharam aa rahi hai kehne mein.. please god give me strength to say those words to love of my life.. My Mayank.... She promised herself to confess him, Mayank Sharma ye Nupur Bhushan sach mein tumhari hai aur aaj raat mein saabit bhi ker dungi... She too went from there to plan their special evening.

Hope you like it
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Posted: 8 years ago
Poor nupur can't remembered anything of last night and mayank also teasing her superb dialogs and beautiful song wt nupur will do eagerly waiting for nxt dear and thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
love mayu teasing nupur. superb update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
oh wow... lovely update.. Mayank teasing Nupur... DATS MAYUR... ❤️
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Originally posted by: Peehu87

oh wow... lovely update.. Mayank teasing Nupur... DATS MAYUR... ❤️


Yes... U r right and I'll try keep that mayur as is
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pihu2june

love mayu teasing nupur. superb update.
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